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Reviews for The Broken Souls of the Seireitei

By : sweetsatincocoa
  • From orionshadow on February 19, 2008
    Hey. Good to see you're back. Momo deserved everything she got. Pleased you updated.

    Warm sake?
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  • From maidenhair on February 18, 2008
    This is good. I love the way you're writing Zaraki, and so many of the characters! You have a great voice. Good work.
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  • From orionshadow on February 05, 2008
    I've just found time to read the revision. Life keeps getting busy.
    Dear me. Momo is a pain. I've always thought she was a nasty person who in indulged by too many people.
    Zaraki and Matsumoto. Nice.
    New chapter?
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  • From orionshadow on January 18, 2008
    Mmmn. Nice. Sorry I didn't have a chance to review this before. Look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From orionshadow on December 17, 2007
    Okay. smithshadow@hotmail.com.

    *pours sake for you*. My laptop is now insanely jealous of you. I had to threaten it with power outages. XD
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  • From orionshadow on December 09, 2007
    'Wow, wow, wow, wow, unbelieveable', to quote an old Kate Bush song.

    I was so excited to see your update. Yay, another chapter and a good one. Byakuya cooking! Rukai plotting and sleeping in a wardrobe. Lol. *Serves e-sake.* Kempai, or proust or chinchin. *Drinks sake you served earlier.* Mmmm, nice.

    One thing, don't rush your writing. Not that I'm saying this is rushed or anything, but from experience (yeah, I have some) it's unsatisfying for the author, you. I am happy to see your updates, but only when you're ready. (I have to say things like that. It's in my contract. Actually I'd be begging for another update if I thought it would work. ^.^)
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  • From Afrieal on December 04, 2007
    ummmm *waits for brain to reboot * wow that was so....wow oh oh Af's gone to lala land that was hot thanks for the great citrus fun... is there going to be more?

    Rysh and Af
    RABID yaoi fangirls
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  • From orionshadow on December 04, 2007
    Now I have to take a cold shower. Damn. I think I need some ice cubes as well.

    Yes, well. *Clears throat nervously*. Good. May I ask for more? Please.

    Thanks for writing this. I'm enjoying it very much.
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  • From orionshadow on November 29, 2007
    At last, an update and it was worth the wait. Thank you for that.
    Was there a hint of something between Zaraki and Matsumoto? As you may know I love them together.
    Kudos.

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  • From orionshadow on November 24, 2007
    I saw the update and hoped. Oh well, with your commute I'm not suprised, but it gave me a great excuse to read and enjoy this story again. I wait, as patiently as I can, for the next chapter. Keep up the great story telling.
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  • From Afrieal on November 11, 2007
    oooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooo is Uryuu going to kill the psychotic mime from hell??? Affie and I will make a gift basket of pretty sewing things for him as a thank you... we cna't stand him either... he looks like a hollow in heat and acts like one too... poor little Nemu deserves the happiness she gets with Uryuu thanks for the great story so far

    Rysha and Affie
    who are gonna make a plushy of the psychotic mime stuffed with catnip for thier psychotic cats
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  • From orionshadow on November 11, 2007
    So sweet. (Dashes tear from eye). I feel for Kira, Ranjiku, Nemu and Uryu.

    It's funny, but I never really liked Momo. She's a character I never warmed to for some reason. XD

    Next, please.
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  • From ANON - BennyPeace on November 06, 2007
    This is a fantastic story. Hilarious. Probably my favorite at the moment. Pleaseee email me when you update. I really do love this.
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  • From orionshadow on November 06, 2007
    I want to read the next chapter, please. What's going to happen. This is great and funny.
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  • From orionshadow on November 03, 2007
    Humour and angst. Good work. I enjoyed this.
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