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Reviews for One is Too Many

By : TrulyWished
  • From eosphoros on August 24, 2007
    Ah, Yumichika, you're a good man!

    Only two chapters to go! *sniffles*
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  • From BeniHime on August 24, 2007
    I laughed my head of. Yumichika running to get of the energy. XDD And then his nails. Muahahahahaha...
    *cough*
    Stupid bubble gum...
    Anyway this was fun to read how yumi get rid of the energy. Keep going. Hope to hear from you soon. ^^
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  • From DuosAngel on August 24, 2007
    *Blinks* So short...and we still don't know who all is dead. And there's only two more chapters left now...*Perks up* However I have full faith that you won't end this with our main characters dying! So I'll just sit here and pine fo the next chapter. Update soon!
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  • From Afrieal on August 24, 2007
    Oh goddess Oh goddess Oh goddess you are truely evil thank you we love it *sigh* there goes Affie she accidentally let the cat out and is chasing it and calling it a no good hollow *sigh* i have GOT to cut her off the caffine *giggle* keep up the great work even if you're evil with the cliffy we're looking foreward to more

    Rysha & Affie
    who are moving from onion town to sea-town in a week

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  • From MakaiKitty on August 23, 2007
    You're not going to give us an unhappy ending, now are you? *keeping her fingers crossed for a happy ending* I'm looking forward to see how this ends. Good job!
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  • From BeniHime on August 23, 2007
    woah! He masterd Bankai! I am so nervous. Please continue! What was Yumichika doing? Startind to take away the Reiatsu, that was to much for poor Kira? Please let me and the others find out in the next chapter. Keep going. Hope to read from you soon. ^^
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  • From eosphoros on August 23, 2007
    O_O

    KJSFJSLKDJSH!?!

    *ded*
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  • From DuosAngel on August 23, 2007
    You didn't really kill them did you? With three chapters left how could you? You're just being mean right? Right?
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  • From eosphoros on August 22, 2007
    ^___^

    It makes me sad that it's going to be over soon. *sigh*
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  • From BeniHime on August 22, 2007
    YEAH! Go Yumichika! Teach Kira more lessons: 'How do I get what I want by pouting?'!!!! a good chapter. ^^ i loved it. Kira is right to train the lot in proper Kido use. Keep going! Hope to read from you soon. ^^
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  • From sweetsatincocoa on August 22, 2007
    The smex!!! The smex!!! And the love...awww...but the SMEX! *is turning into Ichimaru* I'm supposed to be at work, but I'm here fiddling areound with you. It makes me want to call out and rent gay porn...I love it love it love it!
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  • From eosphoros on August 22, 2007
    The first half fried my brain, the second half melted it to mush. Now, I'm keeping it in a jar on my desk. XD

    Btw, I think I caught a small mistake you've made: Ikkaku is baldy's first name and Madarame is his family name. So it should probably be 'Captain Madarame' instead of 'Captain Ikkaku' (although I think it'd be kinda cute if Kira kept calling him that ^_^).

    Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From Afrieal on August 22, 2007
    Okay now that i've tied Affie to the chair (a previous fanfic we read made her want to run screeching down the street in happiness this one almost got her doing just that too:) ) We love the fact you're not torturing them much in this chappy my mate is looking at me giggling like a maniac and hiding the spiced rum and the wine aww damn he took the whiskey too oh well wish i could send you cyber killer death by chocolate brownies and ice cream as a thank you

    Rysha and Affie
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  • From MakaiKitty on August 22, 2007
    Wow. The first half of the chapter was, like... sizzles... hot! Then it got all sweet and romantic at the end. My favorite chapter, far and away! Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From BeniHime on August 21, 2007
    AH NO! How can they both be this stupid?! The are so in love with each other!
    *sigh*
    Maybe they come to there mind in the next chapter. Keep going. Hope to read from you soon. ^^
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