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Reviews for The Playtime Mini-Series - COMPLETE!

By : Tsukineko9
  • From ANON - sorviball on August 01, 2005
    Well, I was going to leave you guys four different reviews since i think that you definitely deserve them, but i couldn't 'get myself to stop reading so i'll just leave you one fatty one. hm, first things first. i think you guys have a really good grasp on the dynamic between the two characters, especially ichigo. i love the way you write his inner monologues while describing how nonchalant he tries to be. the couples' constant jibes at each other are very well written. i especially liked the third chapter when they finally discuss what they are to each other. i think it was very well done in that it wasn't overly mushy. i don't feel that either of them would have really wanted to express their deepest emotions. my point is, it was very ichigo/ishida-esque. oh, and i loved how rukia knew what they were doing in the shack, and how she teased ichigo about it.

    random, but one of the most hilarious moments was in the pool, when ishida thought that ichigo wanted to bottom. i seriously started laughing because i could just imagine how apalled ichigo would be at that idea. on that note, i loved the fourth chapter because i think many authors fail to realize that couples WILL switch roles, even if rarely. i think it's realistic that ishida would want to top ichigo once in a while, and i also truly believe that ichigo (or any seme) would be curious as to what it would feel like to be uke. i give big props to authors who are open-minded enough to write a relationship where both partners are both uke and seme. great job, and please continue. i promise to repeatedly posst long reviews like this!
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  • From ANON - Forgetful on July 30, 2005
    *giggles* I love seme!Ishida. Although, it's so obvious he's Ichigo's bitch. *hugs you guys* Write more?
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  • From ANON - scatterheart on July 28, 2005
    i cant wait for another update, i was grinning the whole way through. spectacular writing! im so happy :D
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  • From ANON - Paisley on July 28, 2005
    Sorry I never reviewed before, but I am now.

    You're story is really good. I'd like to see more of a relationship between Ichigo and Ishida instead of them just constantly fucking, like in Chapter 3. I dunno, you don't have to. I was just suggesting a little more growth into their relationship too.

    And I must say I don't really like people who base the speed of their work on the amount of reviews. There will be people who just don't review, but a lot more people DO read it that don't review and I write because I like knowing people read it, reviews don't really mean anything to me and they shouldn't to you either. You should just love writing because you're good and you can write, not if people read it or not. It's a plus if they do, but if they don't review, it's not the end of the world.
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  • From ANON - kurama barton on July 26, 2005
    really loved this^_^! liked particularly Ishida's characterization. i never really expected that this series would go beyond 2 parts. keep on sharing the IchiIshi love!
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  • From ANON - Goddess of the Void on July 26, 2005
    Yahoi! Kitsue-sama to Tsukineko-sama! Hontou ni arigatou gozaimasu *bows deeply*
    I absolutely loved this mini-series; i've been mindlessly meandering through many a fandom looking for some equisitve piece of writing, and I found this *fangirls* ^^ People tell me that somewhat like Ishida being a "Button Nazi", I'm one of the grammar variety. As such, I'm truly impressed by the level of literary aptitude displayed by your writing. *applauds* This I would say is one of those rare "I can't believe I found such a fucking good fic, and must now tell all my slash-addicted friends"!fics. Lol.

    Keep up the good work!

    It's definitely appreciated. ^^

    Avidly awaiting more, Goddess of the Void.

    *continues fangirling*
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  • From ANON - T on July 23, 2005
    WOW! I love this story. What I love most about it is how every chapter is almost like a story within itself, and in the end it all comes together for one purpose... whether it'd be smut or something else....XD. Ishida and Ichigo are hoooooot together!! ^^ I also like how you guys thought of different ideas and ways just for them to do it! Awesome! The only thing... Ichigo's hair is Orange. Aweesome story! I can't wait to read more! ^^
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  • From ANON - loki on July 22, 2005
    okay, so here it goes. i haven't actually read the playtime mini-series, but i only have internet for a few minutes before i get cut off... leaching wireless sucks ass. anyway, i read one of your snippets at the bottom of your 3rd story and i really wanted to review because bleach yaoi is rare and i love you for even writing it. thanks.
    loki scott
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  • From ANON - Potemkin on July 20, 2005
    Mmmm...yummy story. Sex laden and mildly angsty, can't beat that.
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  • From ANON - firelily on July 20, 2005
    Great job! This is the first yaoi story i've ever read, and I honestly didn't think I would like it, but the way you two have written Ichigo's and Ishida's relationship is just so good. I think you have their dynamic down. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Karen on July 20, 2005
    o.o I love this story. Hell, I love how you did the Ichigo/Ishida stuff. XD Please, do write more.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on July 20, 2005
    hmm... interesting... but i think i prefer ichigo/ishida more :P
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  • From ANON - alex\'s little duckling on July 19, 2005
    *giggles* that was good stuff! i really liked it and i congradulate you, for this is one of the few REALLY good smut pieces i have read with good grammar. But i do have one question, is the word Shinigami spelled with one or two "n"s? You've used it both ways a lot, and i'd like to know. And i again thank you for the good grammar, because you have no idea how angry it makes me when people post something and you can barely understand it. I guess it's just one of the many weird things i am very anal about.....and one more thing.....Go Ishida-seme! yay!
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  • From ANON - Ahd on July 19, 2005
    I liked that one too, but I think poor Ichigo won't be happy when Ishida wants to do that more than 'every so often'. ^^ Can't wait for more...
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on July 19, 2005
    omigosh...that was soooooo great. It's totally different from a Sasunarusasu moment when they agree to who is top and bottom...i like how Ishida took control and didn't give Ichigo a chance to say 'no'. The descriptions made Ichigo sound extremely muscular and LARGE, while Ishida's description brought to mind a very skeletal man. It was weird trying to picture that. I really like that you have hinted that they will be fighting for who will be top and who will be bottom in the future. That's sooo HOT!
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