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Reviews for What The Eyes Can't See

By : Platinumsabr
  • From JHHolliday on February 05, 2008
    Not sure if this is my fourth or fifth time reading your story... More than I've read a single piece of fanfiction, surely, or all fiction, for that matter. Hope you can post more stories soon! JHH
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  • From xSTALKERx on January 04, 2008
    As you may have guess from my other reviews, Tatsuki is my favorite character. Not sure why, but I would have to say that her character is almost a mirror image of what I would look for in a female in real life.

    In the terms of the Bleach universe, I feel she is way under used, and even in the fan fic universe not a lot of attention is paid to her. It truly is nice to see someone capture (what I feel) is her character so perfectly.

    When I was reading this story (already finished it 3 times) it felt like I was reading a full on novel. In a way, it was because the story was already finished by the time I found it, and I didn't have to wait for a new chapter to come out, it was already all there and I could immerse myself in the full story from the get go.

    To say your style of writing is "good" is an understatement. It captured exactly what I envisioned the characters doing in these situations, and you really put a lot of emotion into your writing. You could feel the characters tears, or their anger. You could feel the love between Tatsuki and Ichigo.

    I can say this without a doubt, this is one of the greatest stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading.

    On a side note, I would literally kill for another story focusing on Ichigo/Tatsuki that filled in the gaps between the end of this story, its epilogue, and the beginning of "A New Window". You just can't have too much Tatsuki stories...

    9.98/10
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  • From JHHolliday on December 26, 2007
    Third time reading this story, first time reviewing! I can't even give constructive criticism, except that the word is technically rigid, not ridged. Rigid means stiff, ridged means having ridges. But I digress. Keep em' coming!
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  • From NayNayThegreat on October 12, 2007
    wow I found a Tatsuki and ichigo fanfic, AWSOME!! bout damn time, not enough of this pair on here so you can bet I'll be reading, I really hope you gave Tatsuki a a shikai and maybe a bankai in thi fic, it'b be a shame for her to never release her Zanpakutoh, but I'm sure you have just haven't read it yet, but if you didn't you should be shot bluntly put lol, anyway love the sotry thus far but's 4 in the freakin morening and I have to sleep so I have to stop *cries on the keboard* but I'll pick up with ch. 7 in a few hours so you'll hear from me again soon
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  • From Kimra on October 02, 2007
    Awesome I just read the first part and was all sad because I suspected there would be no more! But look! You have heaps more! I'm so excited to read the rest because this is my favourite couple! (I think it is anyway - you might be evil yet). :D
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  • From GrimReaper117 on September 25, 2007
    Best story EVER! great story even without the sex scenes XD.
    Congrats on finishing it cant wait for your next story.
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  • From Leonhart29 on September 17, 2007
    I know I'm late in reviewing this one Sweetie - but hot damn! Wonderful job My Brat, I'm very proud of you *which is an understatement*. Keep in touch with me via email when you're away, I promise to do the same.
    Honestly though - this is by far your best work (and I've only missed one of yours 'cause you won't share it with me *pout*). Seriously though, Wonderful Job! You made a new pairing for me that I just love, and you turned me onto Bleach - for that I am eternally grateful.
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  • From moonymuch on September 14, 2007
    Oh. My. God. I can't believe it's over! After all this time, I feel like this story's become so much of a part of me - it's so sad that it's finished! I can't even imagine how you feel, being the creator of this absolutely wonderful adventure. The wedding was so sweet. I loved how you incorporated so many of the characters into it. Gosh, there are so many things I could comment on, but then this review would be REALLY long. I loved every time Hiyori showed up, though. The epilogue was a fitting end...Karin and Ulquiorra? Now that is a story I'd love to see...would you consider doing a follow-up to that, even if it's just a oneshot? What about Ichigo and Tatsuki's son and Urahara and Yoruichi's daughter? That would be amazing. I've loved reading this - it's definitely one of the best I've ever read!
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  • From Clothclouds on September 13, 2007
    near the end of the first chapter, describing uryuu's power. "his ability to be able to " that is repetetive. perhaps you could just make it "his ability to make other people's spirit particles ..." . concrit. nice story, nice writing. descriptive, just a tad flowery. however, im not one to talk...ugh.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on September 13, 2007
    It is done.

    I don't know if I should laugh or cry at that. This had been great and I will certainly miss your updates. And incredible story, you have reason to be proud. Let us know when you start the next one!!!
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  • From eva24 on September 13, 2007
    Congratulations!!! What an accomplishment, you should be so proud XD I know I am. To have watched the progress of such a great writer is a great thing. Still Karin/Uliquiorra? Why do your crack!ships make so much sense?!! because you love the characters so much of course XD I've really enjoyed your work and look forward to your next piece.
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  • From MrStrife on September 13, 2007
    Wah! It's over, and I dunno whether to laugh because I loved it so, or cry because it's come to an end! X3 My only regret, I believe, is the severe lack of Kenpachi... unless I just plain missed it, in which case, boo me!

    I've had lots of fun reading this, and I just cannot wait to see what else you kindly give us. :3
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  • From moonymuch on September 09, 2007
    *cheers* Yay, the Vizards showed up! You made a lot of good points with the conversation between Ichigo and Hiyori about hatred and prejudice. Props to you! I really hope that when the Shinigami go to war with Hueco Mundo, the Vizards join them. It would be amazingly kick-ass.

    The wedding's almost here! I'm so excited!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on September 09, 2007
    I still love this. Thank you!!!
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  • From eva24 on September 09, 2007
    Yes, Nell Is hot, I wish I had a body that toned :P So, just ignore it for this story and Bam!! key role in your next story (Yay!! Nellcentric, who shall she be paired with? ooo the possibilities)
    Aside from that, great story, the fun never stops, Vaizard love XD Keep it up
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