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Reviews for A Shadow of What Was

By : katami
  • From Irana on June 20, 2008
    Oh wow. Shattered Shaft. Poor Kisuke. I'll be glad when all the bits of himself integrate, I think he'll like Urahara/himself a whole lot better then. He really is missing some very important things. *giggles at Ichigo* Why do I et the feeling he's running from a desire spike in their reiatsu?

    I like the breather chapters... stories just aren't as good without the background I think. As usual hon, a brill chapter.
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  • From ANON - Erin on June 19, 2008
    Aww this chpater was so so cute! I like the interraction between them all, this should be intresting! I look forward to seeing Kisuke in kendo practice! I wonder if him and Ichigo will meet again any time soon?
    Lol, by the way, I loved Kisuke's line about calculating Pi, out to the 16th decimal! That is so so Kisuke isn't it?
    Well done, and I look forward to reading what comes next!
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  • From ANON - acmarache on June 19, 2008
    Grimmjow is such a cute kitty. Isshin and Jyuushiro? Hah! I knew Jyuushiro wasn't so innocent! It's always the good ones you have to watch out for. If Jyuushiro has fooled everyone this long, then Shunsui doesn't have a chance in fooling him.
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  • From Irana on June 19, 2008
    *hugs* Writing Demonstration frightens me too, so we're on the same wavelength there.

    I cannot tell you how much I grin like a little girl every time I see Grimmjow and Shunsui interact. I get this little thrill of pleasure and my mouth smiles before I know it's going to move. And the nickname! *purrs in pleasure* Grimmjow would kill me, but "Kitten" is so very much the nickname I have in mind for him, and Shunsui calling him Kitty just makes my day. Guaranteed grin right there. I'm guessing this is the upcoming threesome that AJS won the prize for? because really, the way Shunsui and Grimm interact it could lead only one place, and with him being with Ukitake, well...

    I was grinning through this entire chapter, it was brilliant!
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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on June 19, 2008
    And now for another rousing game of poke the kitty. Which is *almost* as much fun as playing poke the Suit. Hehehehe. Great work.
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  • From ANON - Seori on June 17, 2008
    LOL!!LOL!!!LOL!!!LOL!!! Leave it to Shunsui to call Grimmjow Kitty Cat. LOL!!! Thank you for the update!!
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  • From ANON - Erin on June 17, 2008
    WoW!I loved this chapter so so so much, it was amazing! I loved seeing any kind of interaction between Kisuke and Ichigo before the story,and before all the trouble. The amount of trust that they show in each other here is so beautiful. Does that mean that Kon knew from then then? Wow, he kept a secret huh lol?
    The end was really cute as! I am glad that you were able to get over your writers block, and I look forward to seeing what happend next!
    Thanks for writing ^_^
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  • From ANON - AJS on June 17, 2008
    Mommy!Grimmjow is just so CUTE!! *sparkly eyes*.

    Congradulations on your victory over the writer's block! It's nice to see your work again. This was a very nice chapter - it's interesting to see how - how capable Kisuke is when he's not running on fear and anger. It's interesting to see the boy without the shadow of the Captain looming behind him. And, of course, teh smut was hwt *drools*. My current guess for the threesome is Jyn/Shun/Grim - but then again, I could be mistaken. For some reason, the thought of Grim and Yourichi meeting fills me with shudders - two kitties in the same room?

    It's interesting, seeing Kisuke's interestiong with his past self(s). I'd think he'd get on much better with Hat-and-Clogs; the two of them are much more ocmpatable. But - its interesting, seeing his relationship with the Captain. You know, if the two of them ever teamed up - worked together - they'd be something to see. And a face-to-face confrontation - any plans for Kisuke to enter his inner world any time soon? ("There's THREE of me?!" "Four, if you count Benehime." "Who?" *Sigh*.)
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  • From OrochiGreel on June 17, 2008
    Umm...are you going to pair Shunsui together with Grimmjow?
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  • From Irana on June 17, 2008
    "Why don't you and I get our young friend some breakfast, Kitty Cat? Jyuushiro can keep an eye on Kisuke," purred Shunsui, his brown eyes sparkling with merriment. Eeeeee! *happy squee*

    This chapter? Wow. *Utterly speechless other than that*

    BTW, thanks for reading and commenting on demonstration.
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  • From ANON - acmarache on June 16, 2008
    So hot. I love it when you write smut. I love Shunsui and Ukitake together. They're so hilarious.
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  • From Irana on June 14, 2008
    ROTHFMAO!!! Yay!!!! I was wondering how long Ichigo and Renji both would be able to hold their tempers. Ichigo especially because of the three currently sharing his body. Somehow I'm not surprised Ishida managed to not be a part of the 'chat' with Kurotshuchi. Nor am I surprised by his response to being their 'alibi'. And I simply love, love, love the reiatsu thing. It made me smile like a big goofy dork.

    I've got to say, I'm really pleased with the way you're handling this. You've got so many relationships to develop, plot to keep flawless and humor to inject and I really do think you're doing a beautiful job. Trust me, I know how difficult building a story like this can be and how frustrating it can get. *hugs you*
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  • From remyjames on June 12, 2008
    I just want to hold Ichigo so badly. I can't imagine how painful this is for him. I hope he catches a break soon. One hundred chapters you say? You're no even at the halfway mark yet and I'm getting all antsy for potential pairs (and surprisingly, more Gin)
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  • From ANON - Erin on June 12, 2008
    Bless, I loved this chapter! The fact that there is a little merging between Ichigo and Kisuke has to be some kind of good sign surely?
    Also, beat up the captain of th 12th all you like, I am sure everyone would give you an alibi for that^_^
    Thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - acmarache on June 12, 2008
    You mean you aren't supposed to abusively throw throw pillows? Oops. I'm so glad Renji helped Ichigo get that bastard Kurosutchi back.
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