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Reviews for The Real King

By : NovaAlexandria
  • From NAnderson on July 05, 2012
    Yay for updates and boo for teases of smutty fun time only to be interrupted by hatching eggs lol. But that was another WONDERFUL chapter. Can't wait to find out what the new baby looks like
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  • From Quetzalcotal on July 04, 2012
    fantastic chapter!!!!!!! im glad that h'tsu got his ass kicked! update soon!
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  • From ANON - DisPie Swag on June 24, 2012
    I've been keeping an eye on this story for ages and it hasn't disappointed me at any part, in fact, this story continues to get better and better the further we go! I’m so excited and can hardly wait until the next chapter comes out!
    Please keep it coming! You’re a spot-on writer and you’re amazingly good with your spelling, grammar and use of adjectives which really brings this to life. You do have a few mistakes but they're hardly noticeable at all. ;)

    Can’t wait for more, love DisPie Swag

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  • From ANON - clauds on June 24, 2012
    oh man that was an exciting read n funny when the bite took place lol well peace till next time :}
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  • From NAnderson on June 24, 2012
    Hahahahaha the picture of that cute little kitty-cat chomping down on someones hand like that! Drawing blood, being praised by "mommy" and everything... Oh it's to freaking funny! Another great update :)
    And CONGRATS on having a little boy to look after now :) I hope he lets you have some time to type ;)
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  • From ANON - Rangikun on June 23, 2012
    COngratulations!!! Otsukaresamadeshita!! (Thank you for the hard work in Japanese)

    Thank you for uploading a chapter even when you're busy with your baby boy.

    This is a sweet chapter~ And imagining Byakuya with a bruised pride is hillarious for me. It will be great if Renji was along, I am pretty sure he will be smitten with Cachorro & Hijastro as well. They sound adorable! *muacks*
    Pity Syazel, he has to worry about both adult(H'tsu) & Children. There are just soo many things on his mind and I am glad at least the girls are helping him out, he deserves it.

    Just a little request here, can you write a scene of Yoruchi & her interaction with the cubs? Well, Yoruichi is a Kitty and so are are the cubs, So i am curious of the way you portray them together. Not to mention that Yoruichi can start mentor-ing them on some skills.

    Thank you for uploading this chapter and take care!!
    ------^----
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  • From needlesandthread on June 22, 2012
    I love this story so much! I've been reading all morning and am finally caught up! You are talented at keeping me at the edge of my seat. I just wish H'tsu would come around and stop being such a sadistic freak, I feel horrible for Szayel. But I love the concept, hell, I burst with pride every time an egg hatches, lol. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - KyuRyu on June 22, 2012
    Congratz! And thanks for taking the time to put a chapter out even with a new baby! Still my top story at the moment, and one of the very few I read as chapters are put out rather than waiting until the story is completed.
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  • From ANON - Chrissy on June 21, 2012
    Great chapter, long too. I loved it. I was surprised (and very happy) to see you write about Ukitake in this one. He is one of my favorite characters other than Ichigo and Grimmjow. I was pleased that the cubs accepted him.

    Congratulations on your new baby, i wish you and your family lots of good health and happiness. Take care x
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  • From ANON - ShichiSan on June 21, 2012
    I love your story and I can't wait to read more. Just the way in which you describe things I can see it in my mind. Your level of skills amaze me. Someday I hope to right even half as well as you.
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  • From Quetzalcotal on June 21, 2012
    fantastic chapter!!!!! wonderful as always!! you'll have to tell us your sons name next chapter!!! I'm sure he's adorable! ^-^
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  • From ANON - claudea on June 08, 2012
    Yay! This story is neat didn't think it was gonna be good but my baby sis said it was good so read it n loved it hope u update sometime cause its good well peace till some other time:)
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  • From JOler on May 26, 2012
    Hon, I hope you are doing well. I've been worried because you've been gone so long without even a status update.

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  • From ANON - Kristin on May 14, 2012
    Wow another great couple of chapters. I love how they fixed up the vizards warehouse, it sounds pretty awesome. H'tsu pisses me off and I feel sorry for Szayel. I hope all is well with your pegnancy. Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From NAnderson on May 04, 2012
    Stellar chapter! You gotta love when you get so wrapped up in a story that your heart goes out to characters that you once wished fiery death to lol.
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