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By : LilMonk
  • From ANON - ElvenDestiny (not signed in) on August 23, 2010
    I completely adore your story. Your characterizations of Yoruichi and Byakuya are fascinating, plus you've described their relationship so well that sometimes I have a hard time not thinking that this was indeed what happened in the canon storyline :D This story strikes the delicate balance where even the R rated scenes take on deeper meaning. I haven't decided whether I like Yoruichi's nonchalant attitude more or Byakuya's seriousness!

    I did notice a couple mistakes in your Japanese translations but I think they're probably editing errors, not actually errors? Like Byakuya's Senbonzakura is actually a Thousand Cherry Blossoms, not trees - at least according to the official translation and all the fan scanlations I've seen. I do have a question as to why you said Ichigo's hair was dyed in this chapter though. From what I remember, he specifically said that everyone thought it was dyed when it was his natural color, so as a result he got picked on by teachers and other students all through his childhood, hence the mutual defense pact with Chad/Sado...
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  • From ANON - Pixie Ray on February 25, 2008
    At first I was a little hesitant to read this story. I've had a great deal of upsets in fan-fiction. But I did and let me just say. It's wonderful. Your vocabulary use is amazing and just inspirational. I cannot wait to get my new laptop so that I can bookmark this story. Its a wonderful read, and my goodness you are my hero for putting Byakuya and Yoruichi together. I thought I was one of the weird ones that thought they would go perfectly together. Than you so much for writing this and I hope to see more of Byakuya and Yoruichi together from you, or really anything else. Your a magnificent writer so I'd try and red it anyway.
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  • From ANON - Jen on August 13, 2007
    Wow, I expected to read a Yoruichi/Kisuke fic, but it turned out to be this complex relationship between Byakuya and Yoruichi. This was amazingly written and I was impressed with the way you handled Byakuya's character. He's not easily made for romance fics because of his cold demeanor, but somehow you've made it an advantage by explaing how in love he is with Yoruichi. Although at times the fic got confusing by traveling back and forth between past and present, it definately added it's own charm by adding an element of curiosity. Thanks for writing this story.
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  • From RacerX78 on May 28, 2007
    Great story, hope for a sequel with kisuke and yoruichi.
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  • From ANON - evafan on May 18, 2007
    damn its to much to read in one go. your writting style is truly one of a kind in my opinion and is, i must admit above and beyond my comprehention at this point though i can follow it and find it more intertaning than any other fanfic. at this point a brake is needed to let your story sink in and set befor i continue reading. keep on writing your works are truely enjoyable to read.
    evafan.
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  • From ANON - Alex on November 25, 2005
    ...This is pretty much the best thing ever.
    Do you write Naruto? You should write Naruto. God damn, write me some NejiTen, genius!
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  • From ANON - elenayuan on November 14, 2005
    I have just found your fiction..and what can I say, this is too good to be just a Bleach fanfiction. I love this pairing, and loved the way you wrote it. Not many people can write Byakuya, and not talking about the Byakuya you created. I am speechless. Thank you for writing such a special story /bow

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  • From ANON - Spiral on November 07, 2005
    Holy hell. THANK YOU! Thanks for writing this amazing fic. You made me cry! I'm a sucker for heart wrenching moments.
    You captured my favorite charachter Yoruichi beautifully.

    Here I was thinking how cool it'd be if there was a Yoruichi/Byakuya fic and I find it and loved it! Magnificent work!

    Thank you for taking time to write it and sharing it for all of us to read.

    -Spiral
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  • From ANON - nickel on September 23, 2005
    As beautiful as always!

    -"Sunset" struck my 'kinsenn.' ('Kinsenn,' as in koto strings of the mind. A Japanese saying, I felt that it just described what I felt on reading "Possible AU epilogue part deux") Kisuke and Benihime, I'd like to think that they 'met' exactly the way they did in "Sunset." The bitter-sweetness of all the conflicting emotions between the characters added to the neo-surrealism of the whole fic, and...

    *Here we go again!>u/*
    I loved it.

    I've been waiting for the final ending of this fic ever since I started reading it, the way you just can't put down a good book unfinished. But now that I know it's really going to come (and pretty soon if I read correctly... ), I can't help but wish it would stay away, just a while longer. It's the same like when you slow down the pace you're reading at on reaching the last chapter of a favorite book.

    Then again, I guess that when *you* say that it's gonna come, it's gonna come, and I wouldn't have it any other way. I'll be looking forward to the final chapter, the 'Grand Finale,' and stop being so darn soppy over a fic that hasn't even finished yet. >u/
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  • From allyluv on September 19, 2005
    you are awesom!!! i read almost all of the chapters in one sitting... and finally had to stop since my contacts were getting dry and i had to wake up at 6am for work.

    HAHA! i'm definitely looking forward to more. you're very talented at this and i love your writing style. would you be planning on writing different bleach pairings???

    anyways. please update soon =)
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  • From nickel on September 11, 2005

    Ooh, I liked that.

    I seem to be saying that a lot here, aren't I? >u/
    Well, I'm an honest person, you can't blame me for using the same darn expression every time...

    Using Scheherazade was very nice. I liked the image of Yoruichi with an Arabian look. A lot.
    And as always, Byakuya's character depiction was delicious. I'll be looking forward to the rest of your multiple AU epilogue (...I *think* that's what you called it), RR like any good little reader should *grin* all the way to the Canon one-chapter epilogue.
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  • From ANON - nickel on August 29, 2005
    I liked that!!!
    Epilogue part 'une,' was it? ^_ ) I'll REALLY be looking forward to part 'dos' then. >u/
    (BTW, could you remove one of those reviews I left last time? I do send multiple reviews, but sending two that are so similiar... )
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  • From nickel on August 28, 2005
    That was just beautiful.
    I loved it!!!

    About that epilogue... I didn't really see the need for it at first, but now that you've mentioned it, I'll be looking in on 'Tag' every other day to make sure I won't miss it! >u/
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  • From ANON - frozenkisses on July 21, 2005
    It's an unusual pairing, but you make it work very well. Everything seems to fit into place rather than the fic being any kind of crack. The sex is very sensual and well done. It's also great to see Yoruichi in a fic. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - taichou on July 04, 2005
    This fic is seriously THE BEST Bleach fic I have ever read. I'm really surprised that no one else reviewed. Then again, there aren't that many Bleach fics so... I really love the depth of their relationship and the way you make this pairing work is flawless. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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