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By : yamijay
  • From ANON - evilchild (not signed in) on January 24, 2006
    my e-mail is kim_04303542004@yahoo.com if you want help.
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  • From ANON - evilchild (not signed in) on January 24, 2006
    I just want to point out that you have a couple of mistakes. Like you had put a 'good' fever. It doesn't make sense. You can't have a good fever. Aside from the mistakes (maybe you should find a beta? I can help if you'd like. Just e-mail me.) I really do like this and can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - cerinity on January 24, 2006
    This is good so far! The story line is original and seems...well thought out? Anyway its good! You said it would be shounen-ai, so is Hitsugaya going to end up with Ichigo? That would be my first impression, but im not good at these things *sweatdrops*. Anyway, this is good and i cant wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Daisuke on January 24, 2006
    I really really really the Fanfiction! *.*
    Itīs so sweet.
    And I seriously would like to read more of it.
    I donīt actually think that the chara are to OOC. Maybe some, but I couldnīt even say right now who.
    So Pleeeeaaaase write more of it.
    I like tha Chars, the Idea, the Story so fra an your writing to. *thumbs up*
    ByeBye *g*
    by Daisuke. *smiles*
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  • From ANON - sweet on January 23, 2006
    this is a good start to a fanfic, i love hitsugaya, its not ooc at all!
    KEEP WRITING MAN!!!!!!
    u rock
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  • From ANON - jordan on January 23, 2006
    great fic keep goin im sure itll be a very good fic just from readin the first chapter
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  • From ANON - T-A-R21 on January 23, 2006
    So far ....so good, can't wait to see where you are taking this story ...lol
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