Reviews for Before Broken VowsBy : c0p13r |
Well written and particularly well paced. Can't wait for the rukia chapters.
This was always one of my fav stories of yours. Aside from being delighted to see more, I'd love to see some more chapter with a similar concept in the Naruto universe. Hinata's/Naruto's/Sakura's etc bachelorette party/stag do etc.
I just like the general sluttiness without the NTR elements. Especially liked the touch of Orihime saying she'd tell Ichigo the truth.
so glad you're back. And a great chapter too. Just personal preference but a few things I was hoping for in this were:
for rangiku and possibly even other girls to join in and yoruichi to be more involved during the main sex scene with orihime.
for yushiro to be hiding a massive unbelievable monster in his pants to give her an experience she'll never forget.
for him to get into it a bit and decide to be a bit mischievous and even dominant. Make her submit to him.
another guy who should have some fun with the auburn princess and other ladies is hanataro. You did give him a mention in this story.
lastly I really liked your stud ichigo stories back before you left the site so I'd be over the moon seeing more of those with ichigo getting a taste of every girl imaginable.
Glad to have you back, Copier. Are you going to also upload your older stuff? And I’d also like to request a Ichigo/Unohana lemon since that’s a crack pairing that doesn’t get much love.
Well that was a pretty hot chapter man I can't wait for the next one.
Glad to see you return to the game, interisting chapter btw.
Would you consider doing more odd pairings for example Keigo/Nel, Mizuiro/Unohana or Hanataro/Isane to name a few.
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