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Reviews for One is Too Many

By : TrulyWished
  • From DuosAngel on August 17, 2007
    So this is going to be my favorite chapter, if only for the pouting Kira at the end. But I can't think of where the fic will go now. Guess i'll just have to sit back and be surprised.
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  • From eosphoros on August 16, 2007
    An update! W00t!

    Can't wait to see the next chapter and I'm looking forward to finding out what happened to the former vice captain/lieutenant/fukutaicho!
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  • From ANON - silverblaise on August 15, 2007
    Aaagh! Please continue with this soon! I hate getting into a good fic and then realising it's not finished. ^^; This story is so - ugh I don't know . . . It's almost made me feel like crying, and feel disgusted - but not in a bad way - I suppose it's also because I really hate abuse in all forms, but it's good, that you can bring out such emotions in people with a story. :-) I don't know these characters, I haven't watched that far in Bleach yet (I looked them up on Google just to get an idea of who they were) but the story sounded good and I'm enjoying it so far! So please keep it up! :-D
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  • From sweetsatincocoa on August 14, 2007
    His head jerks around and he stares at me, horrified. Well, if I'd been caught trying to steal someone else's man, I'd be horrified too.


    You are hardcore. You make my life right now. This makes my heart race. And nothing but Batman and fried chicken make my heart race. Want some cheesecake? Lol. Please continue. Kira says he's anxious to be kissed again and Ikkaku is tired of palming off. The three of us want the next chapter. :)
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  • From DuosAngel on August 14, 2007
    Hm, I'd like to think Ikkaku is making progress here but I'm not sure. I wonder what he'll do when he learns about Kanvis? I keep thinking that once he figures out all the things Gin did that he should report it to Yama-jii (first division captain). But I'll just have to wait to see what happens, ne?
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  • From BeniHime on August 14, 2007
    Woah! At the begining of your story I had to force myself to read it. But it was worse the truble I put myself in. It was again amazing. And oh so sweet how Kira reacted to Ikkaku kissing him. *happy sigh*
    But who is Tatsuyama? oO Well I am sure you let us find out in the next chapter. ^^ Hope to read from you soon. ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2007
    post. faster. oh my god.
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  • From BrucesGirl on August 14, 2007
    Wow. Just wow. I'm really impressed with the way you are characterizing Ikkaku. He's so gentle and clueless, unable to help Kira. He wants to reach out and touch him without Kira shying away from him, but I don't see it happening in the near future.

    What really got me was Kira asking Ikkaku to not go to his rooms and Ikkaku accepting it so gently. I really like the way this is going. I really hope that smut doesn't cheapen this fic, if you understand what I mean. It's really very beautiful. I can't wait for the time that Ikkaku touches Kira and Kira doesn't shy away from him or shiver in fear.

    God, Gin's such a bastard. I love how you've given him personality without even including him in the story. Beautiful job! Bravo!
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  • From MakaiKitty on August 14, 2007
    15 chapters? Yay! Loving this so far, and I can't wait to see more. (Love Kira's jewlery, buy the way. I've always been a sucker for peircings *LOL*)
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  • From ANON - Khelsea on August 14, 2007
    I love it. But your grammar needs a little work. It can make the reading awkard at times.

    Other than that, the plot so far is very piqueing. And I love the couple. Its my first one for these two and I adore it.

    Much thanks! Keep up the good work!!
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  • From sweetsatincocoa on August 13, 2007
    Please make Ikkaku fuck up those brats that hurt Kira's feelings. And when do they start making sexy time? I'm impatient...don't make me act like Yachiru. Love ya!
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  • From ANON - Siryn on August 13, 2007
    This story is awesome. Poor Kira. What has he endured? Will Ikkaku be able to bring Kira into brighter days filled with true smiles? Will Kira stop being the perfect obedient slave? or Will he continue to fear Ikkaku's rath if he is not perfectly obedient?

    I wonder . . .

    Please update soon!
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  • From eosphoros on August 13, 2007
    Bless you and your attention seeking! I stumbled across this story yesterday and hadn't expected any kind of update soon but hope dies last, right?

    The way you write Kira differs very much from the image of him I have in my head but my view of him and Ichimaru are a little askew so it doesn't matter XD. It's a very nice story! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From BeniHime on August 13, 2007
    poor kira. I feel so sorry for him. the new recriurts are a pain in the ass. but i bet know that ikkaku knows their names, hell will break lose. Go Ikkaku! Punish them for making fun of kira! Hope to read from you soon. ^^
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  • From DuosAngel on August 13, 2007
    Wow, I didn't think Kira would ever act this submissive. I can't wait to see what Ikkaku does to the three brats who started this. It's time he put his years in the Eleventh to good use. Thanks for the extra chapter. Dying to read the next one though.
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