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Reviews for The Playtime Mini-Series - COMPLETE!

By : Tsukineko9
  • From ANON - Dynan on July 14, 2005
    Anytype of yaoi Bleach fic are REALLY RARE.. So a big thankyou and hug for autor/authors to deliver so well and even with my Bleach OTP!! THANK YOU!! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Rowen-Silver on July 13, 2005
    Hey there. Just a reader, not an author, and truth be told, I almost never comment. But your plight just sounded so sympathy-worthy. Just to possibly give you an idea, I'm sure there are plenty like me that read tons but never comment. Sometimes it's too late at night and we're tired. Sometimed We just can't be bothered. Sometimes we want to save our comments for the stories we read that are truly exceptional. But just because a fic isn't lengthy and clever and poetically written doesn't mean that we didn't have oodles of fun reading it. So I'm commenting now, to tell you that your fic here is definitely fun, and a pleasure to read. First of all, it's always nice when the author uses correct grammar and spelling. (You have *no* idea.) And second, it's my personal preference to read stories where the characters I like are kept in character and the sequence of events is logical and sounds possible. Either do it that way, or make it completely AU and throw everything but the physical description out the window, I say. Yours meets both thses criteria and is a healthy, satisfying length to boot. A nicely developed time frame. Bravo. WRITE MORE. And I hope this comment spurs thy inspiration.
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  • From ANON - kitty on July 13, 2005
    Waaaaah! I must apologize for increasing your hit count by quite a bit, but every time I have had to try and REVIEW, AFF.net has crashed on me, saying the server is down. (T_T) But yes, I wanted to let you know that I really do like what you are doing with this and to please, PLEASE continue! From the top of my head, I DO remember a typo somewhere... a little more than half-way down, in chapter two. I think you used "they're" when it was supposed to be "their"... or something like that. I don't remember exactly, but it was something to that effect. But yes, other than that, I like how you keep the characters so IN character. That's what makes the Ichigo/Ishida coupling so inticing... the rivalry, the angst, the similarities b/w the two... but yes, PLEASE keep up writing. I await the next chapter. Omachishite orimasu.
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  • From ANON - Michiru on July 13, 2005
    I love it! XD

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  • From ANON - Tastes Like Chicken on July 13, 2005
    I like the fact that the story sofar could read as either a series of one-peices or as a plot-in-development. It would be wonderful to see the gradual progression between Ichigo and Ishida. I look foward to part 3!!
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  • From ANON - MusikVibe on July 12, 2005
    YAAAAAAAY! I love this story. I've always wanted to read a good Ichigo/Ishida story that was sexy but with passion and love, but this...this is AWESOME! I look forward to your next chapter. You have inspired me to write my own story but that's later down the road. Anyways thanks for entertaining me!

    KH
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  • From ANON - Spiritual on July 12, 2005
    Love it! Love this pairing and love the fact that they actually like each other! So... when does Ishida gets a turn at top? Wouldn't it be fun to convince Ichigo...
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  • From Ouri on July 12, 2005
    Chapter Two, even hotter than its predecessor! ^_^ I saw one instance of "they're" that should have been a "their", but if there were any other typos in this segment. I was far too distracted to notice them. **fans self** Very nicely done, and thank you.
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  • From ANON - Lucrecia on July 11, 2005
    Oh wow, that was GOOD. XD I have nothing much to say except I hope there's more coming.
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  • From ANON - Iron Dog on July 11, 2005
    I thought this little story was well written. Good spelling/grammar (thank god) and had a good pace to it. I too know how hard it is to get reviews. generally, I'll review if the story was good and I liked it. This was both. Don't get discouraged and as an author buddy recently told me..."write what you wanna write and don't let others dictate what you produce". Should you continue with this great. If not, then it was a nice piece of smut to read on a hot summer day.
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  • From ANON - Kai on July 10, 2005
    Oh. My. GOD. That was awesome, Kit and Ceci!!!!!!!!!(sry 'bout the nicknames, they just seemed to cute not to use)
    I am soooooo glad that you guys updated!!!!!!! I have no complaints, and I can be pretty nit-picky!!
    It's wonderful to find authors who actually proofread!!!
    Anyway, keep up the great work!!! *cough*please continue *cough*
    LOVE YA GUYS!!!!!!!! MWAH MWAH!!!!
    Kai
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  • From ANON - Kai on July 06, 2005
    KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! First Spartan Ninjas and now this!!!!!!
    You two are gonna spoil me!!!! I love how you keep them in character, and you even remembered how much
    Uryu hates buttons! *giggles* Button Nazi.....deranged seamstress......heheheheheheh......
    LOVE YA BOTH!!!!!! MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!!!!!!! XOYXOYXOYXOYXOYXOY
    Kai
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  • From ANON - ayachan on July 05, 2005
    *drool* omg, this is the kind of story that i've been waiting for.. so hot!!! more please then ^_^ and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - xtrek on July 04, 2005
    *lol* You did it! This fic made my day. Hehe, seme!Ichigo trying not to loose his position to creepy, manipulative Ishida... that just like those two. Although I wonder how Ichigo got this good in multitasking while having sex ;-). Please update soon! (I know you want more reviews, but please think of us readers, too. For indepth feedback posting in an lj community might be the better way.)
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  • From ANON - k on July 04, 2005
    Nice story! Shinigami is spelled with one n though, not two. ^^

    I appreciate that you want to encourage feedback, but personally? Any time I see someone withholding chapters for reviews, it not only makes me LESS likely to review, but often makes me stop reading the story altogether. Just sayin'.
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