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Reviews for Black-and-Red Conflict

By : ghostraven
  • From marquesgue1 on June 10, 2007
    O_O oh. my. god.

    ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmydgodohmygodohmygod O_O you left it there O_O... I can't believe... you left it there *cries* oh god and he apologized and it came to this *shakes head* well, I suppose it needed to be said and Renji sure has guts so I suppose only he could've said it. But that cliffhanger was cruel you should have mercy on us loool :D it was a good chapter though and I liked the scene with Byakuya and Senbonzakura, it was interesting and almost hauntilngly poetic if you see what I mean. Anyway lol I liked it ^_^ Thanks for the update

    Hina xXxx
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  • From fantasyfabricator on June 09, 2007
    First off I want to say that this has been a riveting story. I'm impressed with the your perspective and interpretation of Byakuya and Renji. Fiery passion and icy stoicism....wonderfully written.

    This particular chapter gripped my heart. Incidentally I had iTunes on random and "You Run" by Submersed played while I was reading it. Oh.My.God....it made it even more powerful.

    I could felt the weight Byakuya's loss and gritted my teeth along with Renji's frustration...5-stars...beautifully written emotion.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 09, 2007
    What did you do????

    Update, I NEED to know what's going on. Please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 03, 2007
    No Byakuya/Renji loving!? =O

    Oh well, Jyuushiro x Shunsui is a pretty cute pairing ^^
    So sweet, they're worrying about the other two ^^

    Keep on writing ;D
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  • From Ginny on June 03, 2007
    Ok while I do love Shunsui and Shuichiro together (they're so sweet and caring and you wrote them very, very well) I SO want to know what will happen neeeext! You totally got me hooked up to this, I can assure you!
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  • From marquesgue1 on June 03, 2007
    Oooh I didn't mind this chapter at all :D heh, it was great! Made me want to read the story of these two heh :d but yeah, Shinsui is perceptive ne? He's right as well because there's bound to be loads of problems with this relationship because of the characters of the people involved in it *sigh8 but yeah ^_^ cool update, thanks.


    Hina xXxx

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  • From americanxminority on May 30, 2007
    This is incredibly GOOOOOOOOOOD!
    I really hope there's more.
    I'd VERY much love to read more.
    Plz?
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  • From Ginny on May 28, 2007
    Beautiful chapter once more; I love how Rukia found Renji on her doorstap, it's so sweet... And it's amazing how well you've kept them in character, well done!
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  • From marquesgue1 on May 28, 2007
    Ooooh I was so happy when I saw another update!!! I know people don't update every day lol but I chek just in case :D and as alwasy no dissappointment here ^_^. I liked the way you portrayed Renji and Rukia together, and poor Richiki lol he felt so guilty after it all - I felt bad for him lol when more and more people started arriving and he told them all *sigh*... but I guess he did bring it on himself a little ne? But the ending for the chapter was really sad :s, I'm wondering how they're going to get through this - Renji and Byakuya I mean, but I think you know you're doing a really good job it ^_6

    thanks for the update

    Hina xXxx
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2007
    Sorry I haven't review your fic before now! I thought I did but I must have forgotten T_T
    Byakuya/Renji is my absolute favourite pairing ;) You portray them so nicely and that sudden kiss; mmmmmm. Can't wait to see more of this fic!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on May 28, 2007
    Oh boy, this is getting tense.
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  • From Ginny on May 27, 2007
    Oh... My... God... indeed! Wow... Just wow! O_O
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on May 27, 2007
    Wow. Palpable tension. Relieve it soon, please. Or at least extend it.
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  • From marquesgue1 on May 26, 2007
    YAY! You updated!!! I've been checking everyday loool (a bit extrme I know lol) but yeahh :) like the first wto chapters it was amazingly intense and I loved it! And then Byakuya just seemed to snap and I was like O_O whoa, but then he left the office and Renji was in a state of sock - but the build up too that was fantastic too, I mean they're so angry and Byakuya clearly didn't know how to just diffusethe situation, I suppose his pride wouldn't have let him simpley apologise for letting things deteriorate like that 0 but then if he had done that lol we wouldn't have had the amazing turn out we did heh :D so yeah

    Thanks for the update and you're writing is amazing
    Hina xXxx
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  • From Ginny on May 23, 2007
    Ooooh this is very good! |I like how you describe the characters and their reactions to their own feelings and to eachothers. It's pretty much how I see them, too. Poor Renji... Looking forwarth to another chapter!
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