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Reviews for Black-and-Red Conflict

By : ghostraven
  • From xdseme on June 23, 2007
    Oops! *sheepish grin* That should read 'have not written them out of character' sorry y'al! *Note to self - Read your own reviews before posting!* :-P
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  • From xdseme on June 23, 2007
    This would have to be one of the best stories that I have read about ByaRen! I am really enjoying it, the tension is palpable in its intensity and it reads very smoothly. I feel that you have written them out of character as there are no jarring parts of interaction. Discription is also well done, I can picture things clearly in my mind as it is happening on the page. The only problem I have is with the occasional spelling mistake. But like I said it is occasional, and doesn't detract dramatically from the story. Usually with such mistakes I can't continue to read as they are so jarring that they snap me out of that 'space' I was in whilst reading, but with yours, whilst I notice them, I'm too impatient to read the story to allow them to bother me! Well done, I look forward to reading more!
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  • From marquesgue1 on June 23, 2007
    *sigh* well at least - Byakuya attempted to make amends... sort of umm well he didn't do it very well and I guess after what happened I wouldn't give a crap either if I was Renji... and then well, the kimono *shakes head* that didn't work out well did it? Then he banned Renji from going on the mission and the conflict has gotten worse lol, this fic is well named ^_6 great update as always and can't wait for the next one. Thanks ^_^

    Hina xXxx
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  • From marquesgue1 on June 20, 2007
    :s *sigh* I feel bad for renji - I mean, he ahs the right to feel that way and then Rukia's invitation just seemed to make him sort of panic. I liek the way you're portraying his relationship with Rukia (probably mentioned this already) and I think that Rukia's thought patterns seem very Ic too which is really cool ^_^ anyway lol, thanks for the update!!!

    Hina xXxx
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  • From lunaticopandora on June 20, 2007
    *twitchjerkflail* I love this story! I keep poking around to see if there's more, I adore it beyond reason :D You're doing such a good job of keeping everyone in character through it all, and you put just enough detail into things.
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  • From on June 19, 2007
    ;o;~

    First of all, when I read your reply to my comment, I felt so flatter xDDDDD Thanks!

    I feel so bad for Renji in these last chapters... First he thinks he can melt Byakuya's iceness, then he is confronted with his roughness and even know he still clings on some hope that maybe there is more to Byakuya then he lets on. It's so confusing, and, when they acctually meet again, it's going to be so full of yelling xD

    I like how you describe Renji's feelings, like to see how you can work with him even in the most horribles scenarios, I think I already said that, but doesn't matter 8DDD

    See ya o/
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  • From Ginny on June 19, 2007
    Gods poor poor Renji... I litterly had tears in my eyes... Damn it byakuya!
    Very well written, and I can't wait to see more but... Damn it!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 19, 2007
    Deeper and deeper into the twisted corridors of the mirror house we go. Please, update again soon.
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  • From marquesgue1 on June 16, 2007
    whoa O_O intense. really intense. really hot O_O and really well written so kudo's to you ^_^ heh. But now I'm wondering if this is actually going to make things worse between them :s I mean - Renji's going to be pretty pissed off about it so... *sigh* but then i suppose things between two people like that will take a while to iron out, not to mention that byakuya still has the problem with actually thinking about Hisana. Anyway, as always great update :D thanks ^_6

    Hina xXxx
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 16, 2007
    Ye gods you are evil. Soooo evil.
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  • From on June 16, 2007
    I didn't had an account here, and would'd sent you an e-mail, but after this last chapter I felt there I just had to write a review. I don't know, but sometimes reviews are better than e-mails o_õ

    I just can't imagine how hard it must had been for you to write this.

    After reading all the fic it's just obvious that you're, no matter what, trying to make it IC, trying not to make them suddenly jump in each other's arms, and to do something like you did in this chapter and still get it not to be OOC, it's simply amazing.

    Amazing how you constructed the fiction, the characters, the background, the atmosphere, the scenes. It's just amazing. I've only encountered few people who had this kind of ability in fanfitions.

    So, even if things keep going darker, know that you've done a great job with this fic.

    Kisses and see you in the next review o/
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  • From marquesgue1 on June 13, 2007
    Wow O_O intense, I'm feeling better now lol, didn't know it wasn't a binding spell since I'm not familiar with the kido so it was a relief that it wasn't more painfull and damaging lol. Byakuya *shakes head* well at least he's remembered that things had been different and I hope he can deal with it okay :s and Renji heh *smirks* taking Senbonzakura will prove an interesting thing to do I think, especially since you said somethin nice will happen next chp. - although it could be something completely different lol to what I'm thinking ^_^ but anyway. Thanks for the update it's great!!!

    Hina xXxx
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  • From teacupprincess14 on June 11, 2007
    angst to the nth degree! wheeeeew. XP I wanna see them resolve this though! (meaning: I'm enjoying this, Good story!)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2007
    *squeal*
    Now Renji has really done it! How will this end? o.o
    Hurry hurry, write more! :D
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  • From Tennak on June 10, 2007
    Such a lovely relationship you've given Byakura and Senbonzakura. I like the idea of their interaktion like you have described it. Great!
    You have made the two guys into adult men and I love that too. "Way to go Renji - pour your passion into that cold Taicho!"
    Love your cliff hanger ending!
    Thanks so much for sharing
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