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By : Platinumsabr
  • From AceKent on December 22, 2007
    turbulence ahead... can't wait to see just what could possibly present a threat to these entities!
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  • From AceKent on December 22, 2007
    Chapter 9: Interesting chapter, wow, that just played out really well. I don't think that could have gone any better, it was very coherent, readable, and enjoyable. Keep up the good work, i can't wait to see how this plays out now more than ever
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  • From AceKent on December 22, 2007
    Ch 8: A nice little side story, with an update on Karin to boot, very nice. Its good to see that everything is going so well for the characters. I really like how every1 has developed, you seem to be a master of character development, i just can't seem to harp on that enough!
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  • From AceKent on December 22, 2007
    I loved the character development of the sisters, and there is always something ominous lurking in the background of your stories, looking forward to seeing how this one plays out!
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  • From xSTALKERx on December 22, 2007
    First of all, I want to tell you something. I created an account on this site just to review your story, I liked it that much.

    Ichigo/Tatsuki is my personal favorite pairing, and I am glad you went with it. I also am really enjoying how you have written their kids. It took my a while to wrap my head around Shinigami/Human pairing with Arrancar, but you make it work.

    I can't wait for more chapters, and have a Merry Christmas!!

    Cheers,
    xSTALKERx
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  • From moonymuch on December 22, 2007
    That was an EXCELLENT battle scene, I'm so happy! You really do have such a talen for writing fight scenes and this definitely was the best you've done so far! All of the different fighting styles are so very cool. I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From moonymuch on December 22, 2007
    Heh heh, Kaien's display of male possessiveness was amusing, as well as the appearance of Souken and Asuka and their interaction with Ms. Ochi. I'm intrigued with Nemu and Hanataro's situation!
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  • From moonymuch on December 22, 2007
    How interesting, the whole menstruation-aphrodesiac thing. I felt badly for Kaien - it must be terrifying to lose control to the Hollow because of the way his powers have been fused, and to know that someone he loves could be hurt. But Kin's reaction was spot-on, I think. She loves him despite everything, and trusts him to keep control. Great job!
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  • From AceKent on December 22, 2007
    Chapter 6: Nice work, it'll be interesting to see how the pregnancy goes, and your characters always love to torture each other, it'll be interesting to see when they finally snap.
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  • From moonymuch on December 22, 2007
    Wow, Souken's power is terrifying! There's only one thing to say about Grimmjow and Asuka's little situation: awkward! But I love Souken and Asuka; they're probably my favorite of your OCs.

    And yay, finally some Ulquiorra/Karin! I would have liked more background on them, but perhaps that's another chapter?

    And one more thing: I said this during What The Eyes Can't See, but I have to say it again: you write beautiful love scenes. They're passionate and well, hot, but they're also quite beautiful and emotional. Great job!
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  • From moonymuch on December 22, 2007
    I'm so impressed with your characterization - you must have pages and pages of notes on personalities and abilities - and they're all so creative! It was great to learn about Tsukiyomi and Masaki's powers, and I liked seeing that Kaien does have a weakness. And Tatsuki's pregnancy is a nice ending for the chapter!
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  • From moonymuch on December 22, 2007
    AHHHHHHH I'm so happy! I've been waiting so long for updates, and there are six new chapters! Don't worry, I'll be happy to review them all. Kin's frustration is so cute and sweet. The idea of a scarf made from Kaien's hair is interesting, but a little creepy, I have to admit! Although we make scarves from wool and angora, so why not. I loved the idea of a Soul Society baby boom! Especially HitsuMatsu and ShunsuiNanao, I love those two. Well, onwards!
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  • From Leonhart29 on December 14, 2007
    Very good Hun. You're doing quite well with this one and I can't wait to find out what happens. *chuckle* You now have my attention and your review.
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  • From DrkLazarus on December 08, 2007
    This is *very* good. Like you'd mentioned previously, people find it hard to take to OCs. However, you've done an amazing job of integrating them into the world you've developed, and an even better job humanizing them.

    I'm certainly bookmarking this thread!
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  • From Tehmk on November 30, 2007
    Story is actually quite interesting, probably due to your creativity. ;) Keep it going!
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