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By : Crya2Evans

From SarahTaylor on April 10, 2009
I feel like such a bad reviewer. I got really busy and stopped reading for a while and then when I finally found time I had to catch up on all my reading and finally I get to these and I'm a whole five behind and they took a while to read because I wanted to savour every word and now I really should stop rambling and just make with the review already XD Ok, so here goes...

110 - When I first saw it say Shunsui/Gin I had to blink a few times, it's a very unusual pairing that I don't think I've seen before but you made a believer out of me. It was so sweet, I felt so sorry for Shunsui at the end having to deal with everything alone but he chooses to do it, I think he just needs a hug :-) I loved the line about providing a stable - if not sober - presence in his life, it just sounded so like Shunsui. By the end of the piece I was feeling so sorry for Gin too, if only he had taken Shunsui's hand first, maybe things could have been different.

111 - I've seen a few Shuuhei/Izuru fics and I wasn't convinced of a mutual affection between the two but again you make it believable. At the end of the fic you're left feeling like they had always been together. I love how Izuru isn't moping in this one, most fics have him one step away from being like Momo but this has him all strong and using that strength to better himself, it's very refreshing. I love Izuru's outburst, even though he's strong it doesn't mean he can't explode once in a while from too many people asking 'are you ok?' Confused!Shuuhei is love, he is so adorable when he's confused XD Squishy indeed, I completely agree and I loved it. It put a huge grin on my face :D

112 - I love how you can completely drag the reader in to the story and make them feel for the character. I was with Izuru at each crushing blow, each rejection had me almost feeling his pain, I nearly cried when Ukitake transfered him (so pathetic I know) and then when he got his promotion to the 3rd I was elated even though I knew how that would turn out. The ending almost made me cry, I can so understand why he would do that and I was almost cheering for him. I am such the typical fangirl XD I loved this fic, I think it has to be one of my favourates, it is so well written and emotional.

113 - The line 'impossible to rationalise the actions of an idiot' had me nodding along agreeing with it XD I even started thinking back on some of the things I had done and applying it to my life. I love Ulquiorra's internal dialogue, trying to rationalise with himself even though he already knows it's a paradox. Loving the sarcastic!Grimm, he should pop up in more fics XD I love that Ulqiorra infered his own stupidity at the end but still went off to find Grimm, brilliant. You portrayed him really well, he's a very odd charater in general and I think you did a wonderful job of capturing the essence of him.

114 - My heart went out to both of them (Ichi and Isshin) even though Ichigo isn't really in the fic except in conversation. We know that Ichigo blames himself for his mothers death, even after finding out it was a hollow but on some level he probably realises that Isshin still blames him too and that would be just heartbreaking. I kinda want to hug Kisuke for being there for Ichigo when his dad isn't, even though we know Urahara can be a pain this fic gives him another level, it sort of makes him into a father figure and that kind of fits him well. I also want to hug Isshin just because. I have no reason and he kinda needs a slap but I just want to give him a hug. I totally understand the speculation thing, they don't give us nearly enough info about Isshin so it's real easy to fill in the blanks when you have a good imagination. I think sometimes it's good to do that :D

Ok I think I've waffled for long enough, sorry about the enormous review, I don't think I have this much to say usually XD I look forward to the next one, it looks...interesting XP I hope your time off is helping you to relax and write :-) Can I also make a request?? It's not an unusally pairing or anything but it is one that is slowly seeping into my regular reading list...Stark/Ichigo. I don't know what it is about the pairing but Stark's laid back attitude verses Ichigo's jump-right-in-ask-questions-later attitude is really quite interesting. I think I have a thing for contrasts XD
Looking forward to your next post, Angel.
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From Yakumo on April 07, 2009
I love Isshin.
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From ANON - Synthetic on April 07, 2009
I'm back again with more stalkery love. As promised, I have been keeping up with these little stories and loving every second of it. :)

This last piece really struck home with my views of Isshin. I (much like you, actually) have a tendency to speculate on things that no one else really bothers to and this is one that has bugged me for quite a while. You portrayed Isshin (how I imagine him, at least) flawlessly and I couldn't be more pleased with how this one turned out. I believe there is alot more depth to Isshin than the series has let on so far and I was eagerly waiting on someone elses opinion on exactly -why- Isshin never bothered to help his son or explain anything (just to compare ideas, really), but it never came. No one seemed to notice his complete dismissal of his son's shinigami life. But you have! =DDD And with a theory much similar to my own! I FREAKING LOVE YOU.

Yay. :D Thank you x45353 for being such a wonderful and speculative author. It has really made my day. And now I don't feel so insane for thinking that Isshin may have a darker side. >.> People usually stare at me like I've sprouted a second head if I even begin to suggest that Isshin might be the teeniest bit bitter. *huff*

/endrant

All in all, wonderful story... series actually. I love them and keep on keeping on! >.>

-Synthetic
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From ANON - Ranna on April 07, 2009
I think Issin loves him too. Isshin seems like the kind of parent to let a kid learn from his own mistakes, though.
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From spooksies on April 07, 2009
their additude is very close to this. Iishin in this is so so so close to the original that it is scary!

anyways.....you get them. you know how to get in their head and pull them out.

great work love!

laters! ~_^

miko
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From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2009
*sniffle*
so dark...and sad.

and it's a theory that may be true *ponders*
there is very little explanatory activity on Isshin's part so far...I really hope Kubo starts explaining/hinting about Isshin's past soon

one of my theories is that he was the former captain of the zero squad (king's squad) before he left soul society.
the pendulum chapters only spurred my suspicions further on XD
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From ANON - Elora on April 07, 2009
I would like to request a story from you if I could. It's not really a pairing though, so much as something
that I want to have happen in the manga. I know it kind of contradicts the chapter that you just wrote,
but I digress. I would love it if you would write about Isshin coming to the rescue just when Ichigo needs
it most. For example, remember when Ichigo was fighting a losing battle with Nnoitra? And just as he's
about to strike the finishing blow, Kenpachi shows up and blocks his blade? I so wanted that to be Isshin.
So if you could write a story about Isshin coming to the rescue, that would be awesome. But, if that's
not your cup of tea, then I would like a Gin fic, something happy and funny. Gin is my favorite character
and I hate seeing so many sad stories with him. Don't get me wrong, I like angst as much as the next
person but sometimes I just want something to make my heart happy, y'know? That's why I love
"Minutes to Midnight" so much! I read that religiously.

Anyway, I really love your writing. In fact, I'm on chapter 12 in "Of Violence" right now, and I've already
polished off "Misguided Manipulation", most of your one-shots, and what you have out of "Minutes to Midnight"
and "Seireitei Monogatari". I've always loved your works, and I've wanted to request a story for awhile now,
but I guess I was just too shy, lol. Anyway, enough cheese. I hope to read some more of your works soon!

All the best,

Elora
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From DarknessImmortal on April 06, 2009
Hmm...an interesting speculation. And it does kind of make sence in a dark and very sad way. Hmmmmmm makes me want to speculate more on the matter, haha.
Regardless, still very well written.
Can't wait for next week!
'Till then,
Darkness
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From greengerbils on April 04, 2009
: D yay! its an update!
I just realized something cool! you update on fanfiction.net, right?? I was so shocked when I was browsing around there and found your story!! : D (I'm Magiciansoftheyami on fanfiction ^^;;) but I just wanted to let you know that because of your awesome work, you inspired me to keep working on my story again : ] Thank You so much!!
Lookin forward to your next update!
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From Yakumo on April 02, 2009
You always do a good job of writing Ulquiorra.
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From ANON - Kuromei on April 02, 2009
Awwww... D= Poor compy! I hope it's feeling better. lol X3

Anyway, I can't see how you get into Ulquiorra's head at all, so I give you bonus points for even trying. lol X3 But I can see the challenge of writing that particular pairing. I thought it was really good, and I actually look forward to more of it, even if there's no smut. ^w^

See ya next time! =D
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From DarknessImmortal on April 01, 2009
Oh, I liked it! You kept them very in-character, which I'm sure is so hard for this paring. (Well, when it's just the two of them. The one with Ichigo worked out well too :3)
It was very intense.
Wow, you know, I actually really liked it!
Glad that you liked my paring! Can't wait to read it!
Best regards,
Darkness
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From ANON - Ranna on April 01, 2009
I always imagine this pairing to be...brutal. Ulquiorra taking and Grimmjow all teeth and claws and ferocity. I don't know how to explain it any better, but your perspective is interesting.
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From ANON - please on April 01, 2009
I really want a Kensei x Ichigo. A lemon would be even better.
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From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2009
I hope you write more with this pairing when you have the inspiration for it (or when someone requests it ;3),
It really had a nice feeling to it. I think you wrote Ulquiora pretty well, even though I'm not the best person to judge this as he's not the character I pay the most attention to in the show XD He's shown some different sides to him with the latest manga-chapters but still...his character is rather hard to grasp...at least for me XD

and did I sense a tidbit of manipulative/planning Grimmjow there? oh my^-^

is it to late to add a request?
I know I already made one during your last round, but if it's not too much can I request a Shuuhei/Ichigo/Yumichika threesome? With Shuuhei an Ichigo in an established relationship, trying to persuade Yumichika to join them by seducing him during a mission?...if it's possible:3
I'll leave the rating to you
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