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Reviews for Black-and-Red Conflict

By : ghostraven
  • From marquesgue1 on May 19, 2007
    first time reviewing any bleach fic loool but out of all the ones i've read, yours is the one that has me well and truly hooked (among others but his one just hit the heart that much closer lol) so i thought i'd make an effort loool

    man they just went from one extreme to another. when Byakuya called Renji a stray dog it hit me hard i swear, you had mye eyes going wide and my chest hurting with that one and then the way Renji snapped and just told byakuya to fuck off - more pain :s *sigh* they are two completely different personalities and bound to clash but the fact that they were getting along well and byakuya just cut renji off without so much as a word was harsh - how is a person meant to understand that? if i had been renji i'd probably have done worse! (and gotten kicked out of gotei 13 lol) but yeah. great fic so far and i can't wait for you to update!!!

    Hina xXxx


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  • From BrucesGirl on May 19, 2007
    God! The tension is killing me. You have an excellent way of describing the situations, that's for sure. I love how Byakuya just looks at Renji and knows what he wants, wants to reach for it, and because of all that damn pride, he just can't seem to get it.

    He wants Renji's butt! Actually, he would totally bend over for it.

    Anyway, back to the point. Ahem.

    The tension between them is borne, I believe, from a mutual respect. As much as Byakuya detests Renji's breeding, he can't help but care about him. If you read the manga, you definitely know what I'm talking about. When he beat Renji, in the anime, they didn't do the scene justice. In the manga, his eyes softened, and he nearly smiled as he dropped his scarf down on Renji.

    Renji makes Byakuya happy.

    Great UST in this chappy. Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From BrucesGirl on May 16, 2007
    Hi! I totally would have emailed you instead, but I couldn't find your email on your profile at all. We (Brightside and I) were wondering if you wouldn't mind altering the name of your fiction? You see, we have had the title Fire and Ice on this board since last year, and it's our masterpiece of a story that we truly love and have put massive hours of effort into.

    Not that we are flaming you at all, since we can see you have a lot of talent, but as we are proud of our Fire and Ice, and we've had the name for long, we thought that you would appreciate our polite request to change the name of your fiction.

    As far as your fiction goes,

    I enjoy the characters a lot. Byakuya is very icy... My sweet ice prince. Renji is a wonderful compliment to his character, and they are almost canon, ne?

    Anyways, great story. Look forward to more!
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