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By : Crya2Evans

From Emyrei on June 29, 2009
Makes me wonder what Ikkaku's secrets are. :P
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From ANON - Kuromei on June 29, 2009
O//w//O *stuggles not to laugh like a hyena* "Sweetcheeks-san"?!? Ah ha ha, ah ha ha ha ha haaaaaa~! XD *falls out of her chair*

*gives thumbs-up from the floor*
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From ANON - Synthetic on June 28, 2009
Oh, how I lol'd. I'm not sure who my favorite is - it's between Byakuya's plushie fetish and Ukitake being a thief. They were all lolarious though. Once again, you slay me. Keep up the good work! :D

-Synthetic
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From Yakumo on June 28, 2009
LMAO!! Tousen cross dresses, Iba likes Ikebana and Soifon and Isane are actually huge sluts. I love it. xD
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From ANON - Ranna on June 27, 2009
Ha! It actually makes them sound like real people. Real people sleep around, get drunk, and put up a dignified facade to the world while they are really weirdos. I like your interpretations very much
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From SarahTaylor on June 27, 2009
Ok, brace yourself because this is going to be long. I've been very neglectful in my reading, real life stuff kinda getting in the way. Finally I've found time to catch up and headed straight here, you even updated while I was reading so I had an extra one too. I've taken to writing notes while reading these just so that I remember everything I want to say and I seem to have written a lot. Here we go then:

118 - Love the Ulquiorra introspective, His very nature would stop him from ever understanding Ichigo properly. You capture him so well and I look forward to a continuation of this some day.

119 - Stark/Izuru my first reaction was 0.o but I really liked it. Loving the Stark love too, he is rapidly becoming one of my favourate characters in Bleach. I really want him to kill Gin and claim Izuru, he'd be much better for him than the freaky evil ex-captain. Internal sqeeing when Stark kissed him XD

120 - Love the banter between Ichigo and Grimm. Had to write this bit before I read the next part of the fic, while my brain was still working coherently 'Holy shit that is so hot, angry groping is nosebleed inducing and right now you are pure win. Have to go finish reading it now.' And once I had I loved how they went right back to the banter, it fitted perfectly. I loved that Grimm is affraid of the water and after Ichigo sort of pushed him in I kept expecting him to leap straight back out again, glad he didn't though. His internal meanderings as he tries to work out why he isn't more upset and annoyed at what just happened between him and Ichigo is really well done. I absolutely love this one.

121 - I love Toushirou. I almost feel sorry for him, he was so totally played by Unohana, she used an unfair tatic. You can't use the I'm-going-to-start-crying-any-minute-look on an unsuspecting man, they don't stand a chance of resisting when you do that. I thought it might have been Matsumoto's fault at first, it seemed liked something she would do after consuming copious amounts of sake.

122 - I don't blame Stark for inching away from the tea, most people would XD I was giggling within the first few lines. I love Kisuke flustered, it doesn't happen nearly enough. I love how Kisuke likens Ulquiorra's natural state of being to one of sulking, I'd never looked at it that way. He's not surly, just always sulking :) I was reminded of siblings squabbling and having to be seperated by their father or older brother when Ichi brought Grimm in. 'Shriek of fangirly joy' - this line, I love it!! I was there hearing it, it is such a brilliant description. I want to know how Ichigo did it and I would have paid money to see Aizen's face as he wrote that note. My favs have to be Grimm and Szayel mostly for the laughter they evoke, they are just perfect.

123 - Love the reference to the Aizen date and mentions of Izuru, I think we may be starting to get an idea of who'll be joining Ichigo for his second dates. It was very aww worthy and the fact that you not only married Hana off but made him a widow at the same time was very intriguing. It might be nice to see just what you had in mind as a wife for such a gentle soul. A very sweet offering and totally likable.

124 - Ahh Zaraki, ever the not so subtle one :P Liked this one a lot but then I am a fan of Zaraki/Ichigo. Ichigo's internal debate was good and the line about him fleeing for his sanity and the one in the summary that had him not so much wanting to save his life but his virtue were brilliant.

125 - Poor Ichi, you can tell he feels so betrayed by Kisuke and then to turn around and completely understand why he had been lied to is just so sweet. Wonderful handling of some deep emotions but then you always do that well.

126 - This was pure unadulterated win!! Ikkaku as the holder of the secrets is priceless and the secrets themselves are just so damn funny. I want to mention them all but that would be too much so just my favourates. Yumi as a blond *Gigglesnort* Zaraki reading trashy novels made me feel slightly distubed but still so damn funny. Bya-kun...sweetcheeks...oh dear lord I was in tears, that is just too funny. Tousen in heals 0.o and the whole mirror question, I don't think I stopped laughing. It only got worse when I got to Hisagi's tats being fake...

You are pure win on every level, your angst is amazing, your fluff perfectly sweet and your crack makes my sides hurt. I really enjoy your fics and I'm sorry that I fell so far behind. Congrats on the publishing, you're an amazing writer who totally deserves it. Good luck to you and I look forward to your updates whenever you can XD
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From DarknessImmortal on June 15, 2009
Aw, I love this paring. And I love that story, "Shades of Gery"! Thank you for posting the title, I never would have read it other wise (which would have been a tragedy.
I can't wait to read more of these two, and you write Urahara so well, it's so much fun reading him.
And as I said in my other review for The Butterfly Effect, congratulations for the publisher thing! I'm so happy for you =^-^=
Can't wait for the next chapter! (Though, I guess now I'll have to, haha)
Until then,
~Darkness
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From spooksies on June 12, 2009
*gasp* i am SOOOO far behind!! good grief!

anyways, at least they can come together and have fun more! (sparing)

as for your writing, BOOYA!!! updating slowy is ok. i can dig that!

SO GOOD LUCK!!!!!! and always have FUN!!!!

laters!

miko ~_^
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From Emyrei on June 09, 2009
First off....I forgot to read the last update. *shame on me*.
Ichigo/Kenpachi...a very amusing pairing. And think off all that angry fighting/ angry sex!

And for this one: Anger being replaced by fluffety fluff fluff! Sweet.
I can imagine Urahara testing his experiments on himself.
And I loved the : "Urahara as a Vizard was almost like finding out that his mom was Aizen�s sister. Or that Goat Face was really a Shinigami. Not that the last two were true or anything." It had me going *cough snort* "yeah...or anything. Isshin? A shinigami? Surely not!!!" And now I just drowned in my own sarcasm!
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From ANON - Kuromei on June 09, 2009
Wow. OwO I'm speechless, seriously. I love it when you write angsty, hurt feelings and then make things better in the end. X3 ^//////^

As for finding a publisher, hugs for you! *glomps* Congratulations! I don't mind an irregular update schedule, because I see a Chronicles of Valentine chapter in the future. X3 Near or distant, who cares? lol XD

See you next time, Draco-san! =D *hugs again*
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From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2009
congratulations on getting published!!!
*offers you a hugmuffin*
working towards august takes first priority, so I'm fine with slower updates. ^-^
oh me oh my, how exciting! You'll let us now when it's awailable for purchase/reading right?

as for this update; squeeee!
tension, anger and a sidedish of bathtime cuddles...it perked up my day *nodnod*
such an interesting request :3
well handled my dear
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From ANON - MizuBenten on June 09, 2009
Aw dang it. Stupid italics! >> Feh.
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From ANON - MizuBenten [NSI] on June 09, 2009
God I love Urahara/Ichigo. I cannot wait for that story. *wiggles* Though I'm really hoping by saying Ichigo/Urahara you didn't literally mean Ichigo�erm�onUrahara. XD

Love your work~
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From ANON - RavieTaylor on June 05, 2009
Ah... Gay Demonic Charm... good old Antique Bakery... I think... Well that's the first thing that popped into my mind when I read that so... I'm prolly wrong. I don't get out much. T.T I just sit behind my computer desk and read yaoi porn... My parents would weep at what my college years have become... Oh well... If wasting them away reading fics like yours is my life, I will die a happy old lady! Everytime you update I squeal like a little girl and bounce in my seat waiting for the slow campus wi-fi to load the yummy yaoi pages. I'm a sad person... ^.^ Now I'm picturing Kenpachi trying to run a bakery and flirting with non-gay/DENIAL!gay Ichigo... good gods I need help... I'm goind to self medicate now... keep cranking out the good stuff, you feed my addiction!
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From spooksies on June 05, 2009
i am thinking of either naruto (not likely) to mouse (small possiblity) to tenchi (who knows?) to ranma (oh god!) to toko (not even close). but who knows what is in that mind of yours? would you tell us when ya are ready? i hope so.

BTW....hehehehehehehehehehe...........Ichigo and Ken-chan..........hhhuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......... no comment! ~_^

laters!

miko ~_^
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