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Reviews for A Shadow of What Was

By : katami
  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on July 23, 2008
    Ah, Kat, my dearest, have I mentioned lately how much I love you? PLEASE make Uryuu drag the sniveling little wench out of the house by her hair.
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  • From ANON - AJS on July 22, 2008
    Fallout! Whee! I love the 'ominous' sound of that word; figure it's a harbringer for something more! And Hat-and-Clogs! Awake! Orihime taken for justice before the ranks of the (earthbound) shinigami! Her reaction upon staring Kisuke full in the face and realizing exactly what - and who - he is! Whee! Such fun!

    Babbling! Can't help myself! this story is just so SQUUEEE on occasion!

    Shared dreams? Past memories? Can't wait to see what's up with our favorite duo; oh! Maybe it'll be a shared dream where they remember a past event! Or something like that.

    "What are you doing in my dream?"
    "It's not your dream, it's mine. Want to have sex?"
    "What?! Hey - get your hand out of there! What do you think you're doing?"
    "Molesting you, of course. Because I'm insanely attracted to you, you know, and you're just a dream, so I can do what I want! So there! Nah!"

    Now the trick is to figure out who's saying what...

    Really, I'd like to thank you for this chapter. Long day today - I really needed it.
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  • From Irana on July 22, 2008
    Oh I agree with you on Shirosaki. I don't think he's evil at all. He reminds me of a precocious child... they are the way they are because they are too damned intelligent and don't have enough challenging things to do to keep them occupied. Everyone and everything has darkness. Part of being alive I think.

    He nodded, slowly straightening, his blue eyes growing cold and hard. He might not enjoy the task he had set for himself but it had to be done. No one threatened the people he loved. A Quincy looked after his own and he had made these Shinigami his. Consider yourself snogged near blind for that para. that is so very much the Uryuu in my head.

    *dances with glee* You totally made my day with this. I'm so looking forward to seeing that spineless, self-centered bitch get her comeuppance.
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  • From ANON - remyjames on July 22, 2008
    Somebody's about to get a beat down. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Irana on July 21, 2008
    He was almost ready to shake the bastard awake just to make it stop raining in his stupid king's soul.
    *dies laughing* Not because he cares about Ichigo or anything, just because he wants it to stop raining already!

    They were both creatures of power and they were all his, thought Shirosaki, delighting in the knowledge. Have I mentioned how much I adore Shirosaki's voice? You write him beautifully, every inch himself yet so much more mature about it.

    And I adore the fact that he knows something they don't know, and that it was their coupling that woke old 'Hat-and-Clogs' up. Here's hoping he stays awake and begins to pull all the parts of his soul together inside Kisuke.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2008
    omg! hat-n-clogs is AWAKE? yeah!!!
    ASOTA
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  • From ANON - remyjames on July 20, 2008
    That was awesome!
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  • From ANON - AJS on July 20, 2008
    Yay! Zanpakto-Hollow smut! HAWT smut *grins, before blinking thoughtfully.* Does that count as beastiality? I mean, if Shiro's a hollow - then again, neither of them are human, so - forgive me, I'm rambling.

    Hat-and-Clogs is waking up? That's - interesting. And informative - while I share a certain fondness for our dear, adorable Mizuno, I'd quite like to see what happens when Getaboshi - when Kisuke - wakes up fully. I'd image he'd actually be rather content to let Mizuno take the reins - he knows that his life is over, that he's little more then a memory - I actually think he'd get on quite well with all his various parts. Then again, it's my pet theory that they two of them are actually slowly merging - and that the Captain, were he allow himself to display even a bit of weakness, would find the boundaries between himselves blurring to form a single individual.

    My, my - I bet Kisuke and Ichigo are going to have some interesting dreams...
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  • From ANON - Erin on July 16, 2008
    I was wondering where you had gone! Man, checking an essay that took a month to do, in 2 days, I would ask for a lot of chocolate for that one! Its really nice of you to do something like that, and I hope you survive July and real life calms down a little!
    I loved this chapter, because these two really are fun to read about. Lol, poor Ichigo in the next room, if he heard any of that, I wonder what his reaction would be? One of mental scarring, even if he knows that those two are somewhat promiscous ^_^
    Brilliant chapter, look forward to the next one when you have time!
    Thanks for writing as always!
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  • From Irana on July 15, 2008
    *happy sigh*
    So bloody beautiful!

    *giggles* And yes, there will be more of the ever so wrong story I still cannot believe I am writing.
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  • From on July 15, 2008
    I'm alright with postponing an Orihime beat down as long as you keep making more Renji Ishida smut lol.
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  • From ANON - acmarache on July 09, 2008
    Very enjoyable. Especially the part about throw pillows and desks. Silly boys.
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  • From ANON - Erin on July 09, 2008
    Three chapters since I last checked! The sparring between Kisuke and Ichigo was so so fantastic, I loved how you did that, and how it made Ichigo so much happier, and maybe helped Mizuno just a little as well?
    Bless Gin, I adore that guy, he is nice at heart, somewhere, in the fact that he didn't kill her. The fact that they have Urahara's notes now is bad, very bad, and the fact that Orihim betrays them...I don't mind much considering I don't actually like her that much anyway!
    Thanks for all the updates, as always, I'm excited to see what happens next! Thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on July 09, 2008
    For some reason, I can picture Uryuu getting upset over his throw pillows being on the receiving end of Ichigo's . . . uh . . . enthusiasm.
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  • From SirynsMagick on July 09, 2008
    Kurotsuchi will never learn will he. Ishida will most likely kill him in the near future if Ichigo, Renji, or Kisuke don't beat him to it (or just plain beat him). And the desk and the throw pillow.... LOL! Please continue this oh so perfect story.

    Ryn
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