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Reviews for For The Love of a Friend

By : orionshadow
  • From kamiyoni on April 13, 2009
    Hmm.... Soi actually considering confessing her pregnancy to Toushirou? Regardless its going to take something big to bring them out of this rut.

    Maybe in his heart, Toushirou wants to Marry Soi? Perhaps thats what he mentions to Zaraki.
    As per her Liutenant's marriage offer... allow me to say, Ewwwwwww
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  • From ANON - kkorl on April 12, 2009
    whow, didn't see that coming.
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  • From nanaochanisluv on February 20, 2009
    This was a very good story. Very unusual couple but you made it work.
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  • From ANON - CyberDark on February 09, 2009
    A very good chapter as always. You seem to capture the essence of Zaraki's wild and crazy personality while giving him an amount of depth rarely seen in the real show. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From on February 07, 2009
    Hi, Dante here. I felt that after reading this and different circumstances i needed to make a profile on AFF, so this is still Dante. Thankyou very much for mentioning me in this chapter, it means a lot. I liked this chapter a lot, (SPOILERS) it made me think of the training scene with Ran and Soi in Different Circumstances, With both how they are fighting against someone who is teaching them new things. Seeing as I have read DC I know what is going to happen, at least basically, so some tension is a little removed, but this story still works well. Really can't wait to see how thing turn out from Soi and Toshiro's POV. And, to keep up my chapterly question session (this may be a regular occurance!) i wanted to ask whether as a character in the series you prefer Soi, Toshiro, Zaraki or Matsumoto (or any other character i haven't mentioned).
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  • From Jennyt82 on February 07, 2009
    Yaay!!! An update within a week. Cookies for you. :) The chapter was excellent as they all are. It was interesting to see what Zaraki thought about Matsumoto's abduction. That's a hint by the way. Where's that promised chapter of Obsidian and Alabaster? Anyway let's concentrate on For the Love of a Friend. I'm hoping that you have the next chapter all planned and almost written because i do want to see how you get Toshiro and Soi back together. Here's hoping that the next update is in a week as well.
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  • From sweetsatincocoa on February 07, 2009
    Toshiro and Kenpachi...what are we gonna do with them? Nanao gets on my neves, btw. I loved the chapter, but I'm sure you already know that. Want to help me study for my anatomy test? (or even better, take it for me?)


    Here's some frosted pink lemonade with just a few splashes of rum. Tart, and not for operating heavy machinery. :)
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  • From ANON - Elora on February 07, 2009
    Oh-ho! A Twilight reference, eh? I admit I lol'd a bit. :D

    WOO! I'm glad that Toshiro helped Kenpachi out. And jeez, way to spill the beans Toshiro. Our kids will play together. Funny thing is, he doesn't even know that Soi is preggers yet. That'll come sooner than you think mah boy!

    Can't wait for the next chapter!


    P.S. I really, REALLY, love this line for some reason. "All of it. If she lives, I’ll disappoint her and she’ll reject me because I failed her. If she dies I have an excuse to give up.”

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  • From ANON - Andoryu on February 02, 2009
    Well...it wasn't as exciting as I thought it would have been but i'm still glad for the update. Soi is surprisingly a very simple woman (lol) but I find that I enjoy thoughts of Soi more than thoughts of Toushiro because her personality has never really been explored in the fanfic world which is why I would ask for more but it's quite sufficient for now. Just don't waste the next chapter on a boring 'ole fight, 'kay?

    I'm looking forward to your next update...
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  • From ANON - Dante on February 02, 2009
    Wow, gotta say, i love this story. It's charged sexually, and the plot really follows, and i haven't noticed any inconsistencies there or anywhere. And Soi Fon and Hitsugaya are such an original pairing! I've never seen it before, but it works really well. I caught this story, and read it in one night, I just couldn't stop reading. I never really review stories, but this one particularly warrants the merit. Really excellent work, but i haven't read your companion story, Different Circumstances, so I may be missing out. Ill be sure to read that, and I just wanted to inquire if you supported any other particular ships, other than Zaraki/Matsumoto (and Soi/Toshiro). Eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Elora on January 31, 2009
    Now I want a banana. Thanks.

    I don't know what to say, but I really like this chapter, a lot! I'm guessing that Nanao was raped by Aizen? I'm not sure, though that's what it seems like, poor thing. Have I mentioned before that I am a huge fan of happy endings? Hopefully Soi will go and fetch Kenpachi and there will be one for him and Rangiku. :D
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  • From ANON - Toast on January 31, 2009
    A week!!?? Yay. This chapter was fantastic as they always are. Hurry up and update soon. I don't really have anything else to say. Excellent work as always.
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  • From ANON - Elora on December 24, 2008
    Well well well...It's always interesting to see things from both points of view, so good job! But dang! I love angst as much as the next person, but I really, REALLY want them to just all live happily ever after. That's the kinda person I am. But don't get me wrong. I love your story, I really do! I can't wait for more!!!

    Happy Holidays!
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  • From ANON - Andoryu on December 20, 2008
    Sorry for not reviewing earlier...i didn't check to see if unsigned reviews could be sent but this chapter was so not completed! I wanted to see Soi's reaction afterwards during the time span in which Toshirou found the singing drunk right up to when he confronted Zaraki. So you know what this means...the next chapter most definitely has to be Soi!

    It was most interesting to watch my two favorite Bleach characters (Soi & Toshirou) go back and forth in their messed up relationship and I must say that I am most definitely looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - CyberDark on December 12, 2008
    An interesting chapter and a good set up for Zaraki. Just be careful about straying too far from the Soi/Hitsugaya problem. You seem to be including it less and less with later chapters.
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