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Reviews for Bitten

By : KiraDouji
  • From remyjames on June 03, 2008
    I loved your whole series. I do hope you continue to write more.
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  • From ANON - viciouscallisto on December 16, 2005
    yay, this was really really good! i liked the byakuya/renji relationship alot. i'm glad that neither one of the characters were OOC. you stayed true to their personalities and i thank you for that! good jon with the fic, i loved reading it!!
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  • From ANON - Elena on November 13, 2005
    I have to be honest with you, I have never liked this pairing RenjixByakuya, because it is just too hard to picture Byakuya with another GUY! However I been looking all over the place for a good Byakuya fic...and believe or not, I found it and he is with Renji.
    I know how hard it is to write about Byakuya, anything remotely close to express the smallest emotion is almost OOC for him. Yet you make it all very elegant and believable, from Hisana to Rukia, from Renji to Yumi. They are all there, in character and building up a new Byakuya slowly, rationally and emotionally.
    /bow
    plz continue.

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  • From ANON - theMICEmen on November 11, 2005
    “ … Yer sword talks to you during sex?”

    XD This made me laugh so much - imagining the look on Renji's face.
    This is a really great follow up to 'When the Moon Reaches Back'...Renji brooding, mm, yum. Still, rigid+ebil Byakuya, can't tell Renji to stay nicely. Pfft.


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  • From ANON - Kinmik on November 11, 2005
    Kinmik: Oh! I hope I didn’t make you cry! ByakuyaxHisana is so sad to write. L Hopefully this cheers you up ^_^
    lol. it did! it did! thank you! i love the personification of senbonzakura (sp?) and especially love the way you always fill in each character to make them so believable. can't wait to see your next work!
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  • From ANON - Shikuro on November 10, 2005
    I've read your series to this point and I must say that I'm impressed, though you may want to combine it all into one story with multiple chapters and go over them for spelling (caught a few errors while reading). As far as how you wrote the characters there was no real out of character moments just well placed situations that brought out the best and the worst of both of them. I look forward to future fiction from you.
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  • From kittyblue on November 07, 2005
    Awww!! Amazing! The ending was to die for! LoL And the Omake sure was funny! It sure lived up to my expectations! =)
    I sure hope that you continue to write Bleach fics.. I don't think I can live without your stories!! =^,^=

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  • From ANON - Goddess of the Void on November 07, 2005
    Wai~ I got the 69th hit... hehehe, lucky me, eh?

    Anyhow. Thought I'd pop by and say, OMG I LOVE YOUR STORIES~! ^^;

    It's the only RenjiByakuya i've ever found that I've deemed worth reading to my elitist fan-taste...
    And I'm soooooooooooooo HAPPY~ that you added this little gem to your series.

    So totally addicted to your writing. And this fic is, like all your others, going onto my ULTIMATE FAVOURITE FANFICTION!List.

    From a purely literary view point, I'd like to say, I though it a masterpiece. Your Byakuya and Renji are wonderfully in character, as far as I can see. And I love how you've made so many characters into wonderful prodders, so to speak, that help both Renji and Byakuya to figure things out. Loved how Senbonzakura was Byakuya's little muse... ^.^

    I sincerely hope that you will continue to write in this fandom, and especially with this and even other yaoi pairings.
    *Nice guy pose* to you!
    ^___^

    Avidly awaiting more,
    The Goddess Of the Void
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  • From ANON - Heather on November 06, 2005
    this was such a great companion piece to your fic "when the moon reaches back". i absolutely love the passion, the fire you give renji. his personality shines so brightly in this. byakuya's words left a lasting impression on the young man, and while he initially stormed away, i'm glad to see that he came to his senses at the end. his determination and staunch refusal to back down is admirable, and i think his captain highly respects that about him. i also think that the way you portray their relationship in this fic shows this the best. while byakuya still has his own problems and insecurities about the past, renji is slowly helping him heal. absolutely wonderful story! (i'm going to have to check out your other stories now!)

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    “… Th’ freakin’ point of closin’ a door is ta’ keep people – that door was locked!” Renji stuttered, half irrationally angry and half simply shocked.

    “Not very well.”

    ha! i was laughing soo much at this point. that is just classic.

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    “Miss me that much, Taichou?”

    “… If I said ‘yes’…?”

    “We wouldn’t make it to th’ bed.”

    “I shouldn’t answer, then.”

    that has got to be one of the single hottest lines i've ever read coming from byakuya. (well, it's from byakuya and renji, but ya know...) just the fact that it's from someone so normally closed-off and reserved makes it all the better.

    and yes, i'm dying to read the manga! i've read up to about 10 volumes, and i've got the rest downloaded. trust me, your story increased my desire to read the manga. so thanks for that!
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