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Reviews for What The Eyes Can't See

By : Platinumsabr
  • From eva24 on September 07, 2007
    Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! I'm so sorry *sob* I mean, I know I've moved to a new country and all so I'm not that guilty, it's just that I really did want to review and more importantly read the updates but it is hard to get AFF without your own connection. I mean I couldn't exactly access it in an internet cafe, for one think it would be blocked as porn and another I do need peace to read it.
    aside from that (after reading three chapters in a sitting woo marathon!!!) I really need a cold shower. Yo! It's better than smut, it's emotional erotica!! (REeeeally need a cold shower right now) and at the same time there's lots of humour, action, characterisation, Yaaaay fun for all family!!! (sort of) XD
    Keep going, we are all behind you. Remember, Bleach het is tragically underrepresentated in the fandom and ichitatsu even more so ^__^ They need your support
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  • From Leonhart29 on September 05, 2007
    @ chapter 20 - Oooooo - you little snot!!!! You made me cry a bit - I should hurt you for that - but I won't *blows kiss*. Wonderful job on the last chapter - now that grad's out of the way - onto the wedding!
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  • From Leonhart29 on September 05, 2007
    @ chapter 19 - Good going. Don't worry about not knowing how her parents act or don't act. The fact that they haven't even been brought into the show or (I'm assuming) Manga means you have some leeway. As always I loved it.
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  • From MrStrife on September 05, 2007
    *Applauds* I've missed reading this so much... internet's been a pain, y'see. XP But it's back now, and just in time for me to start reading again! Hehe... I liked the 'death' scene, pretty neat there. Seeing Tatsuki really fight was some fun, if y'ask me. X3 Can't wait for more!
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  • From moonymuch on September 05, 2007
    Ah...buahaha, my bad. Sometimes when I read, I read so fast I tend to skip over things.

    YES!!! More whoop-ass from Tatsuki...pardon my french! Ah, if I were better at sketching, I would totally draw the first and second forms of her shikai.

    Thank goodness Ichigo didn't die! I knew he wouldn't, but it's still nice to know.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on September 04, 2007
    One word, only one: WOW.

    Said in an awed, hushed whisper.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on September 02, 2007
    That was surprisingly... easy. Well they deserve it. Oh, love, can't wait for the chaos that is certain to ensue at the rehearsal. Won't that large an amount of spirit power bring in a lot of hollows??? Anyway, still love this, can't wait for the next installment. Thank you!
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  • From moonymuch on September 02, 2007
    Heh heh, I loved Tatsuki's parents' reaction. I kind of thought that with a daughter like her, her parents would despair of her ever getting married. So cute! I can't wait for the wedding!

    Speaking of which...I honestly don't think JUST all of the 13 division is going to show up, right? Perhaps some members of the 11th and the 6th...? Gosh, what would Zaraki do at a wedding? *imagines him challenging wedding guests to fights* Eep.
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  • From Leonhart29 on August 30, 2007
    WOW!!!!! Er ... WOW!!!!! Um... I can't type... Why do you ask? Because that was one of the BEST CHAPTERS YET! I don't care that it took you two weeks Brat (and it better not take you that long next time lol) it was well worth the wait. Now if you'll excuse me - your Peach has something she has to go do *chuckle*.
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  • From moonymuch on August 25, 2007
    Thanks for a long-awaited fight scene! I'm too bloodthirsty for my own good, I know, but it's just so much fun to read a well-thought out and well-written fight scene. It was worth the wait!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on August 25, 2007
    Oh hotness and happiness!!! Thank you, as always a joy to read!
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  • From Leonhart29 on August 13, 2007
    I don't think this was too OOC for Ichigo. I've been wondering if and when he would find peace. You gave it to him in this chapter. Once again I loved the update, Brat! Your Peach signing off for the time being.
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  • From moonymuch on August 11, 2007
    Cool is cool and there is no way around it...muahahaha (though I prefer SWEET!!! a la Ashton Kutcher from Dude, Where's My Car?). Hyperactive imaginations are awesome...and I do love fight scenes. My friends call me bloodthirsty, but hey, when you're a fencer you gotta love combat! That's why I love Bleach and well-written fight scenes - which are delivered in spades here, by the way!

    Wow, what an emotional chapter! I felt myself tearing up several times. You write relationships beautifully - thank you for understanding the kind of dynamic that makes a good one! Sometimes people don't understand that they have to share the good and the bad, because that's what makes you closer. It's wonderful that Ichigo has gained closure and acceptance in regards to his mom's death, because it makes him grow so much more as a person. What a lovely chapter!




    ...I am SO ready for some smut! And fight scenes! ^__^
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  • From eva24 on August 11, 2007
    Angst!!! XD That's ridiculous now, Look how happy I am at Ichigo's annually scheduled emo-ness. Schadenfreude ne? I should be utterly ashamed...............But I'm not and plus it was necessary to your plot. I think it's in the fanfic bible (right after the chapters on crack pairings and Tales from the house of the moon ;P) and it states........."Thou shalt not advance Ichigos character and show him to grow up (some more) without addressing the angsty issue of mothers death" I gotta say that I love Karin. She's such a great character. You really got her in IC. She is obviously not interested in guys despite what the fillers suggest although HitsuKarin has crack potential (I think she really is a lot like Tatsuki and her respect of Tatsuki is canon. She compliments her in abstentia for becoming sexier i.e. more womanly since she went to high school)Denial is definitely not in her make-up. Her tact prevents her from stating some things but I think the scene with her was dead-on. XD Yay! Have fun until the next update.
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  • From MrStrife on August 11, 2007
    Wow... that was an excellent, deep chapter! But... T_T Really tugged at the heartstrings, yeah? Still, can't wait for more.

    Also... >.> yeah, you're pretty much the reason I had Ichigo jump out of that closet. Glad to know you're not mad about it, y'know?
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