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By : TillThatTime
  • From ANON - young_saiyan on February 20, 2008
    NOOOOO! Why must Gin-sama be so cruel?! Whyyyy?!?!

    Anyway, another great chapter, love how you ended it (Noooo! Gin-sama!!! *cry*) and also how you displayed Gin(-sama)'s ever knowing smirk when he told Hitsu-chan about just how much he knows about 'Neko-chan'.

    Can't wait till you update again!

    ~young_saiyan
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  • From madammalia on February 19, 2008
    This is a great story. Your characterizations of Gin and Hitsugaya are so well done, it almost seems as if this should be how canon should go regarding these two. (^_~) Amazing descriptions of not only scenes but also of emotions keep me wanting to read more. Please keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Monica on February 18, 2008
    I can't help but fall in love the whole 'not quite love, but sorta hate relationship between Hitsugaya and Gin'

    Once again I must congratulate you on yet another wonderful chapter... ^^ -huggles-


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  • From ANON - Esther on February 18, 2008
    Oh my gods, I'm at loss for words.
    Hehe, Gin is so wonderful cruel that I just have to love him.
    Seriously, you write him so good! And Hitsugaya too. Their thoughts and dialouge feels really natural.

    I want to say so much but I don't where to start, 'cause I thought the whole chapter was really, really good and well written. Especially the bedroom scene, love it. ^^

    Can't wait for the next update!
    tale care!

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  • From ANON - p-sama7 on February 17, 2008
    I LOVE IT! Haha i seriously check this site every other day (when i have time) to see if you have updated this story. I can't wait to see where it goes and i hope you have a new chapter out soon!

    Thank you again for the lovely chapter and may you have a great week!
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  • From ANON - Sean on February 17, 2008
    You are the best ^_^ thanks for updating! You have fed my addictions for now hehehe awesome chappie keep up the awesome work!
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  • From chibizoe on February 17, 2008
    'Just a note…yes, I am trying to make Gin and Toshiro’s relationship as complicated as hell, but you’ve got to admit, it’s more fun that way.'

    It's definately heaps more fun, I'm really enjoying this story. I love your characterisations and Hitsugaya's thougth-processes
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  • From Catarotta on February 17, 2008
    -claps happily- Another brilliant chapter. Gods..First time I've had the urge to punch Ichimaru..lol. My poor Toushiro-chan. He's too cute for words. I almost feel bad withthe way Ichimaru is being a devious little snake with him and how his words are penetrating what is left of Hitsugaya's pride. I can't wait for the next chap. I'm always looking for this when I check the yaoi section. -winks- IM me if you ever get the chance on msn messenger. Cause I rp Toushiro like he should be played...lol. Hope to hear from ya!
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  • From ANON - kristin on February 11, 2008
    wow, COOL! I must admit, you have one hell of a talent! Terrific writing skills, original plot, you just write so capturing I couldn't lift my eyes off the screen until the very end and when I finally reached it I was pretty disappointed there was no more! Hope ya'll give us more soon!
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  • From ANON - p-sama7 on February 03, 2008
    I really really really really really love this story!!

    Please update soon!

    I read this and i can actually see it being illustrated! It is amazing!
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  • From ANON - Monica-sama on February 01, 2008
    This is the far best fan-fiction I have ever laid eyes on.

    It was like watching a movie that's how well written your story is.

    kept up the spectacular work!

    love Monica-sama


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  • From Crya2Evans on January 30, 2008
    Mmmm. *smacks lips* Very, very good indeed. I like how you portrayed Gin. Instead of softening him as most people are want to do, you managed to keep every ounce of his character. And yes, Aizen is indeed an evil bastard. A deliciously evil bastard that deserves to rule the world, lol. Ahem, I have an affection for the evil ones.

    In any case, I loved this chapter and was happy to be updating today only to notice that you had and I somehow missed it. In my defense, it is so rare to find anything of any worth on aff that I rarely check. So yes! I was happy when I saw an update and was I disappointed? Not hardly. In fact, this has only whetted my appetite for more. I eagerly anticipate the next part of what is shaping up to be a truly engaging piece. (You have inspired me to try writing something a bit more serious and I thank you.)

    ~Dracoqueen22~
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  • From ANON - young_saiyan on January 30, 2008
    In all of the stories on adult fanfiction, I MUST say that this IS THE BEST!

    You've captured the charachters absolutely perfectly, you've described whatever you wanted to describe MUCH better then 'normal' people do, and to be honest, your whole story is just f'ing great.

    And that's only from a writers point of view.

    As a Bleach fan, I can't help but agree (in the review replies) that there really should be a hinamori-hate-club, honestly, she's the worst short-bunned-bitch to be ever seen throughout the history of anime (actually, there might be worse...).

    And Aizen truly is the Great One. And so are his quotes. XD
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  • From ANON - Sean on January 29, 2008
    Wow! god your story is so awesome! ugh, you are gonna have to update quickly or I might start to have withdraws you are and amazing author ;)
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  • From HouseofDeValle on January 28, 2008
    Ichimaru, playing well his many faces, must be a fascinating character to write. One second you think he's being gentle, the next he's got you completely confused. Off-balance. Always setting up for the next move, always playing with his cards very close to the vest. Ah, poor Toshiro. His innocence against Gin's slyfulness...that's a rigged matched, wouldn't you say? And yet, it will never cease to keep the breath bidden for the next move. One might even compare it to professional poker, but with much more at stake. The victory in this scenario, however, wouldn't be Gin forcing the victory into his hands, no no. That'd be too simple. He'd have to enjoy every moment of winding Toshiro into his hands, playing against his fears, his strengths, his very mind. All to take that innocence, wrapped up in a pretty package, and win it through by trick and sleight of hand. A war of attrition, fought in the shadow...the best kind of battle, because you'll never see the next move until it's too late...the next move is Toshiro's, I believe. I wonder...does the boy of fair eyes and sullen disposition have a few tricks of his own to play against his captors?
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