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By : Platinumsabr
  • From JHHolliday on October 07, 2008
    Great third epilogue! Touching and whatnot. Keep up the good work!
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  • From moonymuch on October 07, 2008
    Awww! This chapter provoked a lot of hand-fluttering. I was hoping you'd get around to Bya-kun and Masaki, and you definitely didn't disappoint. You've certainly driven to the heart of Kuchiki Byakuya, and his love story with her was just incredibly...sweet. Yay.
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  • From xSTALKERx on October 07, 2008
    I forgot to add this to my review...

    Byakuya is one lucky bastard, he can have a threesome without ever worrying about being unfaithful since his wife is basically two people, but those two people are the same. Its confusing, but awesome. Besides, call me crazy but I imagine the pale skinned, white haired hollow version of her is pretty damn hot.
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  • From Sesshy81 on October 07, 2008
    Byakuya with kids ...... what a ....... strange thought ........... *Pictures stoic Kuchiki surrounded by laughing, playing children (all his own) complete with long-suffering expression, and falls to floor* ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL!!!!!!!
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  • From xSTALKERx on October 07, 2008
    This is a bit... different. It takes a bit of mental rearranging to wrap your head around this pairing, but when you really think about it it works. Masaki is grown up and when you are dealing with soul's age just isn't a factor once they get past a certain point. Love knows no bounds, as they say.

    You really captured everyone's favorite block of ice's emotions very well and really showed the struggle going on inside of him. The way you described Masaki's grown up form, damn... no mortal (or immortal) man could say no to that!!

    The one thing I was disappointed in was the fact we didn't get to see how Ichigo, Tatsuki, Tsuki, Rukia and the rest of the family reacted to their relationship. You made a subtle reference to it causing a "huge shock" and left the rest of it up to our imaginations but I would have like to see how you, as master of this universe, portrayed it.

    I eagerly await the next epilogue!!! Tsuki is one of my other favorite characters (so much like her mother!) so I look forward to that a lot.
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  • From eksimenrol on October 07, 2008
    all i can say about this latest chapter is wow. i can totally see him acting that way, assuming a 20 year thaw and all.
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  • From JHHolliday on October 02, 2008
    Great conclusion! Nice Memories of Nobody curveball, too. Personally I kind of like the lieutenant in the, "Oh, what a jackass," sense. Besides, it's always funny when Soi Fong threatens him. It's a good contrast. You know, the no-nonsense commando, and the totally out-of-place moron.
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  • From xSTALKERx on October 01, 2008
    All I will say is WOW.

    For an insane Ichigo/Tatsuki nut like me this is like the holy grail. I look forward to the other epilogues.

    You do know now that we must beg you for at least a oneshot of a more grown up Senna/KuuKen's son..........:p

    Even though our MSN convo got cut short, you should know my thoughts on the Soi fic.
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  • From moonymuch on October 01, 2008
    Thanks for the e-mail, I really appreciated it! It was nice to see this end (is this the end?) with Ichigo and Tatsuki...full circle, you know? I loved the implications of the end though...a "reincarnated" Senna (what a creative way to put her back in the story!) and KuuKen's boy...now that is interesting. Anyway, you know how I stand on the Soi Fong story so...have at it!
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  • From Chikky on September 23, 2008
    I'm sorry I do believe I forgot to review on the last chapter... but this story is amazing. I really can't wait for the next chapter each time. I love your writing style!
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  • From moonymuch on September 23, 2008
    Aw, thanks for the plug! And I have absolutely no problem with you using bachata in this chapter...it's just spreading the joy of dancing, as far as I'm concerned!

    I was happy to see an update! Yay for weddings! Loved the battle scene - but then, you know how I feel about a good battle scene! Great job as usual!

    And I guess if anyone is interested in fluff, ballroom dancing, and Bleach, (and actually came to look for my review here) my pen name on ff.net is Philyra.
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  • From Breek on September 22, 2008
    o.0......wow. just......the fighting, and the grace and dancing, picturing it in my head.....and then the 'wedding night' *laughs* this was really good. is really good. It's been a great story from the beginning with Ichigo and Tatsuki to now. I hope you continue writing, and that it's never a chore for you.
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  • From xSTALKERx on September 21, 2008
    Wow. Just... wow.

    My standards, that blew my standards outta the water. Everything about this chapter was incredible.

    The past month has been so hectic around here, with work and everything else I've barely had time to do anything other than a few short oneshots. I'm still working on that PDF thing, hopefully I get some more free time here soon to get it completed.

    I'm looking forward to the epilogues, and whatever you decide to do next (Not sure I have to tell you this, you probably already know, but another Ichigo/Tatsuki fic would be awesome)

    Until then!!!
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  • From moonymuch on August 20, 2008
    Hey! It's nice to see an update, it's been a while! Excellent chapter, I loved the fight scene Kin's bankai in action is pretty awesome, and the synchronicity between Kin and Kaien as they fought was really nice. Who used the Santen Kesshun shield, though? I was confused by that.
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  • From JHHolliday on August 15, 2008
    Yay! You finally updated! And there was violence! It looks like you took your sweet time with it, if the wait was any indication! ;P
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