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By : Gnat
  • From Rockyshores on March 20, 2008
    Another awesome chapter! Grimm is an asshole and a sweetheart at the same time, way to pull that off!
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  • From steisi on March 20, 2008
    Love! You updated! I am very, very pleased indeed. This chapter had me on my toes the entire time. Some people's reactions were quite interesting, and the banter you included had me at times in stitches, I was laughing so hard. Like the part where Ichigo seemed more worried whether or not Grimmjow had undressed him than Rukia's condition, or when they both agreed on Renji's irritation factor. And the ending! "Can't...It's a Kuchiki thing1."! Brilliant, love! Simply brilliant. You're right, by the way. The conversation between Ichigo and Grimmjow, as awkward as it was at times, flowed really well. Congratulations on that. You managed to keep them both surprisingly in character. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. Will Rukia's nightmarish prediction of Grimmjow going to school with them come true? Fufufu! I certainly hope so! A possessive, homocidal, not entirely sane Grimmjow in a regular high-school...Do I need to elaborate any further? Kisses, love!
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  • From ANON - riddlestar (not signed in) on March 19, 2008
    wow!!! i read all 7 chapters in one go and im addicted!
    .. to be honest i clicked on this mainly because of morbid curosity but i was both surprised and happy to find another a good bleach fic. :D yay!
    you have amazing talent! looking fwd to your next chapter.
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  • From Rockyshores on March 15, 2008
    Interesting chapter! I think the kiss at the end was so much more sweet because it was on the forhead and therfore not as sexual.
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  • From steisi on March 15, 2008
    ...I have no words to describe how exactly this chapter made me feel. I'll say that by the middle of it I was sobbing my little heart out and leacve it at that. Seeriously, love, I was so incredibly impressed by the debth and seriousness of this! You did an amazing job, congratulations. I have the feeling that this chapter was the stepping stone to a whole new level of Ichigo and Grimmjow's dysfunctional relationship. I'm very much looking forward to your next update, hon, and hope you keep up the same level of writing from now on. Once again, beautiful job! Kisses!
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  • From Rockyshores on March 13, 2008
    I'm going through Grimmjow withdrawl in this story!!! Although that alley sex scene was HOT!!! Anything with Ichi in it is hot...as long as its with another male. I half thought that Grimm was going to come upon them and be PISSED! But that would be too much of a coincedence.
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  • From ANON - Anan on March 12, 2008
    The only thing bad I have to say is that you may have gone over the top with the 'bitchy Rukia' at the end of this last chapter (chapter six). Because me, along with everyone else I've shown this fanfic to, just wanted to smack her upside the head. And most of us are serious Rukia fans.
    But otherwise...
    *explodes over the total awesomeness of the fanfic* KEEP IT UP YO! XD

    ~Anan
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  • From Chiyo on March 12, 2008
    Well, erm, what to say? That was rather sexy! *blushes* Really very sexy!
    I truly love this story, and I look forward to seeing Ichigo's interactions with Grimmjow now. I love their twisted need for eachother, and I can't wait to see how it evolves.

    Oh, and I like your A/Ns, by the way.
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  • From steisi on March 12, 2008
    Hey, love! You updated much sooner than I'd thought you would, which I'm grateful and happy for! What got me was that I didn't guess correctly about this being a chapter from Grimmjow's perspective. *super-ultra-cute-miserable-pout* On the other hand, I think this was one hell of an awsome chapter! I wonder if we'll see Suzuki again? If nothing else, at least Grimmjow will get pissed! Anyway, about you trying to portray the women of Bleach in a more positive light. I think that's a wonderful direction for an author to go into, and you're doing a great job of it. I bet Rukia was just worried about Ichigo, thus the violence (though even I cringed at that below-the-waist blow, even though I'm a girl! Owie...). Hope you update again soon! Kisses!
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  • From ANON - AnnE on March 11, 2008
    I wish I could love this story, because your writing is an iota above the rest, but I can't honestly endorse (or even comprehend of) a rape victim falling for his rapist. You've got a lot of good concepts going on here, and the sexual tension you've built up is envious, but your execution is terrible.

    Also, I realize a number of the Bleach females are badly characterized or have poor roles, but your constant harping on them is really detracting from your story. Please leave fewer author's notes. I'm more interested in your story than your personal opinions, no offense; I read porn for porn, they shouldn't serve as the author's soap box.
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  • From steisi on March 10, 2008
    I hope you keep up the frequent updates, love! Things are getting porgressively more intigueing with every chapter. I loved this! You were so right in getting Ishida to fall for someone that's such a polar opposite of him! Smitten-Uryu was just too amusing! And that small moment of interaction between Isshin and Ichigo at the beginning was a nice touch. A hint at the elder Kurosaki's more serious side. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. If I'm right, it should be in Grimmjow's perspective (that is, if I've caught on to your writing style). Keep up the awsome work, hon, and may your muse never leave you!...Or I'll hunt it down and drag it back kicking and screaming! Mwahahahaha!...Ahem. Don't mind my psychotic moment. It doesn't happen ALL that often. Anymore.
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  • From ANON - kyradda on March 09, 2008
    i really like this one. the way you have done grimmjaw is just marvelous and same with Renji. Plus i am a total sucker 4 a hurting Ichigo hope to read again from you soon.
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  • From ANON - Riceball-101 on March 08, 2008
    I think this should have some M-preg in it!^^ It would make it interesting, I love the way you have all the characters! There just like there self's, I REALLY love this fic, I hope you continue!

    If you use my idea about the M-preg thing, could you have Ichigo give birth to a girl please!
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  • From Chiyo on March 07, 2008
    I just can't wait to read more. Please continue this! There's such a great dynamic between the two, and you've made their twisted relationship so beautiful. I love your little insights into Grimmjow's hate especially!
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  • From yaoihentai69 on March 06, 2008
    I absolutely love this, the way you write and the plot itself. XD Can't wait to read more!
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