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Reviews for A Shadow of What Was

By : katami
  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2008
    i don't like this version or part of kisuke very much... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!
    ASOTA
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  • From ANON - amcarche on May 08, 2008
    Thanks. This chapter does explain a lot. I was beginning to wonder why Kisuke just outright rejected Ichigo.
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  • From UrbanPhoenix on May 08, 2008
    You...are leaving for a week or so....YOU ARE KILLING ME HERE! Seriously this is the best Urahara/Ichigo I've read on AFF. I like how Benihime cares deeply for what happens to Ichigo and how he affected Urahara. I also like her discomfort with the former Urahara, it shows just how much he has come from his time in the Soul Society. It also shows, just how stupid the captain can be/were/are in the Soul Society. That is...until Ichigo came along.

    What I am interested in is 'Hat-and-clogs' feelings on how he pushes Ichigo into being a captain, like you mentioned in Mizuno POV last chapter.

    P.S. I'm not real big on the Ura/Ichi/Grim threesome I'm a strict Urahara/Ichigo fan, but the Byakuya/Ulquiorra pairing is working with me. I like their interaction after the battle.

    Keep up the good work and hopefully more chapters come out soon!


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  • From ANON - meshala101 on May 05, 2008
    oh my gosh where do they go from here (sniffles) poor ichigo, poor kisuke. loved chapter 30, 31 tore at my heart, both chaps were written really well. I wonder how ichigo is going to manage having kisuke so close and yet unable to be with him. (sigh) keep up the good work and try not to leave us in suspense for too long.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2008
    oh!!! now both ichigo and kisuke are miserable!!! kisuke won't really let ichigo go, will he? and does reincarnated kisuke have feelings for ichigo too?? i hope so!! i don't want this to end in more heartbreak... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
    ASOTA
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  • From ANON - amcarche on May 05, 2008
    So sad. I feel terrible for the both of them. Especially Ichigo. He's been waiting all these years, and then he gets his heart crushed. *tear* But! It was very well written.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2008
    well... byakuya switched from izuru to the ex-espada REALLY fast... is he EASY?!?!?! jk... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
    ASOTA
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  • From ANON - Shiruy on May 03, 2008
    Hey, you made it sound as if I were against Ichigo/Kisuke/Grimmjow! XD But whatever. Well, the one threesome you hinted at was obviously Shirosaki/Benihime/Zangetsu, but I wonder who else you're planning to pair up. From what I've read I'd guess at an Byakuya/Ulquoirra pairing, but they both seem too stiff to let anyone else into the mix. Renji and Uryuu's relationship is was too established to let anyone else into the mix and right now, I can't think of anyone who'd fit in anyway. Who's left then? Hmmmm... Jyuushiro/Shunsui/Yoruichi? Well, it seems like I will have to keep guessing. Give me a hint? *grin* Well, on to the chapter itself:

    You know, the whole time I read this I didn't stop chuckling once. I really, really like this unexpected twist you put on Ulquoirra and Byakuya, I never would have thought those two would get along so well. But all the little mentions of Ichigo tending to Urahara made me itch for the next chapter, I soooo want to know what happens with them! When Urahara takes over he'd obviously remember Ichigo, but young Kisuke would have no idea or at least would be completely freaked out by his sudden attraction to Kurosaki, so I can't see that situation straightening itself out without a conflict. And Ichigo's still drugged... *sense of foreboding* But, hmm.. he managed to leave Kisuke's reincarnation alone for all these years, makes me wonder whether he will continue to hold back and to try and avoid inadvertently forcing the young Kisuke into anything.
    And I wish Gin would manage to break free from whatever's keeping him at Aizen's side. The last chapter made me kinda like him and noone deserves to be under Aizen-bastards control.
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  • From ANON - amcarche on May 03, 2008
    I do believe I sense the beginnings of something.....
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  • From ANON - jo on May 02, 2008
    Oh? Is this a byakuya/ulquiorra pairing I sense? They're actually well suited for each other when you think about it though...
    Anyway, I hope the next chapter is about how the young Kisuke responds to being with Ichigo XD I can't wait!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2008
    have they captured gin??? poor gin... poor kisuke... poor ichigo... CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
    ASOTA
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  • From ANON - amcarche on May 01, 2008
    I really like these different point of view chapters. Especially with Gin. He's supposed to be a bad guy...but I...like him.
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  • From ANON - Shiruy on May 01, 2008
    Short but deliciously exciting. Gah, and although it's great and I like Gin's point of view - I wish he were able to give up on Aizen - I sooo want to go back to Kisuke's point of view. Or Ichigo's. Or maybe even Byakuya and Ulquiorra's, 'cause that would be very interesting, too. *grin* Anyway, from what I've seen so far it seems like Aizen is losing - I hope that proves true! It would suck if they were to drive the Espada back only to find out that they took Kisuke with them. >__< But Ichigo wouldn't let that happen, right? Right. He'd sooner rip a hole in reality himself and follow them into Hueco Mundo.
    Oh, I also really liked that Grimmjow jumped in to defend Kisuke! The older Urahara would probably hate it, but the young Kisuke seems like he would be thankful. I really like the sorta-friends-caretaker relationship you had those two develop. (But only as long as this stays an Ichigo/Kisuke! XD Don't want Grimmjow to get mixed up in that, although... wait. Forget what I just said. That would be extremely hot! XD)
    Well, I can't wait for an update! You're doing a fantastic job with this story. ^__^

    Shiruy
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  • From ANON - verily on April 30, 2008
    Beautiful chapter.
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  • From ANON - meshala101 on April 30, 2008
    No! how could you end it there, that was beyond cruel. Ichigo finally makes an appearance,he finally reaches his beloved kisuke, the two former lovers embrace (well one falls into a state of unconsciousness but it was still sweet all the same) and then ?. (My point exactly) You are such a horrible person, a gifted writer, but a horrible person. I still loved the chapter, despite the horrible ending. I can't wait for ch 28, I bet it's going to be good ;)
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