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By : TillThatTime
  • From ANON - joem on August 28, 2008
    I like this story very much. can't wait forr more
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  • From ANON - sighmega on August 19, 2008
    *sigh* another story going in to my not updated list even though i love it....
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  • From ANON - yukie on August 18, 2008
    when will you update??
    I'm dying to read the next chapter.
    please update!
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  • From ANON - Kard on July 29, 2008
    Love this story!
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  • From ANON - shorty on July 11, 2008
    love this story, hope you will write more soon.
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  • From ANON - Azumi-chan on July 06, 2008
    It's been a while, but I haven't forgotten how much I love to read this story. I still say that it is very well written and the amount of effort you put into making the characters in character still astonds me and makes me feel as though I am reading something written by the author of Bleach. This story is well developed and I love to read fan fiction written by you because it has a plot line and I know you put a lot of effort into keeping the characters you are writing about in character. Wonderful, truly inspiring that I can always turn to such a talented author to look for meaningful, well written and well developed stories. Looking forward to reading much more of your stories and can't wait for the next updates to everything I have read so far.
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  • From ANON - love on July 04, 2008
    I love this story it is very vell whritten and godd storyline=) I hope that you will write more
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  • From ANON - heier on June 22, 2008
    AH!! your storyline is so damn intense
    please hurry and get the next chapter out!
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  • From ANON - Name on June 20, 2008
    make me hot and bothered! please! god... i'm getting all giddy now!

    i'd give u my brain if i could just so u can fill it up with ur epiclemonsauce!

    you had gan and hitsu grinding like...PERFECTLY... usually i'd read WHAM BAM and then SEX SEX SEX
    but for you it's like "... you feel that?...well you cant have it...yet..."
    and everythings sexual attaction SO TENSE yet the chem and physics are SO SMOOTH! ARGH! my mind is urs to do as u please! just update more! YOU ARE FANTASTIC!
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  • From ANON - Teagirl on June 20, 2008
    - “By the end yer gonna give everythin’ willingly.”

    In that moment, with that same calm and cool confidence that Ichimaru always seemed to possess, Ichimaru had told him with those words that there would be no point in taking him, there would be no point in raping him, no point in stealing every kiss, every touch, every lick, every fuck, because everything the man wanted, everything he craved, Hitsugaya was going to give to him, without restraint and without remorse.

    It wasn’t a question. It wasn’t a request. It was a statement, a declaration. -

    Amazimg.... your writing skills just blow my mind! It was just his thoughts, yet i could FEEL all his fustration! Hitsu is going to give in...and when he does it's going to be out of this world! Normally, one would want the main character to get out alive but in your case I want Hitsu to give in and yet still be powerful in his own way. Goodness, those two make one heck of a powerhouse! ~ZAAAAAPPPPPPPPPP~


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  • From ANON - Vaseline on June 20, 2008
    HA! *bows* i would be more than happy to be in your collection!

    ...Like OH EM GEE! THIS TIME WAS LIKE ... OMFGKOREANBBQ!
    YOU EVEN GIVE WORDS SEXUAL TENSION! i mean really... SO PRO!

    ..damnit...i'm out of vaseline...u made me use all of it! ;D oohhh kinkeh comment! score +1 awesomenesss! THANK YOU!

    i in turn reward u with +10000 awesomeness!
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  • From ANON - Monica on June 11, 2008
    Yes! you just set my imagination of fire with this chapter! Yea you were true to your word did were doing more than just kissing. It's almost like and elevator each level is high then the next haha if that makes any sense at all. You are and amazing author I'm so glad you are still update!

    Monica
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  • From Gnat on June 11, 2008
    In a way, I am very glad I put off reading this story. I hadn't caught up in the manga yet, so I figured, ohnono, that says Hueco Mundo, I can't read that! I still read the first two chapters and was delighted at the coherence of thought, the actual exploration into what they're thinking. The description of Ichimaru and the way he thinks seems to be so constantly and irrepresibly accurate. So I'm finally caught up in the manga, and I read through. Hitsugaya's reactions and thoughts are powerful enough to make me shiver a little, I almost wonder if there's something in his past that has made him this way? He almost acts like a rape victim, yet he isn't. That we know of? I could almost see it explaining his character both in the series and how you have envisioned him. As you can see, I'm enjoying the story. Oh, on a side note, I think you mentioned when replying to reviews that someone called you a tease...

    YOU TOTALLY ARE! Come on, I read all eight chapters at once and you leave me with that? You bitch! ;_; Okay, so I might have done the same thing in my own fic for several chapters, but come on now... Update soon. :(
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  • From psama7 on June 11, 2008
    I love your story even more! I don't care about the back story anymore, just write more of this.

    YAY! I love how you write the characters and I really cant wait for more!
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  • From HouseofDeValle on June 11, 2008
    Oh yes. Things are coming to a head indeed.

    There's really no way of getting around it. Ichimaru is a sneaky, manipulative rat fink; no matter how often he does what he does, it never ceases to amaze me at how good he is at it. Everything about him is multi-layered, more than meets the eye and there's always something deeper than what you see on the surface. He knows what he wants and will get it, but why not have fun along the way?

    In contrast, Hitsugaya has spent most of his time trying to be older, more mature than he is. He puts up a strong shell around himself, but once that shell is broken we see the child within, the insecurity, confusion, all ripe for a character like Ichimaru to take advantage of, to play with as a cat might a ball of yarn, or its prey.

    Hitsugaya is fighting a losing battle, and I think, once he's made that precise realization - he's very, very close now - he's going to do everything in his power to fight it, but inevitably he shall fail. I think it will be that conflict, if I might be so presumptuous, that will finish the definitions you've written here. Regardless of the end result, it will be as well-worth watching as any chapter you've put together hence, perhaps more so for the symbolism it shall entail.

    I can't wait to see what happens next.
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