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Reviews for Drawn and Inked

By : VioletTsuzuki
  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2015
    I liked this very much. I got a little confused in some parts but, found myself again. I must say I've never pictured Ukitaki with Gin. GinXAizen. Interesting. In some chapters it was too much Uki/Gin for me though. I guess all in all it was a solid piece though.
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  • From Vyper on April 23, 2014
    This was a great story. I wish it would continue, but such is life. I love the Renji and Byakuya pairing it is my favorite pairing. There is just something sexy about Renji that gets me especially when his hair is down.
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  • From ANON - Katchy on March 24, 2009
    My first aff.net review.. I have to say, I absolutely loved your fic. I was a little wary at first - for some reason Byakuya seemed a little ooc to me. I absolutely hate Gin, and I must say I'm slightly angry at the fact that I liked him in this story! He and Ukitake do make a cute couple, though it's not a pairing I'll actively pursue. Everything was beautifully well-written and flowed nicely. I only came across minimal mistakes in reading. I really liked the interpretation of Renji's tattoos, it was really unique and intriguing. The end of the story made me slightly sad, though. Especially with how far into the manga I am. Sorry if I'm rambling, it's 2am and I've been reading the fic for a few hours now! All-in-all, a wonderfully composed bit of literature =)
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  • From ANON - NeuroticNut on July 18, 2008
    I'm sorry, but I'm just having such a difficult time with the pairing. I mean, I always had Ukitake paired with Shunsui, never Gin. Holy crap. Never, ever Gin. Especially since the freak is evil! *scary noises* EVIL.

    Anyway.

    -NN
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  • From ANON - NeuroticNut on July 18, 2008
    Ok, so, quick question:

    "The younger shinigami knew that the nobleman had his sword positioned for the Bankai..."

    Shouldn't Byakuya be ascending to his Shikai first? He's not there yet, Senbonzakura is not in a released form, correct? But then, why not just threaten to slip into Bankai considering Renji could probably handle the Shikai anyway... to some extent, anyhow.

    Moving on, I really like how you write about Byakuya's household and whatnot like you actually seem to know how it's all laid out. It's refreshing to see someone take confidence in their imagination, you know? I'm glad I stumbled across this story.

    And *le gasp*! Renji didn't want it?! How unforgivable! What a... hilarious concept. *snicker*

    -NN
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  • From ANON - Cender26 on May 13, 2007
    I really like your RenjiByakuya on going fics. Do you only post fics here or have a website?
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  • From ANON - gogo on May 11, 2007
    Great story. So glad there was a sort-of happy ending with Bya and Renji. My heart would have broken if it hadn't worked out.
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  • From ANON - Reina on January 05, 2007
    ~whines~ I loved the ending... it made me so sad to read though... espcially knowing all that stuff that you refered to about Renji and Byakuya... a heartwarming tale with an ending that could freeze the blood of all Renji/Byakuya fans... it was beautiful ^_^
    And the pairing of Ukitake-taichou and Ichimaru-taichou was quite unexpected. I loved it also.
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  • From ANON - Uchiha Yumi on October 20, 2006
    GAAAAAAAAAH! SUCH A COOL ENDING!
    As usual, I really loved it - couold it be otherwise? ;) Ieeeeh - I might cry my heart out because this was the LAST chapter, but I'll try not to - looking forward for your other fics!

    Good luck!

    Yumi-chan
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  • From ANON - BrucesGirl on October 19, 2006
    Oh, Touda! You know I love your work, right? Anything that you write is so eloquent and beautiful. I just feel like you should have more reviews to this than you do. It's such a beautiful sweet story with just the right amount of angst and porn to make your readers drool.

    I love your work. You're like amazing.

    *fangirlish squeal* You MUST write more.
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  • From ANON - Cookie on October 08, 2006
    GREAT STORY!

    Gin is so BAD! And Renji is so COOL!

    Look forward to reading more!

    You are an AWESOME writer!

    Keep up the great work!!!!!

    @@@@
    @^_^@
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  • From ANON - Uchiha Yumi on September 18, 2006
    Wow - already 11 chapters! And I still can't get enough of it...O_O Wowie...*winks* Today's chapter really interested me a lot - Byakuya's anger was perfect and he got to be top, which is aaaaalways a good thing XD
    Another thing I really appreciated was Ukitake's last sentence. Truly poetic it just...fits wonderfully, in my opinion.
    Sorry if I'm not able to give some constructive and smart comments, but I just get too fangirlish when it comes to this story XD I hope you'll forgive me.

    Good luck with every of your stories!

    Yumi-chan
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  • From ANON - Ashke on September 01, 2006
    THANK YOU!!
    I love this chapter.
    Oi, Gin is so kinky; it makes me all hot and sweaty.
    But Renji and Byakuya are just extra yummy.
    I love how you display their characteristics and all.
    It is so satisfying. ^-^;
    I can't wait till the next chapter, I want to see what naughty Gin does.
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  • From ANON - Uchiha Yumi on August 30, 2006
    KYAAAAAAAAH!!!

    I was waiting for it. TRULY waiting for it! Byakuya's anger was just perfect and-...Oh gawd, how sick is Gin's mind? Obviously, I can't wait for the next chapter. REALLY-CAN'T-WAIT!

    Oh, I'd just like to point out a little thing, if you don't mind...


    "With a light bow, Gin bowed slightly and hopped out, landing on the next lower rooftop where he looked back up with a dangerous smirk, his voice carrying lightly over the nighttime breeze."

    Isn't there a small repetition in the begging of the sentence? Other than that, I think it's perfect...*blushes* Sorry if I was wrong.

    Good-luck with your cosplay-thingie!

    Yumi-chan
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  • From ANON - Ashke on August 23, 2006
    Lord.
    Reading all of these chapters in a matter of two days could almost be called obsession.
    x_x
    You're an absolutely fantastic writer, and I can't wait until the next chapter.
    Renji was being so bad. He should be punished. v_v;
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