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Reviews for What The Eyes Can't See

By : Platinumsabr
  • From kitsune14 on June 22, 2007
    Excellent update! I loved the humor in this one!
    Keep up the great work, because I enjoy reading every word of your fics! :)
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  • From eva24 on June 22, 2007
    ^_^.............................................................^_____^........................
    ^_________________^ God, I feel like Gin. Thanks to you all I feel capable of is ridiulously creepy grins
    You've brought me to near hysteria which I suppose is better than the previous rib-cracking guffaws.
    You flip from hyper emotional passion and sentimantality to crack like this? ~_~ You're gifted damn you, i'm so jealous. Keep going, write as much or as little, as quickly or as slowly just don't you ever stop!!!!!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 22, 2007
    Gods, I love your story. This is soooo good. Next: Ishin's reaction, at a guess, the world will tilt slightly on it's own axis. Or whatever else you come up with. Not really picky as long as you update.
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  • From kitsune14 on June 22, 2007
    I've got to hand it to you. This is by far one of the best here on AFFN.
    I made this account just so I could review this wonderful story, and it was totally worth it. (Though it only took a moment of my time.)
    Great work, I come here every day hoping you'll have the next chapie up.
    Here's to your excellent writing tallent!
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  • From moonymuch on June 18, 2007
    Yet another wonderful chapter! I really do love the way you get into Ichigo and Tatsuki's heads. Even though there is lemon, you take the time to make something meaningful out of it - it's not just shameless smut (although that's what you need every once in a while, but character development is nice, too!). The scene between Urahara and Yoruichi was really cute, too. I can't wait until you review!
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  • From Leonhart29 on June 15, 2007
    No apologies necessary! That was wonderful - and I for one can wait a bit for the confrontations. Well done - well done indeed.
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  • From Tennak on June 15, 2007
    Ohhh! That was most delicious!
    I have to make my husband read this chapter!
    I want glowing passion like your wonderful pairing!

    I think you have given Ichigo the ultimate girlfriend,
    and when I read IchixRukia or IchixOri in future, I will
    think back to this coupling as the perfect heterocoupling
    for Ichi.
    Very well done and thanks for sharing!
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  • From eva24 on June 15, 2007
    Best use of shunpo ever!!! I don't think it was too much of a teaser, I mean we did have some wonderful Urahara/Yoruichi interaction. I wish he'd throw her onto the bed in the anime too *mopes* plus Byakuya-Pffft, I think that I may have cracked a rib laughing. wonderful work-as always ^__^
    Looking forward to your next installment.
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  • From Leonhart29 on June 07, 2007
    You know - I've grown to love your writing ability. Wonderful erotica (I would never deem it smut). You have done this story justice. Well done.
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  • From moonymuch on June 06, 2007
    Oh yay! I was so excited when I saw that you'd updated so soon! This was a very sweet chapter; I loved how you explained Ichigo's proposal. When I read the end of the last chapter, I was like, "What! So soon?" But you did a very good job of justifying the question...they really are so cute together; I wish more people wrote Tatsukl and Ichigo...I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From eva24 on June 06, 2007
    You do drama, you do smut ^_^, you do action and now you're doing soppy romantic mush that makes me reach for the tissues *sob* And a quick update too XD Clearly there is nothing that you cannot do. You hold far too much sway over your readers, damn you and your fantastic skills forcing me to fangirl and put my dignity aside to read the chapter. ;) Keep going, you know you want to...
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 06, 2007
    Hmmm. No, this was perfect. These are exactly the questions I would have asked. Thank you. For both the update and the recognition. It makes me all giggly happy when writers get something from my reviews. That is the point, no?
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  • From moonymuch on June 04, 2007
    What an amazing story!!! I definitely made a profile here to review this story. I'm sorry you're not getting reviews, but hopefully the quality of the reviews is what you're looking for, yes? I love how well you've gotten into the heads of the characters. Everything is great: the comedy, the drama, the fight scenes (LOVE the fight scenes). And it's intruiging, the relationship between Hollow Ichigo and Hollow Tatsuki. I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From eva24 on June 04, 2007
    Well, I feel all refreshed after that cold shower I had to take ;) whenever you get a new chapter I get all fangirlish and squee. >.< Great stuff, You never fail to impress me and as for ending it....Don't rush it. You need to clarify on em,..........Dammit you covered all of the bases. there are no faults *sob* I'd love to see Tatsuki meet Hiyori though and Isshin....Dear God the mere thought has triggered hysterics. The Smex had really sweet as well as hawt, which we all know is difficult to pull off. Hnh, time for another cold shower I think ^__^
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  • From Tennak on June 04, 2007
    Your story is amazing, fantastic and simply breathtaking. Every chapter has been a journey into a new corner of the story that I never saw comming. Thanks for this incredible hot scene where even the inner king and queen got to have fun too! I am enjoying your story so much and of course I'd like your story to continue. But you're in charge of this so it's ultimately your decision. I promise to keep reading and enjoy as long as you continue this. You are the master of the Tatsuki X Ichigo coupling! Thanks so much for sharing!
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