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Reviews for A Shadow of What Was

By : katami

From ANON - AJS on September 30, 2008
Lovely chapter. I especially adored how - how insecure Kisuke was, but still willing to take a chance, willing to risk being hurt so he could spend some time with Ichigo. He was willing to bring down several of his own defenses against being hurt, cautiously peering out from behind his sheilds - and for Kisuke, trust is an extremely precious commodity.

I keep wondering if it was Mizuno who initiated that sexual undertaking, or if HnC had a hand in it. I'd prefer to think not; I think that Mizuno's begun assimilating memories much more quickly now that HnC is awake. He's started refering to Urahara's actions as his own - hesitantly picking up the pieces of his past life and begining to call them his own. I think - or I'd like ot think - that while HnC might have shared in the experience, it was Mizuno who was there, who let it happen.

Otherwise - well. It's going to be an utter mess. The poor kid's already screwed up from the dream already - having it re-enacted in the flesh isn't going to be pleasent for him. Plus - well, this incarnation was a virgin, right? No matter how much he enjoyed it, he's going to be a bit traumatized - and I think several people are going to want to give Ichigo a kick in the ass over the mess he's engendering.

You know, I've been wondering. Kisuke's out and about - what does that mean for the poor guard Grimmjow threatened beforehand Nothing good, I'd wager...
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From Irana on September 29, 2008
Gah! I hate that my review f=got cut off too, it was a good long one. *pouts* I adored the Byakuya/Ulquorria chapter to pieces. So many spots in it just made me smile. *mutters about stupid brain obviously messing up the coding* There were also a great deal of things I loved about the chapter after, not the least of which was the fact that Shirosaki beat the hell out of Inoue and his understanding with Hat N Clogs. The last line in particular tickled the hell out of me.

I really should have emailed you for a list of your favorite kinks, as this story has quite a lot of them and is insisting on being more than a mere one shot. I think I'll do that anyway, just to make sure I haven't put in something that squicks you.

"Gods above and below, you two are hopeless," muttered Yoruichi, stalking past them and giving Kisuke a shove so that the younger man stumbled into him. "Just trip already." The very first part of that sentence is one of my favorite expressions. It tickles me that Yoruichi uses it here, because that's exactly what I would have said in her place.

Thanks for the angst warning btw. It let me brace myself in advance. And damn, am I glad I did. That last bit hurt. Please tell me you'll be updating with another chapter soon, and that it won't take them long to fix this.
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From moonglaive on September 29, 2008
Wow. That was like forgetting to breathe for too long, then becoming light-headed, then just when gasping for much needed air, having it knocked out completely. Finally, followed by Oh, shi-
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From ANON - ichkak on September 26, 2008
Had a really yuck week at work and stumbled on this site and your story. I have read the entire thing over a couple of days and found a great release from the stress of work by reading a few chappies each day. It really is awesome reading and I thank you for sending me to bed with dreams of smexy guys. Loved Grimm and your cat references - brilliant. One question however, where my translations come from Ishida is a first name and Uryuu being the family name? Always enjoyed an IchigoxKisuke pairing, but preferred Byakuya instead somehow - anyway you may well convert me!
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From dkf on September 26, 2008
w00t more Gin soon X3. And this was quite the funny chapter.
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From moonglaive on September 24, 2008
I really love they way you portray Shirosaki. Your Urahara makes me giggle so much too XD
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From Irana on September 24, 2008
And wow, did I get behind. *hugs* Sorry love, life has been kicking my butt hard. You know this means this will be a monster comment right? Oh, and I hope you don't mind original fic smut, cause none of the boys wanted to work with me.

He had begun the evening by thrusting a dozen pink roses at the captain of the Sixth...
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From ANON - Darkephoenix on September 24, 2008
Hahahah. Oh yes, Shirosaki is certainly one to talk about being batshit insane. Lovely, dear.
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From dkf on September 21, 2008
Awe. Poor foxy baby.
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From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2008
that's truly sad... i hope someone can save gin...
ASOTA
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From SirynsMagick on September 19, 2008
I feel sorry for Gin. He has to put up with Aizen-teme and spill blood he doesn't want to. I hope he gets to be free eventually.

Thanks for the update. Ganbatte.

Ryn
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From OrochiGreel on September 19, 2008
Poor Gin! He's right Mayuri Kurotsuchi is a freak. Just the thought Gin sleeping with someone like Kurotsuchi makes me shiver.
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From moonglaive on September 19, 2008
Poor Gin ;_;

This made me incredibly sad.... Good job :D
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From ANON - Darkephoenix on September 12, 2008
Bwahahahahaha! Poor Rukia, she'll need therapy for the next century after this one. Fabulous as always, dear. (next chapter of the Pact is up btw)
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From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2008
(^ I think it cut off my review for some reason) Byakuya and Ulquiorra are so precious together! =^-^= there needs to be more! But I suppose I like everbody else too... :/ what a conundrum.
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