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Reviews for What The Eyes Can't See

By : Platinumsabr
  • From Nephthys on March 23, 2017

    great story


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  • From DragonBorn83 on June 22, 2015
    an excellent story to say the least, and I look forward to its sequal, whats its title? I really wanna read e next story and see how things go for there kids.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2012
    You're an artist. Never give up on writing.
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  • From ANON - s.h.e on September 23, 2009
    ahhhhhh...done at last...maybe i'll be able to concentrate on school now lol.....or maybe i'll just read the sequel....lol
    great job, man. karin and Uliquorra...thats hilarious, yet somehow fitting.
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  • From ANON - Savvy on September 21, 2009
    dude...that poem.....frickin rocked. loved it man. too simple yet so complex, awesome job summarizing his life....though i must say...hanatarou and Nemu??? that was a surprise, but as i ponder the thought of it....they fit quite well.
    keep it up lol
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  • From SFPANTHER on July 13, 2008
    Hey Bro,

    @Chapter 6.

    I promised I would start reading and I have. I love how you have been able to write a pairing like this and keep them in character at the same time. Poor Kisuke should learn to keep his trap shut or maybe give out critical information when needed. I also like how Tatsuki was training herself to be a shinigami without knowing it. The whole fight in the gym with the hollow and Ichigo using Cero was great. I can't wait to read more.

    Moving on to Chapter 7 and Happy Writing.
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  • From sheastar334 on May 30, 2008
    This story is amazing! I'm starting on the second one but wanted to review this one first. I love the coupling, it's different. I was wondering, with all the couples you've mentioned but never when in detail with, could you write little side stories about them? I LOVE the Tou/Ran pairing and thought you could write a really good story with them. And of course Hanatoru (Luv him :>) Please consider it! (Sorry for any spelling mistakes)
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  • From Darkmaster7987 on May 09, 2008
    An amazing story and a great read. I was pleasantly surprised to see an Ichigo/Tatsuki story here at AFF, I think Tatsuki is such a great character and it's disappointing to see that she simply fades into the background in the Bleach manga.
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  • From Mysteriouseyez on May 09, 2008
    This was a WONDERFUL story to read! I enjoyed every single chapter to the point where I HAD to make an account her to review this story! Now I'm off to read the sequel qhich I am so freakin excited to get started!
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  • From Mysteriouseyez on May 07, 2008
    Oh this chapter just touched me. I need to stop reading stories that make me cry seriously I had tears when I read what he said to his mom and when Tatsuki came to him the eve of his mother's anniversary oh the tears! Im such a sap. I made an account on this site specifically to review this story! I usally wait until I've read the entire story to review but I couldn't wait I just HAD to review this chapter!
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  • From JHHolliday on April 24, 2008
    You wrote "All of the sudden" again when the Menos showed up in Chapter 5. Just revising, like you asked.
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  • From JHHolliday on April 24, 2008
    Just doing what you asked, and I'm back to Chapter 4. No errors until the fifth to last stanza of Chapter 4, wherein you said "All of the sudden," whereas the correct whatchamacallit is "All of A sudden." Hope I'm not seeming too anal-retentive, but I'm not sure how in-depth you wanted my proofreading to be. Hope my feedback gets feedback! -JHH
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  • From JHHolliday on April 23, 2008
    Just rereading the story, trying to pick up on stuff. Just a few things I noticed. Instead of unbelief, the word is disbelief. You also said naval to refer to the belly-button, when the term is navel. It's just some small things with homophones. Oh! Just remembered! It's per se, not per say. Not sure what language that's from, though. Probably Latin. It always is. Hope I didn't come off sounding pretentious with the pointers. Great work, I can say with absolute certainty that you are my favorite author on AFF and the reason I joined. -JHH
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  • From Chikky on March 03, 2008
    Just wanted to make a little note here: Ichigo was 9 when he mother died and Karin and Yuzu were 4. If Ichigo had been 4 they wouldn't be there.


    Other thank that and the random pairings every so often I really like this story so far and can't wait to read more.
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  • From JHHolliday on February 05, 2008
    You know, you remind me a bit of Daniel-Day Lewis. But rather than There Will be Blood, There Will be Similes! :P Just kidding! JHH
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