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Reviews for His Heartbeat

By : lechymonk
  • From FieldsofHeather on May 06, 2008
    More please! I really like this story!
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  • From Melissarose8585 on April 12, 2008
    I love the story! Ukitake and Kyoraku are such an interesting pair, and I like to see more stories about them. Not that I don't like Ichigo, Orihime, etc., but it's nice to see some other characters get some love!

    You also have one of the best OC's I've seen to date. She's real; she has flaws, insecurities, and human tendencies. Most OC's are either MarySues, superhuman, or just plain annoying. But your's is very well-written, and she is an enjoyable addition to the crew.

    I can't wait to read more, and look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From orionshadow on December 11, 2007
    Love the ending. Totally unexpected. I'm enjoying this story very much. Good work.
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  • From EvangelineBlue on November 20, 2007
    OMG!! Love it Love it!!! It's been awhile since I've seen a good Ukitake story, I like Hinako too, great OC ^_^
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  • From orionshadow on November 16, 2007
    More please. I like the rhythm of your writing and the passion.
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  • From orionshadow on November 16, 2007
    More yummy.
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  • From orionshadow on November 16, 2007
    Just read the first chapter. Yummy!
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