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By : NeemaAdaeze
  • From blackfox1 on October 14, 2013
    Interesting concept. When I think 'hunters' (or hear the term used), my mind drifts in the direction of 'Buffy', but as you're only four chapters into this, you've more than enough time to continue with your world-building. I've read a few stories in which the author has done a gender-switch on Ichigo, but I believe that you've come up with one of the better-rounded versions of his character. It will be intriguing to see where you choose to take this, though the first chapter is something of a spoiler, in that your readers get to see the results of the last two years, much like getting to eat dessert first. However, from the number of hits your story has received, I don't think anyone minds. As far as constructive criticism goes, I'd run this through a spelling and grammar check at least once, especially the grammar check. There are a number of technical issues with the writing that a program like Word will catch and correct for you, and doing so will help your readers as well. I really encourage you to keep working on this and look forward to the next chapter.
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