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Reviews for Pretend Love

By : debbiechan
  • From ANON - FullMetalBlunt on July 29, 2012
    I really love this, I read this and the other one a long time ago and im glad i found it again. you write them very well and dont go overboard with a weepy ishida. thank you so much i will always have a special place for this piece.
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  • From DB2020 on September 11, 2009
    ^_^

    Amazing fic! I doubt that I’ll ever get enough of this pairing now. Thank you for sharing.

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  • From sofeenalee on October 16, 2008
    That was the BEST fic I have ever read. lol Right now I feel so emotional, I cried so many times. I don't know what else to say. Makes me wonder if you are actually a novellist. I think I remember seeing you on lj so maybe I'll ask you on there. Thank you so much.
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  • From TrulyWished on June 16, 2007
    So sweet. I love this little series you have going on.
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  • From rubyred on February 23, 2007
    so cute!!
    i am glad this had a happy ending!
    and there where some great lines and very funny monents!
    i hope to see more from you.
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  • From YvonneandNeji on February 10, 2007
    I'm trying to decide if this was better than the first, it's hard seeing as how they were both amazing. Oh well, best to just leave well enough alone. Great job, I think this is the first time I've seen a continuation of a story that I actually enjoyed reading.
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  • From priscel on February 07, 2007
    *screams and hugs you* You've captured them so well it's hard to accept that as the end. ^_^ Thank you. It was really well done, beautiful and realistic.

    '...embarrassed and slightly aroused by the pressure of her giant mammaries'

    And I love your use of lanuage haha
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  • From Strife on February 06, 2007
    This story was a nasty, guilty pleasure---I loved every second of it. Lol. Oh! When I read: "Wow," said Kurosaki the Elder with earnest appreciation. "That’s some weapon you’ve got there, boy. Does your father have one like that too? Is this what all the Quincy are carrying these days?" I defiantely thought that he was refering to his penis. I guess my eyes skipped past the whole " summoning-of-the-bow" part. Anyway, I completely adored this fic. You're quickly becoming one of my all-time favorite writers. I've read your others stories already but I didnt review them. Keep up with the amazing fanfictions!
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  • From BrucesGirl on January 24, 2007
    Well, I must say that I enjoyed the second one much more than the first. The caliber of writing that you are exhibiting is going to rival a lot of big time writers on this sight. It's simply amazing. I like your angst and surreal style much more than your PWP's, and I believe you keep the characters much more IC and in depth than your PWP's.

    Of course, my general distaste for Het (lesbian, haha) is widely known across the site, but I can handle it from time to time. I like your Yaoi fictions much more. I think you put more heart into them. Great job! I'm looking forward to more from you in this section.

    Ja!

    BrucesGirl
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  • From Tennak on January 24, 2007
    Thanks oh so much for making a sequel!
    I can not express how much I wanted "Real Sex" to have a happy/happier ending. I really loved "Real Sex" but the ending almost gave me a heartbreak, having the normally soo composed Ishida suddenly realize that the world might be gone.
    So right now I'm feeling infinitely relieved that you gave them a way out of their predicament!
    I think that both stories are filled with great plot ideas, great smex, the most primordial angst ever (you have really captured the essence of the angst of living), fantastic Yoruichi moments to remember (Yaoi manga!) and many more. Very imaginative and dear writer, have no fear, the sequel is equally as good as the first part.
    Thanks for sharing these two wonderful stories!
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  • From teacupprincess14 on January 24, 2007
    I read the previous story to this and i hope you don't get offended when i say this, but this is a very unusual love story. its great though! I liked how they perservered and, how they were so honest with one another. i wish we could have seen the arrival of Ishidas dad.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 23, 2007
    this was a great sequel! i would have loved to read about ishida's reunion with his dad, but it was still so very good without that. thanks for writing this, it had such a sweet ending!!
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  • From Brightside on January 23, 2007
    Brilliant story, this was.

    There was a whole lot of character developments going on, and you quite captured them easing into society once again. Although, I can't help but pity Uryuu... sixteen months of constant sex must be bad for the bottom of the pair, musn't it?

    And because I'm a bad person, I feel the need to mention that male multiple orgasms are actually possible. 'Cause us girls don't exactly egaculate when we orgasm, so the two aren't nessecarily related, and apparently, if a guy has been holding back for a while, the penis can stay erect for longer periods of time.

    (I'm such a dork.)

    Keep writing more of this stuff, it's fluff, smut, and humor all wrapped into one! Very enjoyable read.

    --R.A.F.B





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