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Reviews for A Shifting of Life

By : Strailo
  • From Eloradanin on April 05, 2011
    Yay, and update, ^_^ now to wait for more.....Update soon Plz!!!!!!
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  • From JOler on April 05, 2011
    Love the chapter. I think it's great how Ulqui-san decides who gets honorifics and who doesn't (and presumably which ones to use).

    Two quick questions that need not be included in ficcie (just saying that to be safe hon)

    1. If Isshen (being the drama queen papa he is and loving to do everything in a super big way) were to throw Ichi-chan a sweet sixteen party (think current age is believed to be 15 so birthday could happen) what would Ichi-chan's and Ulqui-san's reactions be. I don't know if Ulqui-san has ever really experienced a party before (that he can remember at any rate).

    2. What would Ulqui-san do if anyone started getting too 'forward' with Ichi-chan (i.e. Urahara attempting to feel her up during an exam or maybe any of the guys getting too up close and personal while sparing with her so she can get rid of some frustration ... Or even suggesting that there are 'other' ways to work out that frustration)? Would he actually be viewed by Ichigo, and possibly several others, as a surprising knight in not so shining armor?
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 04, 2011
    Good work! Love how you're writing 'girl' ichigo! Hope the editing is goign well!
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  • From JOler on March 04, 2011
    Huggles, in regard to my name ... Mofaf1 ... Is me too.

    Sorry if I ruffled your feathers. The comments or suggestions are meant more as fodder for future ficcage not necessarily for use in this fic unless it seriously applies (like can see Ichi having a first ice time if Uruhara takes too long ... And most of the males hiding in the nearest thing to a bomb shelter that they can find.

    Hope any past (and future) suggestions will be viewed as plot bunnie bait for future ficcage inspiration.

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  • From miszxbrii on March 04, 2011
    *CACKLES* Wooooo That was hot~
    I very much enjoyed that and I'm even really into Yuri...Its a new thing for me to be reading XD
    Great job, hun!
    Can't wait for next chapter.
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  • From Adela on February 24, 2011
    Love it!!!!
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  • From JOler on February 24, 2011
    Hugs, glad you like the suggestions. Hope you don't mind the examples of what I was talking about - just wanted you to see what I was talking about in regard to possible humorous situations.

    Love the ficcie so far. Keep up the good work and post as quickly as you can. I'm really enjoying this story.
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  • From JOler on February 24, 2011
    I must say, I wonder how Ichi-chan is going to do when dealing with her first bout of the infamous PMS ... Her first PMS cravings ... And the end result of it all ... Her first monthly 'fun and joy' time (don't you love the sarcasm ... Guys think it's no big deal and just an annoying inconvenience we gave ourselves to irritate them ... ). I somehow think Ichigo will have a whole new perspective concerning that particular aspect of life when all is said and done.

    I must say, as proper as Byakuya is, I wonder if he has the hots for the sweet little strawberry now that she's a girl. It would be interesting to see him get just the tiniest bit flustered if Ichigo caught him covertly giving him 'the once over' a few times and decided to tease him a bit before cornering him on the subject. "ya hate me as a guy, but now that I'm a girl ya can't keep your eyes off me or your mind out of the gutter, what gives?"

    Hmmmm ... Ulqui sending back a message ... I understand wha Aisen-sama left now, the women here are insane. Even Grimmjow would be dealing with a permanent limp and begging them to stop for a little while so 'it' could get a few minutes of rest ... LOL
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  • From JOler on February 23, 2011
    Great cap. Wonder if Ikkaku will be the only one peeking in on the hot spring (or will others follow).

    Would love to see the reaction in Hueco Mundo if little Ulqui managed to send back a message several weeks later ... Still no cure but cross breeding has proven viable ... 15 confirmed pregnancies so far, still waiting for the other 85 to be tested. 100% conception rate so far....

    I could see Hueco Mundo becoming the greenest spot in the universe after that report ... LOL ... But would still love to see the reactions of each Arrancar as well as Tosen, Gin, and Aisen.
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  • From JOler on February 20, 2011
    Hope the last review didn't over step my bounds. I just figured various members of the twelfth wouldn't be able to resist the urge to find out about cross breeding either, but with enough females in SS who might be coaxed into volunteering to help with such research they wouldn't have to alter Ulqui any. I also thought it might strike Ichi-chan to see Ulqui a little panicked and confused by all the willing female attention and just how long it takes him to realize what they want from him. Would Ichi have to spell it out for the clueless Ulqui (wo is unfamiliar with human/shinigami flirting and mating practices) ... A few males might be interested in the cute little china-doll faced Arrancar as well.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2011
    Love this story and the way that you've written everyone! Kepp up the good work, please and thanks!
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  • From miszxbrii on February 20, 2011
    UWAHHHHH!! Unohana-sotaicho, she would make a lovely sotaicho, she's so awesome. Omgosh another wonderful chapter. Renji was just Lawl. I hope he gets time with Ichi-chan. *gigglesnort*
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  • From JOler on February 20, 2011
    I'm really enjoying this fic and I realize Ichigo is the focus but I'd honestly love to see the stunned terror in Ulqui's eyes if he suddenly became the primary 'love (or at least sex) interest of nearly every female in the Soul ... (along the lines of whispered rumors about size, stamina, etc where arranger are concerned and they all want to find out if it's true ... In person, not just verbal confirmation). Ichigo would probably have to point out to the stunned arrancar that for the moment he's probably the most envied male in the Soul Society ...

    Sorry, just thought it would be interesting if Ulqui ended up in a similar situation as Ichigo as far as the interest in cross-breeding, but in the opposite capacity (as the male half of the pairing - he'd have a better chance of getting one or more females preggers than several males all going after one female as Saiyel was intending). Imagine the jealousy of all the other Arrancars when he returns and reports his ordeal.
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  • From Adela on February 19, 2011
    I love your Unohana!
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  • From spooksies on February 15, 2011
    oooohhhh............goody goody goody......i want more!!

    got any?
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