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Reviews for Acciaccatura

By : crystalomnia
  • From lara5170 on July 16, 2012
    I really,really like this story and I really,really want to read more to find out what's going to happen or where this is headed. Unfortunately, I checked to see when the last chapter was posted and after seeing that it was in 2008 ... it made me really sad. Does anyone know if this story has been completed on another site or if it's just been abandoned? Since it hasn't been updated in 4 years I'm afraid that I'll never get to read more. All I can say is that I really enjoyed what I've read so far and I really want to read more of it.I hope the writer decides to continue it.
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on July 12, 2009
    Oh I hope you continue this--while it's not my favorite pairing, it's still up there in my top 5, and you treatment of Byakuya and Ichigo's characters and personalities is simply spellbinding.
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  • From ANON - masako on May 20, 2009
    Please come back i'm hanging on the edge of my seat waiting for this story. :-)

    anyways....Happy writing!
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  • From ANON - Zayroen on May 01, 2009
    simply fantastic! you MUST continue this!! please? I love how youve kept them in character, sadly enough thats rare
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  • From ANON - Synthetic on February 24, 2009
    D: I neeeed this to continue! I need it or I'll explode! Drama aside, I know that this was on hold for your writing in NaNoWriMo (congratulations on that, by the way! :OOO)but it doesn't hurt to hope that this will be continued before long? Don't crush my dreams, you cruel woman! >.>

    Begging also aside, I need to compliment you profusely for managing to keep Byakuya in character even in sexual situations. I DIDN'T THINK IT COULD BE DONE! MAGICKS! BURN THE WITCH! *brandishes torch* That was very impressive, and I absolutely love the overall feeling of this story. It makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside and I don't even know what's going to happen yet! (aside from the inevitable hawt secks)

    Here's to hot Bleach bishies, yes? I'll definitely be stalking this story. :D
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  • From ANON - jermaina on December 26, 2008
    it was so hot! i loved the last chapter x> how much more chapters are you planing to write?
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  • From YamiBakura on December 01, 2008
    is this finished?

    No?

    .... WELL THEN PLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSEEEEE FINISH IT SOOOOON?! I absolutely ADORE Byakuya/Ichigo, and you hammered the nail on the head so hard that it splintered. I can't believe it was so short! ;e;
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  • From ANON - Pickle Reviver on November 06, 2008
    Ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha..ahahaaaaa *blood is oozing out of her nose*
    Dammit, I think I need a bucket. x_x

    Oh PLEASE do carry on with this amazing story. DROOL
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  • From enslavementthesis on September 30, 2008
    It seems that you've hit the small wall that most writer's seem to hit when they begin rewriting something that they hadn't written in a long time.

    That is, they've kind of lost the original subtext that they began with. She isn't being nasty - hell, she's done the exact same thing with her stories, so she knows exactly what it's like to get back into something that you haven't written in a while, and, in looking at it from that slightly different perspective, unconsciously shift the original path of the fiction. The mood has changed a little.

    She isn't saying that the chapter was bad at all. It seemed a tiny bit rushed, but it was still well written and enjoyable, it's just that Byakuya has seemed to have changed his tune a little bit, and the story reflects that.

    However, please don't take that to mean that she didn't enjoy the new chapter, because the opposite is true. Indeed, she's rather ecstatic that one of her favourite fictions has seen an update.
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  • From Queeny on September 28, 2008
    Byakuya is a real jerk.... but.. fun..
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  • From ANON - masako on September 22, 2008
    this is the first bleach fic i have read and i really like it. i can't wait to read more of your story. Happy Writing!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jonokai on September 22, 2008
    AWESOME!! you rock.. sorry it took me so long to comment >.> anyway it was a lot of fun helping and the end product was better still!
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on August 18, 2008
    Please tell me Byakuya is going to get a tast of his own medicen later? Either through some other party, or from Ichigo? Though it would also be really satisfying if Byakuaya fell in love with Ichigo after all that, and A) Ichigo is badly hurt making him realise it, or B) Ichigo finds out about his plan and leaves him heartbroken, and trying to win him back. Oooo I'd so love that, I love tormenting basterds. ^^ Very good so far, I can't wait for more.
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  • From Aresy on June 25, 2008
    I really like this. Congrats, you got them IC!! Especially Bya. Ichi could be more defensive, but its hard to really write about him being in love i think, so I think you did a good job. You shift tenses a little bit, not all the time, but for example whe you write: He met Byakuya’s eyes and shakes his head hard, speechless. You used :met: with :shakes:, so it would sound better if you chose either past or present. You do that a little bit again with Bya thoughts and comments that he makes to himself, but i'm not sure if that was just the style of your writing there. Anyways, I really enjoyed this!!! Keep going!!
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  • From Gnat on June 16, 2008
    I find myself really enjoying this. Byakuya has Ichigo stretched taut and keeps tightening and tightening, it really makes me want to know what's going to happen later. Ichigo is still very much himself, even when almost giving in to the nervousness and fear he has about love. Byakuya's inner thoughts are just so laughably mean XD So gimme more! ...You know, please.
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