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Reviews for A Shadow of What Was

By : katami
  • From ANON - Lanen on October 22, 2008
    Ah, just wanted to say....you're God. I've just spent like 24 hours reading all 73 chapters and now the terrible part, waiting lol. The emotions are incredible and even with similar porn stuff, its different enough to still have me reading and not caring after 73 chapters. I normally don't like multi-pairing stories because of lack of focus, but you have me trained so I'm now on the random schedule and loyal lol. So please give yourself an extra pat for being a good writer because one of the ways I judge an author, regardless on my personal taste, is able to impart and /or change my view on something. Some examples, I have never had an interest in main character/hollow relationships, let alone the characters you picked to do your dirty work lol. I would have NEVER picked up a story that had Byakuya/Ulquiorra in it and now its incredibly sexy. The only threesome I've ever liked in Bleach was Ukitake/Shunsui/Nanao.......I now want Kitty threesome lol. Not Kitten, but Kitty. Grimmjow now looks nothing like standard but I don't mind. Another pat there. Ok, here's my surprising(ok not really) sadistic side coming out. I actually miss the insane Ichigo. Terrible huh? The hollow beat up shit moments aren't really doing it for me. I miss the violent Ichigo the Captain, the possible killing tool of Aizen. With Benihime setting up shop in Ichigo's world she can't be leaving even with the bridge there. I'd really like to know how she merged Ichigo and Kisuke. The red in Ichigo's eyes and spirit power can be explained because of the merge. But is she really operating out of two areas or just hosting off of Ichigo? I guess I feel like there was more to the pact Beni and Ichigo made than was said or known. My imagination goes a little crazy here, but I keep waiting for that final secret that has Ichigo shit deep in Urahara that Ichigo has told no one about. Like Ichigo and Urahara combined in Ichigo taking out Aizen or something. I of course want Ichigo to end up with Kisuke, but I have to say that early on I was almost certain of Ichigo's death so I was seriously concerned about their future together. Oh yeah, when did Grimmjow accept Ichigo's courtship of Kisuke and develop a pack mind set with Ichigo in it? I felt like that got skipped over. Sorry that was a mass review from all 73 chapters. Looking forward to more!!!
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  • From cutsycat on October 15, 2008
    Ok, so I just finished reading this story from chapter 1 to now with a break before work in between and I have to say, I want more!!!
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  • From dkf on October 14, 2008
    Aw. Three old friends...
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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on October 13, 2008
    Dear gods, I love Ryuuken: miserable, evil, egomaniacal, uptight, rotten, bastard that he is.
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  • From Irana on October 13, 2008
    *grins* Yes well, believe it. I'm not very good with flattery for flattery's sake, so when I say something, its usually exactly what I'm feeling. And I'm very, very glad to hear that... I'm also looking forward to the making up part.

    And as Kisuke burst into laughter Isshin thought he just might hug Ryuuken. Yup... right there with Isshin.

    I adore the way Isshin explained things to Kiskue. Hopefully he'll take it to heart or at the very least take more time on his own to consider exactly what that means. I'm still really worried about Ichi though... I'll be glad to see how he's doing.
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  • From Tellkalia on October 12, 2008
    This story was a bad influence on me, as I had to start reading it and then couldn't stop until I got to the end of the latest chapter...So going to be a zombie tomorrow but it was worth it ^.^
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  • From dkf on October 10, 2008
    Awe, poor Ulqui. Whose name I will never ever spell right and am not going to try to
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  • From Irana on October 09, 2008
    Byakuya stared at the shambles that had been made of his room.Well hell. It doesn't appear Rukia took the revelation too well.

    He knew that whatever it might have grown into had died though when the pale figure of Ulquiorra Schiffer had slipped from his quarters. Fuck. You know I want to cry now right? I mean seriously... just, damn.

    "Go after him when this is over, Byakuya. He has been good for you." Yes! Okay that significantly helped my blurry vision. *smooches Hitsugaya* Well... momentarily anyway before I got all teary eyed again. When I grow up, I wanna write like you. *nods* I wanna make people get all teary eyed too.
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  • From ANON - amcarche on October 07, 2008
    It feels so good to be back! I can't get over how cute a confused Grimmjow is. Jyuushiro and Shunsui are going to have a lot of fun with that kitty. I almost feel bad for Grimm. Almost. Poor, poor Ichigo. He and Kisuke always have to deal with so much shit in their lives. But, the trials always make the happy ending that much sweeter (and the sex is hotter XD)!!
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  • From Afrieal on October 04, 2008
    oh gods *twin giggles* if he's anything like Siggy after we adopted Missy (our cats) there's gonna be trouble i've never seen a more protective animal than a male feline with parental instincts and it's kitten/cub. Thanks for the update, giggle and keep up the great work

    Affie, Rysh, Yamma-Jii and the felines (that act like hollows on crack)
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  • From Irana on October 04, 2008
    Okay just so you know, I nearly fell out my chair laughing at the first bit of your author's note. Totally wasn't expecting that. I thought "she didn't" then read it again and thought "omg, she did!". I'm just glad you enjoyed it. This story of yours has been such a joy and a pleasure, I just wanted you to know I appreciate the work you do on it.

    Have I mentioned how much I adore your Grimmjow? Because really, I do. He didn't want to relax. He wanted his fucking kitten. and Where the fuck was the kitten? He was supposed to understand these lunatics.

    Together they wouldn't have even had to struggle to take what they wanted from him. Poor Grimmkitty, not understanding that dude, these people are so not like Aizen, or the other crazy Espeda. They want you to give it to them hon, they don't want to take it.

    Hell of a lot of fallout for three little words. I wonder how Grimmjow will react if/when Kisuke tells him he ran because Ichigo said he loved him. And how Kisuke will react to hearing that Grim and Ichi got into a fight, and Ichigo basically let Grimmjow beat the hell out of him until Shirosaki took over.


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  • From on October 04, 2008
    I kinda like this story, but damn Grim in this really annoys me. He's generally someone I like, but I'm sorry to say you make me dislike him. Heh, oh well at least I like Ishida and Renji still.
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  • From ichkak on October 04, 2008
    These poor souls are very messed up. You write this so well. I'm sitting here wanting to know where Grimms kitten has run off to and give all three a big hug!
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  • From ANON - amcarche on October 01, 2008
    hehehe...hello again! I finally get my crap in line and get online only to find many more wonderful chapters! I love the new developments. Between Byakuya and Ulquirra, Ichigo and Kisuke and the threesome, I'm not sure which one I'm more excited about. Who am I kidding? I'm a sucker for Ichigo and Kisuke together. *drools* Well, not that I'm back, hopefully I'll stay back!
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  • From ANON - ichkak on September 30, 2008
    Ahhh I wanna cry! Poor Ichigo.
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