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Reviews for The Broken Souls of the Seireitei

By : sweetsatincocoa
  • From remyjames on July 23, 2008
    Ewww! Talk about nasty :( Never expected to see that particular pairing. I guess I can add that to my 'crack pairing I never want to see having sex' list.

    Anyway, have a great birthday dear heart!! :D
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  • From orionshadow on July 10, 2008
    That was fantastic! More, more, more, more. The plot is getting good with the vizards possibly taking part in the fight against Captain Scumbag.
    Knowing you, you might add yet another twist and get Ishida to challenge the dimwit and become a Captain, but what ever you write will be intesting and worth waiting for.

    Have some Jacob's Creek Merlot. It's good and might inspire you to write.
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  • From remyjames on July 10, 2008
    Wow. So much drama. Happy to see the update :) I'm sure Isane was saying something like 'I miss you, I want you back, I'm gonna have your baby...' Whatever! Anyway, awesome update. Glad the Vizards decided to join. That helps out a lot.
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  • From orionshadow on June 19, 2008
    More twisted and sad relationships. I'm pleased that sick bastard (Kurotsuchi) is going to be beaten to a bloody pulp. It will suit him more than living. Interesting observation about the place the manga is and the strange relationships between Urhara and Aizen. What will you come up with next?

    Sorry to hear you're still looking. Good luck, but the bonus is for the people who enjoy your writing. We get updates much sooner.
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  • From remyjames on June 18, 2008
    Awww! I'm curious as to who the spy is. Something I'll have to think on.
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  • From orionshadow on June 08, 2008
    So, how's the job hunting going?

    I like what you're doiong with Zaraki and Matsumoto. Imagine him being sweet. I'm surprised his previous girl friend is still breathing.

    Byakuya is cute again. Funny, I never saw him as cute before. Cold, arrogant, aloof, yeah, but not cute.

    Look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From SarahTaylor on June 08, 2008
    I had to say that I loved the mention of Cowboy Bebop. 'I call it the Faye Valentine' was just brill. I do like this story and look forward to the next update.
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  • From remyjames on June 08, 2008
    Soi-Fon and Yuzu? Really? I don't how I feel about that. Makes me a little uncomfortable, like watching a kid taking a beat down for a bunch of older kids. Oh and the truth about Zakari's former relationship with Kotetsu was very enlightening. Make me wonder why she is trying so hard to hold on to him if she really doesn't want him (maybe she got knocked up and doesn't know who the father is or something). Whatever is going on, I look forward to the next chapter. I really do hope that Ichigo can convince the Vizards to come back.
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  • From Shiro813Flowergurl on June 08, 2008
    lol! that has got to suck, cum in the eye! XP

    Hmmm, for Zakari and Masumoto....how 'bout a walk around their home places in Rokya-town! (I can't remember the right word>>;)
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  • From remyjames on June 03, 2008
    Isshin was the mystery man? Wow! I was so sure it was Byakuya. Man, there is drama around every corner. I can't wait to read the next chapter :)
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  • From remyjames on June 02, 2008
    In answer to your question: you did awesome :)!!!!!
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  • From remyjames on June 02, 2008
    Chapter 4 had more drama that General Hospital! I'm loving this story :)
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  • From Cuchulainn on May 30, 2008
    This is a rarity. It has both m/m, f/m going on. Yeah. I like it. Byakuya creeped me out in the last chapter, but he creeps me out normally. Don't know why. Kenpachi in love with Rangiku is good too.

    Very unique writing style. Why this story hasn't got more reviews puzzles me.

    Keep it up. I'll be watching for the next chapter.



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  • From orionshadow on May 28, 2008
    Love is in the air and people keep stuffing up. How like real life. Hehehe. Nice to see the touches you put in this unique tale you are telling. So much happens, so much goes on and Byakuya in love? He's almost sweet. (Did I say that?)

    Good work.

    Have you found another job yet?

    *pours plum wine*. Try this. It's different.
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  • From Shiro813Flowergurl on May 28, 2008
    *Droooling* what. a. Sex Scene!!! very hawt and streamy...*I'm getting the vapours here!* XD

    Ooooh, but it was ruined slightly with Jyuushirou Mentioning Isshin!!!! THE DRAMA!!! a backstory with him and Shunsui will be featured in future chapters, ne? I would also like to hear about Jyuu's time with Aizen too if possible...

    Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!~ ^_____^
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