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By : TrulyWished
  • From ANON - erokappa on August 13, 2007
    PLEASE ADD MORE SOON!! I love this story and it pulls at my heart strings!! Poor Kira! You have written him perfectly and Ikkaku! WOW!! You did so well with him too!!
    Keep up the wonderful work!!

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  • From DuosAngel on August 12, 2007
    I love it! Oh but I almost cried so many times. Poor Kira! Damn Gin to hell! And just what did he do to the rest of the third division? What couldn't Kira protect them from? And what will Ikkaku do when he finds out?
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  • From sweetsatincocoa on August 11, 2007
    Kira is so frightened...poor thing. Keep going. I'm enjoying myself and want to see Kira's prize.
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  • From teacupprincess14 on August 11, 2007
    "Deep breathes, Kira. You can do this, you're not a child anymore. There is no need for Tetsummi to carry you here. But it would be so great if he were here, big hands on my shoulders to push me forward. The last steps are always the hardest, that final chance to flee the most difficult to give up.

    Hadarame already "

    breaths/Madarame and perhaps it would look better with hyphens than commas?

    s' not criticisms just suggestions! I liked the fic!
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  • From BeniHime on August 11, 2007
    yeah! the ice is melting! it was as always a pleasure to read your story. ^^ please continue as soon as you can.
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  • From BeniHime on August 10, 2007
    you would never ever do this right? Let Ikkaku beat the answers out of sweet little Kira.

    Again I can only say I feel sorry for Kira. But not for the squad. When Ikkaku is finished with them, then there will be another decent fighting squad and Kira will probably be a man. By any means. XD

    the way you let Ikkaku act is so much like him. You see who has trained him. And he is giving it to his squad. Please continue. I can't wait until the next chapter is up.

    Greetings

    Beni
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  • From nekogirl1 on August 09, 2007
    WOW!! I loved this story!! Kira is so perfect & submissive. The light Ichimaru mentions & the intense friendship between Kira & his 3rd is amazing within the plot. I actually never liked Ikkaku, but you've made me like him now. I can't wait to see where the plot goes and what happans with Kira. Update now!!! *huggles her Kira plushie & holds it* Kira commands so too!
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  • From ANON - young_saiyan on August 09, 2007
    I never thought of Ikkaku paired up with Kira, but the way you write it makes me seem stupid for not seeing it before. Great piece of work! Please send me an email when you update your story!
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  • From BeniHime on August 09, 2007
    Tetsummi is so great! I like him a lot. Go Tetsummi! *chears for all the good guys*
    *secretly also for the bad ones* XD
    Please continue.
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  • From BeniHime on August 09, 2007
    poor kira. but ichimaru is pure evil. i feel sorry for kira. Go ikkaku! Heal is broken soul! continue. I like the way of your writing. it's beautiful. Hope to read from you soon. ^^
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  • From MakaiKitty on August 08, 2007
    Good job. Looking forward to seeing where the next chapter(s) go. Kira's one of my all time faves, so any fics with him in them are always a treat! ^-^
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  • From sweetsatincocoa on August 08, 2007
    My eyes are full of tears. One, because it didn't last long enough. Two, because of your awesome talent. You made the readers understand at the same time you made those snarky unnamed seats understand. Heartwrenching. As long as you write like this, I can always encourage you. :) Also if you ever need help, just email me.
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  • From sweetsatincocoa on August 08, 2007
    Stop playing. You know this is brilliant. Please write more. Poor Kira, it makes me so sad. :( Love it.
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  • From ANON - bahnona on August 07, 2007
    I don't usually review, but I wanted to say how much I liked this story. I love how you portray Ikkaku: he's still a little goofy, but he's not a total buffoon, as some authors portray him. And I actually don't hate your Kira. He's my fourth-least-favorite (behind Mayuri, Aizen and Gin). I might have to rethink that! So, please continue as you've started. I like the switch in perspectives, especially when you show each character's different view of the same events. Well done.
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