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Reviews for Desire

By : shanghaihoney
  • From ANON - Carola-chan on November 10, 2006
    You've got a nice flow.
    It gave me tingles! And I prefer ByaXRen, but this was pretty good! Too bad it was so short though!
    Keep writing! ^__^
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  • From serpia on October 29, 2006
    I really like the way you write. It flows nicely. You seemed to have a few past-tense/future-tense/present-tense errors, but the overall hotness of this fic makes up for it. Keep writing, you're good at it :D
    BTW, I love how you portray the pairing... its so casual... i love it


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