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Reviews for Untitled

By : akashicrecord
  • From isara65 on July 15, 2011
    i like it.
    thanks..
    don't you like them as pair ! i like them this way
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  • From Meili on April 17, 2009
    Very nice. We need more Rukia/Byakuya fics!
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  • From LaMariposa3795 on April 16, 2009
    I liked it...it was kinda twisted...but that's the intriguing part of it!! hahah!! I think it would be awesome if you wrote an epilogue!! I hope you do!
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on September 05, 2008
    Yes,An Epilogue Would Be Lovely.They Both Deserve Happiness, ^^

    P.S.I Am ANTI-Incest,ANTI-Yaoi/Yori But I Love The Fact That You're One Of Those People Who Agree To Make The Point That They Aren't Real Siblings,Which I Totally Agree 100%...Also,HinaNeji Isn't Incest Where I'm From. ^^
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on September 05, 2008
    You Made My Day...Even Brighter!I LOVE This Pairing,OMG.Other Than RukiaRenji And IchiRukia.

    What About...'Fulfilling Unknown/Unnamed Desires'?

    Other Ideas :

    1. Need - Unadulterated
    2. To Touch One's Own
    3. Loss Of Words,Gained Emotions
    4. Needless To Say

    ... =D

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  • From Meshala101 on March 22, 2008
    how about (substitute wife) for a title, it should have the word substitute in it or something that implies it, since thats bascially what she is in the first chapter, but you should definately continue the story, in the next chapter (turning the tables) you should rukia turn the tables on him.the He's being using her to feel closer to his wife, so let her use him to feel closer to renji, let her picture that its him that shes making love to, and not byakuya, of course he'll figure out what she's doing in end but by then it will be too late, since they'll both have reached their climaxe by then (HeeHee)but let him see how it feels to be used in that way. And then in the third finale chapter (realization)after the anger and flying accusations, have them realize how they both trully feel about each other and have them come together with both of them fully knowing and accepting who it is their making love too, thats if you want to make this a true rukia and byakuya pairing. well now, I think its time to review what you did write instead of suggesting what you should write about next lol. I liked the first chapter, would like to see more, and I'm about to go and check to see if you've written anything else, I like your style.


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  • From poisonakki on September 09, 2007
    My first Byakuya x Rukia smut fic and what a fic! omg I absolutely loved it ^___________^
    I've seen plenty of doujinshi of this pairing which got me craving for more fanfiction. Hope you write more on them!
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  • From TakaraHime on September 01, 2007
    Major fan of the couple.Not many people write about them.Please continue sorry if my english bad.Hi from japan.
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  • From OdietAmo on July 18, 2007
    O.O I KNEW IT! HE DOES HAVE THING FOR HER!

    That was awesome.

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  • From Delia88 on June 09, 2007
    NICE! you'd better write a sequel!
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  • From Itwasonlyakiss on May 21, 2007
    Masterfully done
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2006
    oh angsty, I like it. Byakuya/Rukia is an awesome pairing, keep at it!
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  • From ANON - melrose on December 16, 2006
    Whoa! This is...good! You should post it at the ByaRuki LJ community. :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2006
    Impressive. The conflicts Rukia feels are beautifully expressed. And as for the title, take the last line and call it "None Living" just a thought
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  • From ANON - Arashijo on December 08, 2006
    Wow, that was one of the best lemons I've ever read. Very angsty and yet so passionate. Great job! How about.. "Meant but Unspoken" as this fic's title?
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