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Reviews for The Broken Souls of the Seireitei

By : sweetsatincocoa
  • From missbri88 on December 03, 2008
    Nice chapter. Very unexpected though. ^^ The playfully teasing Ichigo and Rukia, and I loved the open Byakushi! Then the past Shinji/Aizen...WOOOOW! It was amazing. And Shinji has my idea of fun! Cant wait for the next chappie!!!
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  • From missbri88 on November 08, 2008
    Wow... I was like "wtf?! Shinji?!" and then when Urahara showed up, I was like "omg." And this wasnt anything of wat i was expecting, but it was great. and I feel so sorry for Retsu... even if her lover was an asshole. But I'll be waiting for your next update!!! loves, hugs, and kisses!!!
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  • From orionshadow on November 07, 2008
    Wow. All I can say is Wow. Anticlimatic as a fight, which you obviously intended and funny and sad. But is that sad excuse for a captain really dead? So easily? Is Yamamoto losing it? (We all know the answer to that.)

    Aizen is a slut. Someone had to say it. I want to see the colour of his blood too.

    Great work and thanks for the update. Have some lemon, lime and bitters.
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  • From missbri88 on October 22, 2008
    Oh my fucking GOD!!!! Was sooo unexpected! Shinji?! Where the hell? When the hell did he jump in this?! This is fucking crazy, maddening, insane... That was good! Too good!!! I dont know what to say but that I want more! I cant wait for the next chapters... I wonder how many parts the fight will be...? Hm... OH WELL! Thanks for the update!
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  • From SarahTaylor on October 12, 2008
    Um, what happened to Urahara?? Will Shiji be strong enough to beat Mayuri?? Need more...
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  • From remyjames on October 12, 2008
    Wha...huh...wha?!!! Shinji?! I thought it was Urahara?!
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  • From SirynsMagick on October 12, 2008
    Woah!! Really wasn't expecting that one. But still where's Getta-Boushi-san?

    Update soon please!!

    Ganbatte
    Ryn
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  • From Afrieal on October 11, 2008
    *laughing* oh snap that was one plot twist neither of us expected.... Rysh and i got up and started dancing around the apartment chanting "The Psychotic Mime's gonna get it" and the cats for once just sat and watched Yamma-Jii laughed at us and then said something about being glad we were so wierd so he had a subject for his abnormal psyche papers *grin* keep up the great work we look foreward to seeing the slime critter go down.

    Affie and Rysha
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  • From Shaylilin on October 11, 2008
    Jimminy Crickets, what a horrible cliffie!

    *sigh* I guess I'll just have to wait with everyone else.
    Awesome chapter. I enjoyed seeing what everyone was doing while waiting for the fight.
    Matsumoto is probably my favorite. Hyped on coffee. *Teehee*

    I can't wait for more.
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  • From orionshadow on October 11, 2008
    Heheheheh. Funny how sometimes the story surprises the author. Happens to me too (often). Sorry to hear the meds are affecting you. Poor sweetsatincocoa.

    Great update and can't wait to read the rest of this. Shinji? I'd love to see a Vizard kick Mayuri's arse.

    Here, have some 2006 Beajoulais. It's spring here and the wine is perfect for this weather.
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  • From missbri88 on September 14, 2008
    Yay! Next the fight scene! Im waiting on the edge of my seat! I love this story by the way. Its fluffy and all but I guess that makes it better.... Hm...
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  • From orionshadow on September 13, 2008
    Thank you for updating. Thank you. Thank you. Have I grovelled enough? Wow. The fight scene is looming and Zaraki is in love and Byakuya is being himself again. Kira should get over Gin. It's easy. Just say he's a slimy squint eyed bastard who enjoys eating hamsters. That should do the trick.

    Here's a mix of cranberry and lemonade. Very refreshing.
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  • From orionshadow on August 21, 2008
    You are one crazy person. Loved the chapter with Jurisho and Shunsui finally putting the past behind them. So much happening with Yumichika and Ikkaku. And Hantoro and Rukia? That works. Why does that work?

    *Looks pleadingly*. Update? Go on, you know you want to.
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  • From orionshadow on August 11, 2008
    It always pleases me to see an update of this story. The humour in this chapter was a change of pace that was appreciated as some of the earlier chapters were so dark and intense. I suppose it's a softening up process, mmmm? Lulling your poor readers into a sense of WAFF and then when the promised fight happens it will be back to the angsty, bitter story.

    As usual a pleasure to read. Look forward to the next update. Here, have a Berroca (vitamin B compound). I'm sick at the moment and can't drink.
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  • From orionshadow on July 25, 2008
    Champange, let's see. I think Pommery is suitable for this occasion. Kempai. Happy birthday!!!!!!

    Unohana and Mayuri. Creep and beauty. How could she? I mean I understand him, but he's such a sleazy scuzzball. Kill him, kill him painfully. Now. But then again, prolonged torture can be fun.
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