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Reviews for Prize of Victory 2

By : NovaAlexandria
  • From ANON - gollumsfriend on January 17, 2013


    A really nice, promising start to part 2...thank you for posting! It's great to be back in the story again.

    To answer your question of favorite character from PoV 1, I'd have to call it a tie between Grimmjow and Ajuga. Grimmjow because you did an amazing job at keeping him in character, yet showing another side to him that was entirely believable. Ajuga because she's the best OC in a Bleach fanfic that I've ever read.
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  • From ANON - Rachael on January 16, 2013
    Hello! Welcome back! It's been a long three months without you! I have actually been a fan of your writing since Midsummers Eve...yeah. A long time. I followed PoV entirely and my favorite chapter was 'Reporting to Kami.' Because it was the first time we got to see Gin, who has been my favorite character all along. I am excited to read more! As always, you deliver nothing but the best and I am a bit nervous about what is coming...you mentioned WAY back in the first that Aizen DOES find out about Karins royal blood and it 'isn't pretty.' I have been anxiously awaiting that moment...I'm also excited to see a somewhat grown up Toshiro. And...well I'm excited about a lot of things! But I'm equally as nervous. Hopefully life is kind to you and we can see some more chapters soon! It's weird how I feel that I have a history...with your writing. Midsummers Eve was THE FIRST fiction I ever read that I enjoyed...and I was shortly over 16 when that came out. It's an odd feeling. :) I await your update~!
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  • From ANON - Rose on January 15, 2013
    yeah the nest part is up and on to a great start cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2013
    Hey, I'm a big fan who read all of the PoV stories.

    Personally I'd like something really awful to happen to ajuga and diaemus. It isn't because I don't like them, it's just that even though ajuga was exposed to some of the darkness when she saw Gin get punished, neither really saw how bad it can really get.

    If they have to deal with that, run off and see hollows really abusing shinigami and regular souls then they can stop chalking it up to just instinct and get genuinely po'ed.

    I mean Orihime, Tatsuki and the others all know what Soi Fongs going through, they can see how much other characters are suffering, but since they and their families are happy and safe they make the best of it.

    If something REALLY terrible happened, maybe something that gets Diaemus to tell Ulquiorra off for being no better than Nnoitora/Barrangan/Random sadistic hollow since he raped Orihime then they can realize that they should be doing a lot more than just going through their everyday lives.

    Sorry if it's a bad idea, I just think that Orihime and the others are kinda dismissive about how bad it is for aizens other subjects.

    Also will Karin still give Ichigo shit?
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  • From ANON - Kain on January 15, 2013
    Happy too see this continue and totally stoked that you are going to focus on the side characters as well. Heh it would appear that Ajuga has inherited a bit of her fathers bravado and arrogance along with his skill lol. Only natural I suppose given what she is and being the child of 2 very talented individuals. Very surprised to see Soifon with child, I assume Ggio is the father, would be interesting to see how that came about lol, although their were hints in part 1 and in consolation POV. Aizen is still an evil douche nozzle I see, the man could turn even the most pleasant of conversations into a thinly veiled threat. I just got a few questions though, if you wouldn't mind answering that is. How much do the children know about the war preceding the swarm and the subsequent take over of the soul society? And granted it was a war and both sides were going for the throat but does Hana know that Starrk was the one who killed her father? And outside of their group do they have any idea about what most of the claimed individuals go through. I mean 15 years(whistles) I understand to a Shinigami or a Hollow that's nothing but hot damn if/when Aizen is defeated I honestly can't see a whole lot of the Arrancar being allowed to live, beyond Starrk,Harribel,Grimmjow, and Ulquiorra(despite the initial 5 year rape and just being a colossal dick deal, since he honestly did not see it that way and regretted his actions) who actually treat those they have claimed with dignity and kindness. I am still on the fence in regards to Szayel although you have gone a long way and continue to redeem and endear him to your readers. Now i would understand the parents feeling that no good would come from the kids knowing the full story but would it be possible that someone feeling particularly vindictive could spill the beans?

    Sorry if my questions bother you and you might have already answered a few of them in the previous installments, it's just that i am a curious fellow(if you recall any of my reviews from the previous stories) and these small things just kept nagging at me as I read. I greatly enjoy your stories and fully intend to read regardless of what route you take.

    -waits patiently for update-
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