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Reviews for The Broken Souls of the Seireitei

By : sweetsatincocoa
  • From ANON - Wolfie on December 10, 2012
    were you going to write more on this? the high school drama has really been hilarious. my friend looked at me odd when i started laughing. i had to read part of it too him and he started laughing as well. please continue it.
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  • From lara5170 on July 14, 2012
    I really hope & pray that you continue to write this story. I've tried to check in on it here & there. I wish this site gave update notifications. I wish I knew why both Ichigo & Isshin have different Shinigami outfits then the others. I know in this story Isshin is like crazy powerful but I hope Ichigo's reiatsu ends up being more powerful than his...since Ichigo already kicked ass & took names when he originally went to soul society ....plus he learned bankai in less than 3 days. I checked the latest info on one of the Bleach sites & read some of the final manga chapters that have been released and in both places it was mentioned that Ichigo is 2x as powerful as a captain, he learns things in days- where others learned things in years. It also mentions that at this point in the manga (because Ichigo's dad taught & trained him in the Dangai for 3 months(for the 3 months he was in the Dangai-time outside of it stood still,so it appeared as if he was gone for a second & reappeared with long hair)but after all that,(17 months later)when he regained his soul reaper power (because he trained so strongly in a different dimension) Ichigo's reiatsu is so powerful that he holds it back or it would affect humans & soul reapers badly(it'd suffocate them).It mentions that he had to learn to hold it back until nobody could feel it because his reatsui if lets it just flow freely it manifests not as air or spirit particles but it's so dense that it's solid. He also looked really hot with long hair.
    I really love this story & believe Ichigo is different & more powerful than the other soul reapers(I mean he's a human, but since Urahara had to cut his soul chain for him to get his soul reapers power back after Byakuya tried to kill him & reclaimed Rukia with Renji...so doesn't that mean Ichigo isn't really 'a live human' & that his 'human body' is actually HIS gigai?) I don't know but I really enjoy this story and I look forward to reading more of it,I'm in the middle of rereading it now & I stopped after Chad's party to leave a review but I'm going to finish rereading it now.
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  • From zamudiom on July 31, 2009
    bahaha the idea of Isane turning into Matsuflex is hilarious. btw my roommate and I watched that show and she thought I was crazy for thinking Matsuflex was hot. anyways, I think your story is amazing, the character development is great and I love how you put a lot of detail into each relationship. please reply soon.
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  • From orionshadow on July 29, 2009
    Happy birthday, sweet thing, but giftage? Please accept this bottle of ePommery and box of eThornton's chocolates.

    Nice chapter. Interesting composition of hatred being displayed. It will be interesting to see where you go with this.
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  • From setoswifey on May 01, 2009
    OMG!!! Why Toshiro WHY?! Poor Karin...I'm officially addicted to this story. Its like a soap oprea or something. I cant wait to read more.
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  • From orionshadow on April 27, 2009
    I think you probably do have the relationship of Isshin with his daughters correct. In the human world he did protect them, but the Seireitei is a different place where respect for captains and ranked officers is more important than other matters.

    It's still hard to believe Mayuri is dead and didn't use a fake body. It's even harder to believe he and Retsu were lovers (that idea makes me shudder in disgust). Anyway, good luck with your exam.

    Have some hot chocolate with an addition of nutmeg, brandy and cinnamon. It's very cold here.
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  • From orionshadow on April 07, 2009
    I remember reading 'The Pursuit of Love' by Collette. A bitter sweet story, with the emphasis laid on the bitter which made me wonder if that is what you are preparing us for. Thank goodness you didn't make Yachiru stupid or too young. I was pleased she showed the cunning that she conceals through her cuteness.

    Heaven's above. We'll be kneedeep in Zaraki/Matsumoto bratlings in no time. Be afraid. Be very afraid.

    I enjoyed this. Sorry your job is interfering with your writing. It happens like that, but I always look forward to your updates.
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  • From orionshadow on March 27, 2009
    Grovel, grovel. Sorry I haven't reviewed before this. And such a good chapter. I like Tatsuki with Renji, they work well together, especially the way you write them. Then there's that build up toward the meeting between Ran and Yachiru. Dum, dum, dum. Dramatic.

    Look forward to the next.
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  • From orionshadow on February 15, 2009
    Dear heaven. What will happen next? Tatsuki is a stripper and Renji loves her. Interesting. Its an interesting way to make an awkward relationship impossible. And I don't know why I keep thinking there's something off about the relationship between Ukitake and Unohana. Or maybe I want there to be something between them because it would be nice for her after that scummy makeup wearing creep. Poor Uryu and Nemu. So many shattered hopes and blighted lives.

    And I enjoyed it. I enoyed all the pain and angst. Sick puppy, that's me.

    Have a Fire-engine. With all the fires in Australia we could probably do with some more.

    Update!
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  • From orionshadow on February 06, 2009
    Sorry to hear life is making you suffer. I hope it's better now. Also I haven't reviewed because somehow my life wants to mimic yours. Gah. It's enough to turn a person to drink.

    I prefer Tatsuki with Renji to Orihime. Why does that girl irritate me so? And Soi is such a marvellous manipulator, getting Karin following her orders by being mean. Hahahaha.

    Look forward to the next update. Have some lime, ginger and soda. We're in the middle of a heat wave here.
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  • From orionshadow on January 09, 2009
    I don't see why you called this a filler. It was touching and provided a depth of background into your perception of Byuakuya. The touches of humour gave a pleasant contrast and flavour to this chapter. I'm very interested in where you will be taking this story next. Thank you for updating.
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  • From Afrieal on January 08, 2009
    *giggling* oh gods you're good....I can see the whole thing playing out like that...keep up the great work we look foreward to more.

    Af and Ry
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  • From missbri88 on January 07, 2009
    oh wow... that was amazing. I loved how you worked memories in and the zanpaktou interaction was refreshing and beautiful. I cant wait to find out Bya-boo's secert too!!! ^^ thanks for another awesome chapter. I think this is my fave. lol
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  • From orionshadow on December 19, 2008
    I apologise for not reviewing earlier.

    The way you handle relationships is refreshing and realistic. I'm excited about what you have planned for the future. Retsu as Nemu's mother? Had Mayuri been feeding her drugs or did he hypnotise her. My mind is boggling. There also seems to be something deeper here between Retsu and Ukitake.

    I wonder what you new and amazing development you have in store for the next (great) chapter.

    Have some eggnog with brandy and nutmeg. Love the nutmeg.
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  • From missbri88 on December 08, 2008
    Oh it was so worth the read! I got a little emotional with Kisuke and Yoruichi for a second. But the chapter was awesome as always! See ya next chappie!!
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