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By : Platinumsabr

From JHHolliday on January 04, 2008
Quick question, when you were thinking of techniques for Kaien, were you thinking a little bit about Aaroniero's Glotoneria? Personally, I like Kaien's ability better. No Hollow Octopus or creepy joint-mind. I wish that Kin and Kaien could just get along... without major injury. You know the saying. It's all fun and games until someone nearly asphixiates on their own blood. Wait, that's not it at all! It'd be nice to get some more, you know, "passionate", scenes. All your character pairings are great. I'd even be interested in Jinta/Yuzu. It's a bit like blowfish, if prepared properly, it's spectacular. If not, painful death. But I trust you. Not with my life, though. I don't know you that well. Keep up the good work! JHH
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From JHHolliday on January 04, 2008
I recognized the names you used for Sado and Orihime's other kids, but if I take credit for it where credit isn't due, I'll feel like an ass. Therefore, I shall wait for feedback to my feedback. Oh and if you need a new quick pairing, I thought of Ikkaku/Kiyone. I figured it would be... interesting. I'll be waiting for more stories from you. And if you need more suggestions, I'm your huckleberry.
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From xSTALKERx on January 04, 2008
Hello again. I wrote you a review of "What The Eyes Can't See", so be sure to check that out and maybe consider my request/plea...

Anyway, onto the latest chapter of "A New Window"...

I'm loving this chapter as well. The dinner scene played out nice, as well as the way you introduced the "present" Ichigo (and Urahara, that sneaky bastard... :D ) had planned.

As for the fight scene, wow... Once again it was extremely detailed and brought you right into the action and kept you there. The visuals were well laid out and the recovery scenes were done well also. They way Kin reacted to hearing about how Kaien had to act during the fight, it came across as realistic and believable.

As usual, it didn't disappoint and I look forward to the next chapter(s).

P.S. I also added you on MSN, so maybe I'll see you around...
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From Kirei on January 04, 2008
I positively LOVE your stories - Like others I created an account just to review it - The recent battle between Asuka and Kin versus Kaien was magnificent!

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From xSTALKERx on January 03, 2008
They guy on FanFiction.net, thats me. I feel that Tatsuki is an under used character(same with the Ichigo/Tatsuki pairing)in the Manga/Anime and in the Fan Fic world, so I figured I'd add what I could with my lackluster writing skills.

Before I continue, like an idiot I didn't really notice at first that this was a continuation of a previous story and I just got done reading "What The Eyes Can't See". I read it all, in one night. Frankly, it was awesome and makes things in this story make more sense.

Anyway, onto the latest chapter of "A New Window"...

As usual this chapter didn't disappoint, and the big "surprise" was done well. I read this chapter before I read the first story, so it was a weird surprise for me, but after reading everything again it all makes sense.

Also, using a zanpaktou to re-heat a meal, thats just brilliant...
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From moonymuch on January 02, 2008
It's no problem! When I truly enjoy reading a story, it's no trouble to review.

I find the tension between Soul Society and Hueco Mundo extremely interesting. Of course, it would be entirely unrealistic for everything to be coming up roses between them, considering the fact that shinigami and hollows are always going to be on opposite sides. The dynamic between the two as you've portrayed it is very, very good, though I definitely think that the captains that are present at the Kurosaki's Christmas can be counted on to look past the Hollow aspects of various characters - so I'm glad that things turned out well. Argh, does that make sense? I seem to have trouble articulating today ^_^ Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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From JHHolliday on January 02, 2008
Yay! My feedback got feedback! I'm glad new chapters are starting to come in cause I just finished reading What The Eyes Can't See for a third time. I'm still holding out hope for Stark, though. I mean when Aaroniero got killed, Stark knew but chose to do nothing, whereas a true fanatic, Zommari, rushed to deal with his fellow Espada's murderer. I'm pulling for my aniki's lookalike! And hopefully you rejoiced as well as to what happened to Szayel Aporro. I think he'll be having an interesting century! Final note, it's all of a sudden, not the sudden. Just making sure you knew. Revolution.
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From eva24 on January 02, 2008
Now, now we had some good times but where I live and attend college now, I am no longer able to access this site (and you should see the stuff that sneaks around the firewall) so I can't review as much as I would like, I don't have time or access, I barely got these chapters read and I'm sorry sweetie but it's either you or my career XD Good work on the chapter although I feel that it must be a bit difficult to balance so many characters. Once this series is complete maybe you should try starting from the beginning with a clean slate again for a fresh challenge (ah, it'll be so long until I see the Kurotsuchi's ass-kicking :'( ) Alas, and take care
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From JHHolliday on January 01, 2008
Still waiting for new chapters, but I just remembered something! If Chad and Halibel have another son, you could name him Oscar, after Sado's abuelo. Second if Uryu and Orihime have another son, you could name him Sora, after Orihime's brother. Just pitching ideas to keep with the whole naming scheme. Hope you consider it.
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From JHHolliday on December 29, 2007
Platinumsabr, you are the only author on AFF.net whose stories I wait for. Your choice of character pairings is splendid, personally I'd like to see more Ulquiorra/Karin, and Ichigo/Tatsuki as the backbone of your story is brilliant. I will continue with the positive feedback until the story continues! On second thought, I won't stop there, either! Merci beaucoup, vous etes une artiste.
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From JHHolliday on December 24, 2007
I am truly glad that your hiatus from writing was not permanent, as this story is fantastic. I wait with bated breath for your next entries.

P.S. Is Stark assumed to have died in your stories, cause I liked him in the manga.

P.P.S. Have you been keeping up with the manga? I was sad when Szayellaporro went Alien on Nemu and killed her... I hope Mayuri makes a new Nemu... I'm sad now... {:(

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From JHHolliday on December 24, 2007
I am astonished by your literary skill. I love your stories, particularly "A New Window" and "What The Eyes Can't See". Your stories can be characterized by two main traits, a lack of speliing or grammatical errors, a sad commonality amongst other stories, and excellent plot lines with deep characters, not caricatures, people with real strengths and weaknesses, not a mishmash of regurgitated rhetoric. I created an account to express my graciousness for your stories. I tip my hat to you, sir.
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From ARWeber1 on December 23, 2007
Just now found your story and read it in its entirety. It's rare that I find a story that I enjoy as much as this, especially since I usually abhor anything other than Ichigo/Orihime, Rukia/Renji, etc. The canon characters' relationships are pretty believable overall, though I have to admit, Chizuru winding up with ANY guy is pretty far-fetched without some form of back story to explain how it came to be. What really surprised me was how much I liked the new characters. The way Kaien dealt with his emotions by training relentlessly, and the way Kin just tried to avoid hers, reflected their parents rather well. And even though I thought Asuka got over Kaien a little too fast, I kept finding myself going back to chapter five and rereading her scene with Souken. Also, I liked how there was a fair amount of angst in some of the earlier chapters, but it never got soul-crushingly depressing. Anyways, great story so far. I'll be sure to read the next chapter as soon as it comes out. Thanks for a great story.
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From eva24 on December 22, 2007
It's been along time, and things have changed between us *sob* It's not you, it's me (ROFL) but regardless I simply do not have the time for your request (nor the patience for that matter XD) So I'll simply say, Hooray, good job and glad to see that it's as fun as always, Merry Christmas indeed :D
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From AceKent on December 22, 2007
nice fight scene, i really got into it! looking forward to the next chapter!
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