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By : TillThatTime
  • From ANON - Catarotta on January 28, 2008
    -fan girl squeal- Once more..LOVED IT! Well of course I loved it..You wrote it..lol. Anyways..Love the fact people are staying in character. More of a turn on in my opinion when people aren't suddenly like "I love you!". -gags- Crap pisses me off. Anyways. Keep up the good work darling. And like I said..Hit me up on msn messenger.
    Love
    Catarotta
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  • From ANON - eyes0nme19 on January 27, 2008
    Absolutely love your portrayal of Gin and Hitsugaya's character. I am soo looking forward to the next chapter, until then keep up the wonderful work!!
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  • From ANON - esther on January 27, 2008
    damn, I really enjoy ths story. Your Ichimaru is just the perfect combination between cruel and not so cruel, almost nice. I really love it.
    can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Catarotta on January 25, 2008
    Yes yes..-nods- I'm very hooked to this. My poor Toushiro! Being stripped like that. But damn I would do it to -laughs- Another fabulous chapter my dear. Can't wait for the next. Hit me up on msn messenger if you want. Phoenixheiress666@yahoo.com I'm usually on in the evenings. Would love to chat. And Rping..Oh man you'd love it. -winks- I'm show you the ropes.
    Love
    Catarotta
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  • From ChibiBerry on January 24, 2008
    Oh please update! I can't wait to see what happens to him next..so far this is really interesting..and i really want to know more..so keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to your next update! 8D
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  • From ANON - esther on January 23, 2008
    I'm at loss for words. Seriously, this is the best Gin/Hitsugaya story I ever read. It's so well written.
    The relationship between them is so well potrayed.
    I can't for an update.

    Don't ever stop writing, because you're really good.
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  • From HouseofDeValle on January 15, 2008
    The suspense grows, captivating the reader with each passing word...yet leaving no definitive path to the outcome. What ifs, constantly racing through mind, gnaw at the conscious, each vying for more attention - and thus does the suspense grow. As the questions outpace the answers, one can only hold to the hope that the next chapter will deliver as well as the ones before. Always set the bar to be met - that way, it's always a pleasant surprise if and when the expectations are surpassed.

    I do eagerly await chapter four. It's not often a story makes me want to write offmeter poetry.
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  • From ANON - Dracoqueen22 on January 15, 2008
    Me again! Always too lazy to log in but I'm easy to find if you want to contact me. I'm on this site... everywhere! (probably on this very same page, lol).

    *shudder* Nnoitra. I don't much like that bastard though the tattoo on his tongue is pretty cool. And I second you, Kenpachi is fuckin' awesome. I love him to death.

    Anyways, on to the fic itself. Wonderful piece of literature, definitely looking forward to where it's going. I enjoyed your rendition of the meeting both in Soul Society and in Hueco Mundo. I'm just in love with this story and I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for future updates. You have me hooked.

    ~Dracoqueen22~
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  • From ANON - Dracoqueen22 on January 15, 2008
    Sorry... I was too lazy to log in. I hadn't gotten to the actual chapter yet, I wanted to stop and make a comment first.

    I mostly want to say, congratulations on writing a story that is readable, well-written, grammar-correct, in-character, and all those other wonderful things that make a good fanfiction that most writers (or so-called writers) out there can't seem to grasp or even brush their fingers across. I'm always skeptical and incredibly leery on clicking on new authors because I am usually terribly disappointed but I'm very glad that I bravely decided to try your piece. To be honest, I was drawn in by your remarkable and tempting description! The moment I read it, my heart skipped a beat in anticipation. 'Could this be? A good story?' I asked myself. And I was pleased to find that it was so.

    I'll leave more once I finish the other chapter. I mostly stopped here because I wanted to say... "YES!!" I am joining the club of Hinamori-haters. She is crazy, bum-fuckin' nuts. I agree with you in every manner. I despise Hinamori/Hitsugaya stories and even shudder when they dare pair her with any other of my favorite characters. I am glad to see that there are others like me.

    By the way, did I mention that I love your Hitsugaya and your Gin? Your characterization is spot-on and I am anticipating all that is to come. Oh ho! I am rambling a bit here. I'll try to be more coherent in my next review. Sorry for the length! I'll try to be more brief!

    On to the next piece!

    ~Dracoqueen22~
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  • From HouseofDeValle on January 14, 2008
    There aren't a a great deal of stories involving Gin or Toshiro, let alone centered around both of them, so to find out of this quality is exceptional. I hope you don't lose your inspiration before the finish!
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  • From ANON - Catarotta on January 12, 2008
    Once again another amazing Chapter. Its official..You have me hooked to your story. Hey..If your into online roleplaying look me up on msn messenger with the email I provided. Maybe i can help with story ideas. I'm a novelist..But I haven't placed any of my fanfics up and I should. Hope to hear from ya!
    Much love!
    Cata
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  • From ANON - Ana on January 12, 2008
    This is my favorite Bleach pairing! I can't believe it's not more popular. I also dislike Hinamori, though. She reminds me of Sakura from Naruto, well, the way she was in the beginning. Hinamori still thinks of Aizen as this awesome guy even after he did all that. She really did lose or she's just the kind of stupid girl that blindly follows anyone. Man she really needs a clue.
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  • From ANON - shiro-lover on January 11, 2008
    Love it!!!!!! Almost as much as I love toushirou......almost. Please continue!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Catarotta on January 05, 2008
    Omg please continue. Ichi/Hitsu is my fav pairing and I barely ever see good fanfics of them. I am loving how you are describing Gin. Its perfect. Can't wait for more. I'll be checking every day for an update. Keep up the awesome fuckin' work! Much love!
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  • From chibizoe on January 03, 2008
    Wow! This is really powerful and very well written
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