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From eksimenrol on October 17, 2008
i must admit i am very glad. i remmeber in a review for what the eyes can't see i had asked what had hapened to kon, and now i know! thank you, but i must admit i never expected him and nel.
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From sheastar334 on October 17, 2008
AWESOME!!!!!! Oh, the Karin and Ran explanations were my favorites. (Karin is my favorite Bleach character, and Ran/Shiro is my favorite pairing. Wonderful early birthday gift for me.) And I LOVED the Nel/Kon bit. I think he deserves love too and I'd been wondering where Nel was the entire story. I thought maybe I overlooked her. When you made the end fit to the new story your writing I jumped for joy. Nice setup. I can't wait for the new story!!!!

P.S. I also can't wait to see (hopefully) Senna/Katsuo cuteness. "They�re exactly like me and Ichigo were! Dammit, I did not need to say that.� lol

Sheastar
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From xSTALKERx on October 17, 2008
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its over!!!!

Ahem, with that now out of the way...

I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed reading this story (WTECS is still my favorite, more Ichigo/Tatsuki centric). It is defiantly a worthy follow up to the first story and expands the universe in so many ways. I loved all the pairings (save for maybe the "beyond crack" Kon/Nel pairing). The writing, as usual with with your stories, is top quality. I don't see writing of this caliber anywhere other than professionally written and published novels!

I think that you wrapped almost all the loose ends up in this last chapter(s) and brought this part of the story to a close. I also really like how you have made the transition into the Soi Fon story. This new character seems to be an interesting one, with knowledge of Soul Society and who some of the people are. It seems you've hinted that he knows (or knows of) Kuu. Perhaps a Shiba connection? He might even know Ichigo!

I know this new story with be Soi Fon/OC centric, but I do look forward to some cameos from our favorite characters from the first two stories (I will be begging for Tatsuki, Tsuki and Masaki/Ikki.......what can I say... I love those characters).

To wrap all this up, your writing has been (without any offense to other writers out there) the best and most enjoyable for me to read.

I eagerly await the start of this next story and see what you do with the Soi Fon character and how her normally cold character has evolved because of the influences of all these other characters.

Until then...
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From yansuke on October 16, 2008
oh yeah! keep up the great work your stories are awesome! i don't think i will ever get bored with them!
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From JHHolliday on October 14, 2008
Just finished re-reading 29 and still the best chapter ever. EVER!
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From Watcher on October 14, 2008
Now, first of all, I enjoyed this chapter. I really did. Sure, sometimes your writing style is a tad slow and overdescriptive, but no one's perfect and I have the same problem. I also kind of like the Tsuki/Sora pairing, and I cannot express the deep, whimsical amusement I gain from realizing that Uryu has gone just as grey as dear old dad.

I also like your fic. Really, I do. I have some problems with it, sure.

Ulquiorra, for one, is and has always been a cold, vicious monster, lacking a conscience and a belief system outside absolute materialism.

And, I don't really like the whole King angle. Ichigo never accepted his Inner Hollow. Instead, he learned to control it. To paraphrase an awesome Terry Pratchett quote from Night Watch: "Vimes felt the Beast surge up all around him. And that's all it was: a beast. The Beast didn't think. It was *dumb*. What you were, what *you* were, was not the Beast."

But this is nitpicking. The sheer inventive craftsmanship of it is something special.

Not Bleach special. But special.

Sure, some of the special powers are kind of far-fetched and overcomplicated, and a good deal of it tends to drag. But I can confidently state, having read through the whole of both stories despite my complaints, and despite my Ichigo/Orihime shipping, that this is easily the best piece of Bleach work I have ever read outside Bleach itself.

It tweaked my muse. I'll probably never write *my* Bleach epic, but it will have been indelibly impacted by yours.

So, to conclude, while imperfect, Not Perfect is GOoD, and it's still a fine piece of work. Well done.

A final note: KUKAKU and KENPACHI? The frick were you smoking?
...No offense.
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From JHHolliday on October 13, 2008
Just read 29 again. Awesome. I suppose it was a good idea when I brought up Orihime's brother's name all those months ago. And I suppose the emotional stuff was touching and whatnot. Hell, it was probably better than fistfights. But don't push that probably, fella.
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From JHHolliday on October 13, 2008
True, the emotional stuff isn't my cup of tea, but it was an excellent epi-epi-epilogue! Just remember that I'll be expecting some real violence one of the days!
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From sheastar334 on October 12, 2008
SORRY for being vague last time. I really wanted to say I enjoyed the chapter, but didn't have many word on it. And because I know you (because I know writers) would rather a review about how I felt on the chapter as oppose to 'Please update soon', which is how I always feel when I read a good story, I don't review nearly enough for a story as good as yours and for that I'm sorry too. Anywho, FAVORITE CHAPTER, hand's down!! Not to say I don't love the rest (I adore Kin, she reminds me of one of my best friends and Kaien is HOT!) It ranks right above Soken's chapter. (I LOVE the Ishida children... Must be the glasses. lol) I just love Tsuki more,and Sora's so sweet, in the earlier chapter's I got the feel he was a little of an outcast in his own family (I know what that looks like). I was so excited when I seen the new chapter so earlier than I expected, I check on a whim. I did a happy dance all around my laptop, before I could calm down enough to finish reading this chapter. But I'm sooooo sad that it's all ending, but all good things must or they lose their luster. Ah, but hope peaks through the clouds in the form of your new 'planned' fic. I rejoice. I've gotten fond of Soi-Fong while reading 'For Love of a Friend' and I'm eager to see another version of her. And I really hope you do it on canon with this fic, I'd love to see the whole gang return, even if it's only in the background. I wanna see Senna older and if Tatsuki was able to keep Kenpachi's son way. I HOPE NOT!! And I keep wonder what tint the hair of the Tsuki/Sora children will be. Isn't that random? lol :} I hope to see the next epilogue soon.

P.S. This might very well be the second longest review I've every written.

-Sheastar
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From moonymuch on October 12, 2008
Sweet is definitely a good thing, believe me! I cannot tell you how happy I am with this story, it's progressed farther than I ever could have dreamed when I requested that you do a sequel. All I can say is thank you!
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From xSTALKERx on October 12, 2008
Tsuki, one of my favorite characters. She's got the looks (chicks with white/silvery hair... OMFG, ranks just below redheads on my list), she's got the personality (so much like Tatsuki...), hell... she's got it all. Originally I didn't really connect with Sora's character, but with the developments in later chapters and this epilogue I finally see him as a full fledged and fleshed out character and he fits Tsuki perfectly.

As usual, the writing in this chapter was top notch and really drew the reader into the story. It's very descriptive and you don't want to stop reading. Personally, I'd have to say it is one of my favorite chapters in ANW.

As for another short chapter to wrap things all up, you know I'd enjoy that. Perhaps something set 10 years past Senna's birth that kinda wraps everyone's stories up (Ichigo/Tatsuk, Senna, Kaien/Kin, Tsuki/Sora, Masaki/Byakuya, with mentions of Inoue/Ishida, Chad/Haibel, and the others)

Whatever you feel is necessary, I'm sure it'll be awesome and we'll enjoy it.

Until then...
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From thas on October 12, 2008
very good, good plot great character development. would like more about the ran/histgaya pairing. it wasn't very well explained. neither was ken/kiku (probably not abbreviated right) some side storys to what the eyes can't see and a new window would be good. it would make some of the pairngs more understandilbe and close time gaps.
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From Chikky on October 08, 2008
I totally believe he has those feelings as well. I cannot wait for another one to come. I love this series and hope it continues!

Feedback on the story before: It's good and I want to see it come out~
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From Rifts on October 08, 2008
Well, damn. I managed, to my great shame, to completely fail on following up and even (!) keeping up with new chapters for most of the summer. And now that I've been on study abroad in Budapest for a few weeks, I finally get my head working right again...On the other hand, I've had a great excuse to reread both What The Eyes Can't See and this (again, since they're awesome). I felt really bad that I never got around to reviewing more, since I think I said I would, but now that there's more new chapters to read I think I'll be able to make up for it or something. =P
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From sheastar334 on October 08, 2008
AWWWWW!!! He's happy! Wow. I'm grinning so hard! lol. I'm ready for Tsuki's ending. (She's my favorite. :>) And any thing you wish to continue I promise to read!!
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