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Reviews for The Playtime Mini-Series - COMPLETE!

By : Tsukineko9
  • From ANON - sorviball on August 11, 2005
    Dude, this was AWESOME!! hehe, i loved the threesome with kon, it was just a really great idea. you guys did a great job keeping track of who was doing what and in what position. i wasn't ever confused or wondering what the hell happened to ichigo's hand. ::sigh:: lucky ishida, getting two ichigos. i must say the whole thing was all very sexy while still maintaining the level of humor that you guys always have in your other fics. i have no real criticisms...it was all just too yummy. i think i'm about to go reread it! what i loved about your portrayal of ishida is that you manage to make him sexy without covering up any of his quirks. as always, ichigo was perfectly pushy and impatient. oh, the only thing that struck as odd was the sudden shift after they were all done. the transition getting to the shower was a little shaky, and i can't really pinpoint why so it probably wasn't a big deal. i just thought it was sudden, but that's just me and i was probably just sad that the lemon was over. i'm SOOO looking forward to the next installment. more lemony goodness from our favorite couple/trio. keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Sam on August 11, 2005
    Hey guys! I'd just like to say that from what i have read of yours (which is practically everything pertaining to Naruto and I'm in the middle of the Bleach playtime mini series), I really must say that you capture the characters' personalities excellently...I've read a lot of yaoi, and some people really just dont have a feel for it, you know? Like they make Sasuke not seem like himself - but when I read your stories, I can truly imagine Sasuke and Naruto as themselves. You do a really good job of portraying them. Here is an example of what I mean: I was just reading poolside and the part where Ichigo says, "Do you want to start in the shallow end like some 3 yr old brat?" That is SO him, you know? And Ishida too...I honestly can say that I have no complaints aside from the occasional typo here and there. Great job and keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - hColleen on August 11, 2005
    Actually...two minutes can kill you....

    Seriously, though. I really like this story! Your use of detail, expression, everything just seems to flow so natrually, even the inclusion of Kon (though, that would be...strange). It's amusing how Rukia actually *helped* with that...wicked little girl, isn't she. I look forward to your next and sadly last chapter :D
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  • From ANON - Ru-chan on August 10, 2005
    I like this story a lot...I think you dealt with Kon's character very well...his desire to be in a real living body is very nicely portrayed here...he's actually quite precious. Keep writing. This story is quite good.
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  • From ANON - Marya on August 09, 2005

    Just one more chapter left? Waah! I want more!! ^_~
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  • From ble on August 08, 2005
    Was finally able to read all the chapters so far, (5). ~sigh~ What a great series of stories. My fav pairing in Bleach. I can't wait to read the next two, was it?, chapters and I'll be sorry to see it end. I really like your writing and am going to look up whatever else you have posted.

    Thank you for taking the time to write... I know how much time it does take, even just one chapter, especially when you want the stories just so, (and I don't have a beta, so takes me a really long time ~laughs~). ^_^ Anyway, I gotcha on my recommended list. Something this yummy is a must read, for sure! ~BLE
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  • From ANON - xtrek on August 08, 2005
    wow, you pulled it off: a threesome with Kon! And it didn't feel akward. It was just hilarious to read Ichigo's thoughts while Ishida and Kon were *ähm* busy pleasuring each other. Kon was awesome, kinda shy but soo needy. I guess you should really find him a nice body *supresses naughty thoughts*. I also like Ichigo's more emotional moments here. So PLEASE write more! By the way: first I thought you might forget Rukia in the end but you solved it perfectly! Hehe~
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  • From ANON - ayachan on August 07, 2005
    well, i must say, i think you should continue this playtime mini-series... one more and it'll be done!!! no way!!! that's not cool... lol, well, even if you do end this, please write MORE bleach yaoi (ichigo/ishida please), because this is some darn good stuff XD
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  • From ANON - K on August 07, 2005
    That was just...HOT! I actually liked the little 3-some part! *blushes* You're not planning to kill someone and use that body, are you? @_@

    Hee, ok, that was a dumb question. Anyways, I DEFINITELY can't wait to read the next chapter. ^_____^
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on August 07, 2005
    awww. that was sweet. i absolutely loved the idea of giving kon his own body. i swear your writing gets better everytime i read something by you guys. keep up the great work. always looking foward to your next update. ^__^
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  • From ANON - ??? on August 07, 2005
    Nice addition with Kon there. Be sure to get him a nice body! #>.
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  • From ANON - kim on August 07, 2005
    suugoiiii!! *glomps* :D!!!! heart it!
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  • From ANON - ayachan on August 03, 2005
    i think ishida should get tied up so ichigo can have his fun kinky way with him
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  • From ANON - Pam ( Michiru) on August 02, 2005
    I remembered! I used Michiru as a username and the same email XD

    I liked this one a lot too! :3
    I was expecting it too, XD, Ishida needed top too XD

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  • From ANON - Pam on August 02, 2005
    I loved it!
    ^.^ sweet, funny, makes sense, its interesting, they are in character, just great!
    ^.^
    I´ve let reviews before but I dont remember wich email I used XD

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