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Reviews for A Shadow of What Was

By : katami
  • From Irana on December 17, 2008
    The human was his! His kitten! His pride mate! His! And he held onto what was his. No one stole from Grimmjow Jeagerjaques! Not anymore! Not without paying for it in blood and pain. There was very little twenty years with Aizen had left him with beyond his rage; but now he had this - a pride mate, of sorts. And he would not loose it! He had lost enough! Oh gods. Christ, poor Kitty.

    For once he was going to get some answers, he decided. Oh boy. Something tells me what he finds won't be exactly what he expects. Here's hoping he doesn't run across Jyuu and Shun while they're still pissed off about what was done to him in Las Noches.
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  • From ANON - Alex on December 16, 2008
    Oh my god, I think you just melted my brain. I absolutely adore this story, it's one of the best fanfics I've read in a very long time. Your character portrayals are spot on, and there are very few spelling or grammar mistakes, if there were any at all. I'm not entirely sure there were mistakes, I just marathoned the entire story, so I really can't remember any specific points. I must admit that as much as I love Ichigo and Kisuke's interactions, I think I really love Ukitake, Shunsei, and Grimmjow. And thank you for the last chapter, I think the three of them might be my favorite pairing at the moment. Not that I don't love Ichigo and Kisuke, it's just unbearable sad to see Kisuke scared of Ichigo. Anyways, if you don't update before the holidays, have a very merry Christmas and a happy New Year's Eve!
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  • From ANON - PeaKay on December 11, 2008
    Have to say it again: GREAT STORY!! and WONDERFUL WRITING!!! Thank the Muse for the chapter and hope you get caught up on sleep. Wonderful reading for the odd thing of a 'snow day' in the deep South (Louisiana near I-10/I-12 so rather far for snow) ... laptops that run on batteries for a time also help but your story saved the very cold, power-less, and work-less day so thanks with this too. /hug keep up the great work and please keep on sharing it :)
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  • From Irana on December 10, 2008
    I have to say, I knew I was going to enjoy this chapter from the first paragraph. Especially this bit here: He had also secured a single red rose and a tome on warfare that he thought might please the Arrancar.

    There was a tiny flash of surprise from the two men across the way and Byakuya glanced coolly at them, daring them to comment. Both wisely chose to remain silent. *snerk* Not much they could say anyway given their relationship with the only other Arrancar around. Except maybe wish him luck.

    Both men were coldly furious, more angry than Byakuya had ever seen them before; You know, if I didn't hate Aizen so much I might almost - almost mind - feel sorry for him. As it is, I can't help wondering who is going to get to him first, and if there will be anything left of him for the others who want a piece of him.

    "Natural born Hollows are the closet thing you will find to nobility within Hueco Mundo, although they are accorded no rank or privilege. Holy fuck! Grimmkitty's nobility! No wonder he's so damn arrogant. *seethes even more at Aizen's treatment of him and that stupid fucking system that let them abuse each other*

    And how many of them would ever be able to collect the pound of flesh due them? My thoughts exactly. I really like the last paragraph... it lets me hope more people will become aware that Gin does not follow Aizen willingly. And only you and one other could make me like Ichimaru Gin, damn you. *hugs*
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  • From satterb on December 10, 2008
    I just LOVE Ulquiorra! I feel your character developement for him is "dead on". Look forward to the next chapter...hopefully the one where Byakuya gets some alone time with him.
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  • From vbruce on December 10, 2008
    Ah, thank you for the almost birthday present, dear. Poor Grimmy. Excellent as always.
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  • From AnselaJonla on December 09, 2008
    This fic gets better every time I read it. I love it. Keep going, please.
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  • From ANON - PeaKay on December 08, 2008
    Oh boy oh boy, this is getting even BETTER! Can't wait till the next chapter. Got some great things going on here. Very good, as in GREAT, writing. Story lines are kept up. Love the couples. Worth the 2nd reading ... maybe a 3rd even. Thanks a ton for the work you are doing and sharing it with us.
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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on December 03, 2008
    Can't wait for the fun that is to be had at lovely Ryuuken's expense. Should be a blast. Hopefully no one ends up on the business end of his arrows. Kisuke will get things sorted in his own head, I have faith in him. Excellent as always, dear. Hope life is going well for you.
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  • From Irana on December 03, 2008
    *hugs* Good to know. I figured it was life getting in the way... that seems to be happening with everyone.

    It is so good to have Kisuke back in his hat. *grins* Nothing says Urahara like the geta - boshi. You know, somehow I figured that was where he would end up... after all, that's the place Ichigo himself disappeared to for a month when he was trying to learn to control Shirosaki.

    "I noticed Benihime at his hip," murmured Shinji. "Can he wield her?" My first thought here was "Attack him and find out. Even if he's forgotten, the other parts of him haven't, and sense memory is a bitch. Yeah, my mind is odd.

    "Are we taking bets on your chances of survival?" asked Shinji with a delighted grin.

    "I'll just tell him it was your idea," quipped Isshin...     *rolls on the floor laughing* Oh gods and stars. Poor Shinji. Should be interesting to see if this can shake Ichigo out of his funk though.
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  • From SirynsMagick on December 02, 2008
    Ahh!! Ishida, Ishida, Ishida. What to do with Mr. Sews All interior decorator. That was a dun read and I will assume Renji is late for his shift now. LOL. Please update soon.

    Ganbatte!!
    Ryn
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2008
    i wonder how much of that ichigo heard? UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! is kisuke now one with the captain and hat-n-clogs?
    ASOTA
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  • From Irana on November 29, 2008
    *dies laughing atthe last line* Well, now Ishida has a reason to redo the couch. *smirk*

    Good to see you posting hon. Was getting worried.
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  • From ANON - PeaKay on November 29, 2008
    Oh, don't bang your head, or at least not hard on a nice soft place mat on the table. Tell the Muse that this story is loved and thank you again for writing it. Really hooked bad. Left wanting to see how Grimm reacts to getting cared for, how long it's going to take Kisuke to seek out Ichigo (and his lack of 'life' due to the fear shown by Kisuke), how most are going to take what Rukia is up to, and several other peeps/couples. Thanks for the weekend gift of another chapter :) Just starting to re-read it and noted the 78th, so thanks for the weekend gift and I do mean it. Thank You!
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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on November 29, 2008
    Wheeeee! Quincy smut! Mmmmmm, yummy Uryuu and Renji. Love them as a couple. Excellent as always dear.
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