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Reviews for Forbidden Kiss

By : MibuWolf
  • From ANON - bcjink on August 12, 2011
    Update pllllleeeeeaassse?!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 24, 2011
    I love this fic!
    I suggest twins, two boys.
    As for names;
    Tamao and Tokio
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  • From ANON - CrossMarian on July 25, 2008
    o.o NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE :3 im not really good at the naming and the gender guessing X_X so w/e works works :
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  • From mistysmysticrose on July 07, 2008
    Please update soon. It's been a long time sense the last one and I can't wait to find out what happens. Have decided what they are going to have? Like the idea of them having twins a boy and a girl, but thats just me. Well I hope that you update soon.
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  • From liz2008 on April 24, 2008
    this is a good story so far. please update soon. please have a single child. i love mpreg stories.
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  • From nyge98 on February 26, 2008
    I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait till the next chapter. regarding sex i was thinking twin boys named Ken (meaning strong) and Kenji (meaning intelligent second son)
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  • From ANON - Lilo on February 22, 2008
    can't wait for Ichigo to become a mum and he needs to have twins lol update soon
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  • From Yakumo on February 20, 2008
    Oh DAMN this is hot. Please write another chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2008
    ...How dare it cut off my review...

    *boils*

    >> Arg. Anyway. Byakuya's WAAAAAY outta character. But the story was good, 3/5 from me.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2008
    “Gawd damn, baby"
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  • From ANON - Shinigami-hime on January 11, 2008
    DAMN! Gimme the mPreg woman and hurry up! Its too much of a rarity!!!!! (drools.)
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  • From Devil2Kyuubi on December 28, 2007
    Hey Hey maybe Chad could try to kidnapp Ichigo while he's Pregnant
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  • From ANON - Vamprina on December 20, 2007
    Hehehe. I do think these characters are OOC. Though Byakuya is the most OOC out of them all. However, I don't think that it takes away from the fanfiction at all. I find it cute and funny at times. I love how Byakuya calls Ichigo "baby" so often. Pet names like that aren't usually used in the fanfiction that I've seen thus far. It's quite endearing, I think. Though, I think the character in which you portray Byakuya would be better suited to Renji, I still think it's interesting that you used it for Byakuya. I like that he isn't perpetually bored and emotion-less.

    And speaking of Renji a moment ago, I would also like to inform you that I absolutely love the way you portray him as well. I thought it was completely hilarious the way he tried to blackmail Byakuya, though that too is a bit OOC. Still, very hilarious. :) And, I absolutely loved Renji's dirty-talk. "suck my fucking junk" was quite interesting to read in a fanfic. Dirty talk isn't used all that often in the fics I've read and when it is it's nothing quite so crude. But, if you ask me, dirty talk is supposed to be crude. That's why it's dirty. ^_~ The fact that you rarely see such things in normal fanfiction therefore made your use of pet names and the type of dirty talk implemented within this particular fanfiction quite hot, if I do say so myself.

    Further, I absolutely love your uke-tastic Ichigo. His vulnerability is endearing and I quite like it. :) But, then again, I often make Ichigo The Emo King, so...yeah. :p

    As for Mpreg...I totally and absolutely ADORE Mpreg fics! I haven't ever written them myself because I find it impossible for me to finish a multi-part fanfiction of any kind in any fandom and with an Mpreg it pretty much has to be multi-chapter if you want to do it right.

    I LOVE Ichigo being the one to be pregnant, as well. I often do Mpreg role plays whenever I can find and cajole someone into doing such a thing. So far I've been rather lucky in finding that my rp buddies generally either like Mpreg as well, or are at least willing to give it a shot.

    As for how many babies, I think twins would be cute. I generally like making it one male child, but recently I've thought twins are rather a cute idea. One boy, one girl. I think it would be cute if the boy were born first, but that sort of cuteness would only come into play if you were planning to take it further along the line and have them grow up a bit, perhaps into small children. It would be cute to watch the little girl follow her twin brother around like a shadow.

    I once saw a little girl do that to her brother, whom was about a year older, and I thought it was utterly cute. But, then again, that is entirely up to you. It's just my opinion that it's cute. :) And I would vote for twins anyway, because it's more work for Byakuya and Ichigo and would make for good comedy relief as well as good angst. :)

    Sorry it took me so long to get a review to this fic! ;_; I feel bad for taking two or three days to finish the fic so I could review it. :(

    However, I am proud of myself that now I can direct you to this review. :) Hope you find it helpful!
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  • From Aresy on December 15, 2007
    By the title, i didn't know it would get this hot. hehe Very good. I would want you to continue. ^^
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  • From Devil2Kyuubi on December 09, 2007
    it's very cute
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