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Reviews for What The Eyes Can't See

By : Platinumsabr
  • From Naruto868 on August 10, 2007
    Forgot to mention: that poem... awesome. Inventive, and it pretty much covers his entire life story. I really envy you for your skills and hope to see updates on this soon, as well as some of your other works, too!
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  • From Naruto868 on August 10, 2007
    Amazing story! I read the first 15 chapters in like 2 and a half hours straight! I don't usually like any pairings other than Ichigo/Rukia, but I have to say, I'm totally blown away. Excellent plot, character development, descriptive use of language... I'm very impressed, and that doesn't happen that often!
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  • From Leonhart29 on August 04, 2007
    Reading on of your stories is always worth my time. I happen to like your crack pairing - it makes a strange sort of sense to me. Oh and I have a small inkling as to what will happen next. I honestly can't wait. Your Peach is well pleased Brat.
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  • From MrStrife on August 02, 2007
    Ooh, I wonder why I didn't see Ichigo's new title coming... hehe, fun! At least Grimmjow takes pride in the small victories, eh? X3 Can't wait for more!
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  • From moonymuch on August 02, 2007
    The Grimmjow/Chizuru pairing is pure genius! I could not stop cracking up...they're oddly perfect together. I love how Chad has some love now, as well...he deserves it! And poor, poor Ichigo, suffering the torments of the damned...hopefully he'll get respite soon...heh heh. Please update soon!
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  • From eva24 on August 02, 2007
    loved it, loved it, loved it!!!!!!!!1 ^_________________^ that was so brillant. Grimmjow/Chizuru, just when I thought that the character[Chi] couldn't get any crackier XD And thank you for Chad. He's so sexy but he gets hardly any lovin' and I love the idea of pairing him with Halle Berry..........erm Halibel.
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  • From Tennak on August 02, 2007
    I LOL so much at your Grimm x Chizuru pairing - it's wonderful - be very proud of that idea!
    I love the tender relationship you've given Nell and Ichigo and I know guys who have explained that a single dad with cute children in a park or something is a babe-magnet, so I think you are completely correct!
    Great idea to let Ichigo become King after having defeated Aizen and I really like your description of Hueco Mundo!
    It's so nice to provide a girlfriend for Chad - he deserves the best!

    I will keep laughing at your Grimm x Chi pairing!
    Your inventiveness is fantastic!
    Thanks so much for sharing and for making a "complete" Bleach universe!
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  • From MrStrife on July 29, 2007
    Yay Grimmjow! *Throws confetti* I've been enthralled by this story for about a week now, and I can't wait for this to continue! The anticipation, it kills me! Nice poem, by the way. Well thought out.
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  • From Leonhart29 on July 28, 2007
    This was well worth the wait. I wasn't pacing this time - I was nailed to my seat waiting to see what would happen next. Ah! Feel the love in the air would ya? Such a wonderful thought - almost everyone getting a little love. I saw nothing wrong with any of it.
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  • From eva24 on July 28, 2007
    *hyperventilates* Ye Gods. How on earth did you pack so much into a single chapter. I was seriously debating a cold shower break in the middle of that chapter. Ladies and Gentlemen please take notes, THIS is how real emotional erotica is done. and then you throw in poetry and drama and comedy and the best cliffhanger ever!!!! LOL Grimmjow XD and Nell!!! who in my humble opinion is the cutest thing in Bleach. I just have the urge to buy her lots and lots of ice-cream *heh*
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  • From moonymuch on July 28, 2007
    Haha, just when I was wishing for some smut...yay. I love HitsuMatsu, so thanks for putting them in! And I enjoyed the Isane part. She really doesn't get enough notice, but then when you have a manga as character-rich as Bleach, it's understandable. Ichigo's poem was amazing! But OHHHHHHHH the cliffie!!! Please update soon!
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  • From Leonhart29 on July 25, 2007
    I had to stop and pace around while reading this one just to get my laughter under control. Not only can you write a wonderful fight scene, and your love scenes are just as good, but you write humor exceedingly well. Well done Brat - you're Peach is very pleased.
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  • From moonymuch on July 22, 2007
    That fight was AMAZING!!! You really have done your research and made it really authentic. I could picture every move in my head. I KNEW they were going to make him captain! I loved the little bit with Hitsugaya...Hitsu/Matsu is one of my favorite pairings. And poor Tatsuki...I probably would have fainted dead away from embarrassment during the tape showing.
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  • From eva24 on July 22, 2007
    There was a mistake..............I didn't even notice *sweatdrops* But then again, We use a completely different school system where I'm from.
    And thwere is absolutely nothing I can say but bravo, I approve XD Grown up Hitsugaya Yesss!! (Never was a hinamori fan) Take as much time as you need with a chapter, this was definitely a bumper edition ^______^ 'Kay must return to the deathly hollows, I put it aside to read your update, now don't you feel loved : )
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 21, 2007
    Yeay, an update!!! So cool! If it helps the Japanese system is similar to the French one and their school year starts in April.
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